This fan fic will be posted by me and hellfire...

Inside the puzzle
chapter 1

Our story begins with the end of Battle City. Yami-Bakura is exploring the corridors of the millennium puzzle. [Yami-Bakura]*I've been searching these chambers for some time now,I should be close to finding out the pharaoh's secrets.What's this door?*Bakura opens the door and walks in. [Yami-Bakura]*AHHHH..........f*** more doors*Bakura walks down the long hallway for a few steps,then his millennium ring warns him of danger. He turns around and sees Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight before him. Gaia lunges at him with his lances.
Bakura side steps it. [Yami-Bakura] *What a pitiful defense,I summon Dark Ruler Ha Des! Dark Ruler destroy Gaia with your fiend death touch!*BOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!
Gaia is destroyed. [Yami-Bakura] *Such a weak pathetic monster,that was a waste of my time,well I guess I should put my other millennium item to use.* He pulls the millennium eye from his pocket and puts it in. [Yami-Bakura] *AHHHHHHHHHHHH.....f***!

end of chapter 1

O.K. My turn!! before We go on with the story can some one tell me what the difference between a Rooster and a Chicken?My answer will be posted before chapter 4.

Chapter 2
Outside the puzzle

Yugi is at home watching Totally Spies on cartoon network. [Yami]What are you watching yugi? [Yugi]Totally spies. [Yami]*Not another stupid little girl cartoon. If I had my own body I'd slap the s*** out of you.* Tristan walks in. [Tristan]Hey yugi, Hey totally spies. [Yugi]You watch this too. [Tristan]Yeah! I haven't missed an episode yet, But this rerun is awsome, I totally want to f*** the red head. Yugi starts singing the theme form totally spies. [Yugi]Here we go......Here we goo...... We're totally spies......! [Tristan]SHUT UP YUGI! I'm trying to listen to the sexy red head. [Yugi]Fine I'll fuckin leave and home then! He walks out and gets a couple blocks away then comes back. [Yugi]Wait a minute this is my house, You leave a*******. [Yami]*What a f****ing dumd a**.* Then there's a knock at the door. Knock,Knock. [Yugi]Come in! [Joey]Hey yug, You here the news? Are you watching that stupid girly cartoon again? And I call you a friend. [Yugi]What news joey? [Joey]It's all over the news, Real Duel Monsters are attacking cities all over the world.

End of chapter 2

Great fic^^ I feel so sorry for Yami. I wish I could give him his own body, or a better body to reside in as a spirit. Keep up the good work^^

chapter 3

The Duel

[Yami Bakura] *That was painful.* Bakura gets up and starts walking down the hall some more when......[Yami Bakura] *My millennium eye tells me I should go this way.* He turns toward another door. [Yami Bakura]*I feel a powerful presence here.* So he opens the door and walks through, he then sees a familar face. [Yami Bakura] *How the hell did you get in here,Marik?*
[Yami Marik] *I'm not Marik,but you won't live long enough to find out what i am anyway, time to duel fool. [Yami Bakura] *Alright Marik or whatever,I'll go first. I summon Headless Knight in attack mode and I place two cards face down and end my turn. Your move Marik.* [Yami Marik] *I summon Drillago in defense mode and set four cards face down.* [Yami Bakura] *I place one more card face down and summon Earthbound Spirit in defense mode and end my turn.* [Marik] *I summon Revival Jam in defense mode.* [Bakura] *I summon The Gross Ghost of Fled Dreams in attack mode,attack me if you dare Marik.* [marik] *I activate Raigeki, say goodbye to all your monsters you fool,I switch Drillago to attack mode. Drillago attack his life points directly!* [Bakura] *HA HA HA HA HA! Thank you for helping me to destroy you.*

End of chapter 3

My turn!! O.k. first off lets answer the question from the begining of chapter 2 and the answer the difference between a rooster and a chicken is a rooster has nut's on his chin and a chicken does not!!! Thank you now on with the show!!!!!!!!

Out side of the puzzle part 2

Chapter 4

Everyone runs outside to see what's happening. [Tristan]Man look at all the duel monsters. [Joey]Thery're destroying the place. [Yugi]Cool!! Real duel monsters I'm going to go play with them! [Joey]No,Yug come back here! [Tristan]He's gone joey,You can't catch yugi,Besides this is boring I'm going to go hook up with your sister. [Joey]T R I S T A N!! Come here you perv I'm going to kick your a**,Ya jerk! Joey cases tristan instead of stoping yugi. Mean while yugi walks up to a twin-headed king,And asks. [Yugi]Hey king rex do you want to play with me? I like you,Your purple like barney. Then king rex trys stepping on yugi. Just then yami takes over and moves out of the way. [Yami]What the f**k are you doing yugi? That king rex would've killed you,Those aren't nice duel monsters they're evil. [Yugi]But yami I wanted to play with them. [Yami]*What a fu****g retard.* [Yami]let's find the others yugi. They run off to go find joey and tristan.

