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Title: A duel I pulled from my story


Lord_of_Thunder - July 22, 2006 10:03 PM (GMT)
Amy: Duel me Tom, or all these pathetic little children die!

Tom: Fine, I'll duel you...but remember, it is your mistake if your soul gets taken by the orichalcoes.

Amy: Whatever...I'll start off, if you don't mind. I summon Fairy of Flames (1000/1000) in attack mode, then one card facedown, your move Tom...

Tom: I'll start by playing the Blue-Eyes Ojama's special ability, discarding it to bring a Blue-Eyes White Dragon to my hand. Then I summon Kaibaman, then offer him to summon the Blue-Eyes White Dragon! Now he will destroy your fairy!

Amy: Not so fast, I play negate attack! Now your attack stops right in it's tracks...

Tom: Fine, I will play a facedown and end my turn.

Amy: Heehee, this will be easy. Now I summon Fairy of the Wind (1000/1000), then play swords of revealing light! Now you can't attack for three whole turns! Your move.

Tom: I play Monster Reborn to bring back kaibaman, then offer him up again to summon another Blue-Eyes white Dragon, then I will end my turn.

Amy: Your not making this any fun...but that just shortens the time it will take to beat you. I play Fairy Union. If I have at least two fairy monsters on my side of the field, I can bring two level four or lower fairy monsters from my deck to my hand! So I bring Fairy of the Earth then Fairy of the Wind! Now I will summon Fairy of the earth (1000/1000) then end my turn.

Tom: Hmm, I hope your ready for a big play. I play monster reincarnation! Now i simply discard a card from my hand to bring one from the graveyard back to my hand. So I discard Beckoning Light from my hands to bring Blue-Eyes Ojama back to my hand. Now i play the card Precious Cards from Beyond, then play Blue-Eyes Ojama's ability again to bring blue-eyes to my hand, then I offer up both my blue-eyes to summon the one from my hand! Then I draw two cards thanks to precious cards from beyond, then I play my facedown card, Revival of the Sacrificed. I can only play this when I sacrificed monsters, which I just did, and it let's me bring them back, then I have to discard cards from my hand equal to the number of revived monsters, so since I have two cards I can bring back both blue-eyes! Then I end my turn.

Amy: You think that's a big play? Bringing out three worthless dragons? Please. Now I summon Fairy of the Water! You know what will happen next turn, so this is your last move.

Tom: I play pot of greed, so now I draw two cards. Then I will play one of them, Spell Guide! Now I pay half my lifepoints to search my deck for one normal spell card, then I set it on the field and I can play it next turn. Then I play one facedown and end my turn.

Amy: Well, I warned you what would happen this turn. I now offer up all my fairies, then I can summon the Queen of Elemental Fairys! (4000/4000) Sure my sowrds are gone, but does it matter? Queen, attack his Blue-Eyes White Dragon now! Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you that my queen can attack all monsters on your side of the field.

Tom: Not like it matters, I play negate attack! I'm sure you know what it does.

Amy: Of course I do, I'm not an idiot. I will play the card terraforming! Now I can bring one Field Spell card from my deck and add it to my hand, so I choose seal of orichalcoes! I didn't want to play this card, but I can't risk my Queen being destroyed by the Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon. If your wondering how I knew that was your plan is because you summon that beast in every duel, so I know your strategy. So now I play the seal of orichalcoes! Now I end my turn...

Tom: You think you know my deck that well? Obviously you don't, because my facedown isn't polymerization. I figured you would think it was though, so I picked out a different card from my deck, one that no one has seen before...

Amy: What are you talking about? I know your deck I have seen you in countless duels.

Tom: I already said, I never played it before this, Delta Attacker! Now if I have three normal monsters with the same name all face-up on my side of the field, they can all attack you directly!

Amy: What?!?

Tom: It was your mistake playing the orichalcoes at the last minute, plus I warned you in the beginning. Blue-Eyes White Dragon's, attack her directly and end the duel!

Amy: AHHHHHHH!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!

I think you know what happens next. So rate the duel you guys, and leave comments, because i have other ones I might want to post if this one was good.

Ichigo - July 23, 2006 02:26 AM (GMT)
7/10. It was a little fast paced and at times it was hard telling what was going on. Plus, the scrip from is kinda of annoying. But I quite liked it. If you don't mind me asking, what's your story about?

(PS- I'm also writing a yugioh story. It takes place at an academy. So far it has 18 chapters. I started writing it before I even knew anything about yugioh gx other than it existed. So don't say that I copied it! T_T)

But anyway, I'd like to read your story from the beginning.

Lord_of_Thunder - July 23, 2006 02:51 AM (GMT)
The story is about the Orichalcoes being revived, and those two people were orichalcoes users, but Tom was turning good and Amy didn't like that so Tom was walking past a park with kids and then Amy came in and trapped the kids, then threatened to kill them. I am at chapter 12 barely, and right now Tom is turned completely good, but still has the orichalcoes card for no reason. The new evil boss of the orichalcoes is a guy named Kloug, and he is using the orichalcoes to revive the people he loved and lost in an explosion. It is kind of interesting, but it is completely rated R, I even had to clean this duel up.

Ichigo - July 23, 2006 06:02 AM (GMT)
That's a shame. I really would have liked to read it. Do you think you could try sending the first chapter in a PM? (Or is it too big to fit in one?)

Lord_of_Thunder - July 23, 2006 03:34 PM (GMT)
I'll try, but I kind of lost it after typing the duel...well, not really, I know where it is but I don't know where it is. Point is I will try to when I find it.




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