End of chapter 4

Chapter 5

The Duel: part 2

[Yami-Bakura]* The end is near Marik,for now I'll summon a monster that will bring your destruction,I summon Dark Necrofear in defense mode and I activate Destiny Board! You have four more turns before you are destroyed then I'll send your spirit to the shadow realm. I end my turn.* [Marik](why isn't this fool attacking me)*I activate Card destruction,but i'll stop it with Magic Jammer,now i'll play monster reborn and summon The Winged Dragon of Ra,then i'll sacrifice drillago and Revival Jam and add their power to Ra,then i'll equip Ra with two black pendants raising his attack to3100! Now Ra attack his Dark Necrofear!BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! Now i'll say goodbye to Ra for now and you take 1000 life points because of my black pendants!HA HA HA HA!*[Yami Bakura] *Now destiny board reveals it's first letter and the letter is I,now i'll activate Dark Sanctuary and i'll also activate The Dark door and summon the Portrait's secret and then i'll activate Ultimate offering and pay 1000 life points so i can sacrifice portrait's secret to summon Dark Ruler Ha Des and then i'll summon sangan then sacrifice sangan to keep Dark Sanctuary in play,and now Dark Ruler will attack your life points directly. I end my turn.* [Marik] *I activate Pot of greed and draw two cards(Damn nothing I can use)then i'll end my turn.* [Yami Bakura] *The third letter is N. Now I activate Soul Release and remove Winged Dragon of Ra from the duel. See Marik I learned from our last duel and and got rid of your strongest monster,only two turns remain until your demise. Now i'll set a monster face down and pay 500 life points to summon Dark Jeriod,then i'll sacrifice it for Dark Santcuary and end my turn.* [marik] *I summon Newdoria and attack your face down monster.* [Yami Bakura] *Reveal face down monster Jowels of Dark Demise and activate it's special ability now your newdoria is mine and that stops your attack.* [marik] *I end my turn.* [Yami Bakura] *The next letter is A. Now I summon Goblin king in attack mode,then i'll sacrifice it to keep Dark Sanctuary in play and end my turn.* [marik] *I summon a second Drillago in defense mode and end my turn.* [Yami Bakura] *You fool! Now the last letter is L! I win,now I banish you to the shadow realm! HAA HA Ha Ha HA!* Then Bakura walks on and sees.................

End of Chapter 5

Chapter 6

The search for the truth

Yami-yugi soon finds joey chasing tristan around. [Yami-yugi]What are you two doing? We need to find out what's going on. Then kaiba's blue-eyes white jet lands in front of Yami-yugi. [Kaiba]Wheeler you dog what are you doing,chasing your lover? [Joey]Come over here and say that rich boy. Tristan grabs joey and holds him back. [Tristan]Let it go joey. [Kaiba]A dog like you isn't worth the effort. Besides I came to talk to yugi,not the fan club. [Yami-yugi]What is it you want kiaba? [Kiaba]I want to know if you can tell me what the f**k is going on here? [Yami-yugi]I don't know kaiba,your guess is as good as mine. Just then the millennium puzzle start glowing and little yugi gets sucked in. [yugi]Pharaoh! help m......AHHHH!! [Yami]Yugi! Yugi wakes up inside the puzzle. [Yugi]What happened,I'M INSIDE THE PUZZLE!! Yugi gets up and yells. [Yugi]PHARAOH! Hey pharaoh,you here? Hmm....I guess not there,All well I guess I'll look for him. Yugi starts walking down the halls and sees nothing but doors all over. He opens one of the doors. [Yugi]I guess I'll start with this door.

End of chapter 6

This is interesting fic your SPAM post caught my attention HellFire lol!

this is hellfire thought it would thanks

It's Yami_raven's turn to write some more I'll see if he will later before he's gotto go to work!!

Bakura's discovery
Chapter 7

[Yami-Bakura]What the f**k? I must be where the pharaoh's short term memories are stored,Why else would I see this. Bakura sees joey losing a duel to kaiba. [Yami-Bakura]This is pointless I'll just move on. Bakura walks down further and opens another door. [Yami-Bakura]Whats this? Bakura sees little yugi opening a door and walking in. [Yami-Bakura]So that little ba*ta*d is in here too is he! Looks like I should follow him for a while. Bakura then follows yugi through the door. [Yugi]Pharaoh! where is he? Bakura keeps stalking yugi. [Yugi]I need to get out of the puzzle and find out whats going on,besides it's almost time for the power puff girls. [Yami-Bakura]"f**k this". Then yami-bakura sneaks up on yugi and cuts his throat. [Yami-Bakura]Just die already iddiot boy. Meanwhile outside the puzzle. [Yami]YUGI! Oh!no......He's gone. [Kaiba]Yugi your talking crazy,how can you be dead when you're right in front of me,and why the f**k do you keep talking in the third person? [Yami]I'm Yami,You idiot why the f**k doesn't anyone get that when I'm taller and not such a little moron like yugi,but unfortunately we share the same body cause I'm only a spirit.

End of chapter 7

Yami's rage

chapter 8

[Yami-bakura]So far all found in here was,where yami hides his porn collection,for some reason he has alot of naked pic's of this shadow godess girl. Then yami jumps in the puzzle. [Yami]So your the one who killed yugi. I needed his body so I could save the world and now he's dead,his body is useless to me,You'll pay for this bakura. [Yami-bakura]What are you gonna to do? Send the power puff girls after me? [Yami]Give me some credit I'm not moron boy yugi,anyways you ready to duel bakura? [Yami-bakura]Why should I duel a so called pharaoh who can't remember his own name? [Yami]My name? My name is Yami. [Yami-bakura]Think again pharaoh,I know your true name. Your true name is Atemu! [Yami]Atemu? Yes...yes that is my name,I remember now,it's all so clear. Then bakura runs up to pharaoh while he's busy spacing out and drop kicks in the teeth and knocks him on his ***. Then yami starts glowing. [Atemu]I'm Atemu the great pharaoh,You shall pay for your crimes tomb robber!.............Sorry thats all untill Yami_Raven finish's chapter 9 and either ends it or writes more.Oh! shadow godess that was already writen in the story before you posted that I just got some time to post the rest of the story.
End of chapter 8

LOL^^ Why does Atemu have naked pics of me? Wierd, I only gave those to you and High Priest Seto. Guess he stole some from the High Priest, I only hope it wasn't from Yugi that he got pics of me cause that would be freaky. Anyways, can't wait to read more.

This is pretty good! YAY! Yugi's dead! I hope Atemu doesn't meet the same fate. Good fic guys, I hope to read more soon!

Chapter 9

Atemu VS. Bakura Ryou

[Bakura]Bring it on pharaoh. [Atemu]Lets make this a shadow game,the rules are simple loser gets ejected from the puzzle and can't re-enter for all eternity.[Bakura]Let's go Atemu,You are foolish pharaoh to challenge me. [Atemu]I'll start it's time to duel ryou. First I'll set two cards face down and summon big shield gardna in defense mode. [Ryou]I summon archfiend soldier in attack mode and I'll increase his attack by a thousand points with axe of dispair. Archfiend soldier destroy his big shield gardna! now I'll set three cards face down and end my turn. [Atemu]Now I activate the magic card monster reborn and bring my big shield gardna back in defense mode and I summon beta the magnet warrior in defense mode as well. [Bakura]Well I activate pot of greed and draw two cards. Now I set two more cards face down and summon newdoria in defense mode,Now Archfiend soldier attack his beta the magnet warrior!
End of chapter 9

Chapter 10
The Final Chapter

Then walls of the puzzle start shaking and bakura's millennium ring disappears. [Bakura]What the ****? Then after a purst of light,Atemu and bakura find themselves outside the puzzle. They see a man dressed in all black and a trench coat wearing the millennium ring and carring the millennium rod. [Bakura]Who the **** are you? Then before the man answers,he slashs atemu's throat with a daggar. [Yami_Raven]Well that's one dead pharaoh,and your next tomb robber. [Bakura]Well guess it's time to duel stranger. [Yami_Raven]No,Ryou it's time to fight. Then raven runs up and roundhouse kicks bakura in the face. Bakura flies ten feet back and lands on top of a car. Bakura jumps up and pulls out a dagger. [Bakura]I'll kill you! Then he runs and swings the dagger at him,but yami_raven sidesteps out of the way as he's pulling out his katana takes a swing. After what seens to be a 5 minutes pause, bakura falls to the ground dead. Yami raven walks up to atemu's dead body grabs atemu's deck and takes the god cards, then leaves and disappears into the shadows.

THE END?

few things wrong there helfire

first of all that last part was sick

if the ring had dissapeared then yami bakura wud have become normal bakura but normal bakura is shy so y wud he atk someone and he'd probably be crippled from the kick in to the car seeing as though hes normal and yami b cant take the pain to keep normal bakura alive

i did like the bit about the round house kick though that was good

first off it was only yami-bakura the spirit of the ring in the puzzle not regular bakura,so no he wouldn't turn into sissy boy bakura. besides i wrote the fic and it don't have to make sense cause your a dumb **** that doesn't pay attention. if you read the beginning it says the story begins after yugi beats marik at battle city,when Yami-Bakura (the spirit of the millennium ring) reemerges in the puzzle after everyone marik trapped in the shadow realm returned. so there for your logic don't mean dick. :lol: :wacko: :P

calm down mate its only a fic

i did like it i was just pointing some stuff out that i didnt get

no need to fly off the handle lol

That was him being NICE So you should be happy!!!!!


But next time we won't be NICE That's to say I will comment and not be NICE

HUH?

Soon i'll be writing the follow up to this fic

The Follow up is coming some so what you going to do when the Serial Killa's run wild on you :ph43r: