under the (what is the most romantic thing you ever done) forum, i mentioned that i wrote poems to girls. also, hellfire wanted me to post one; so, here's one of my many romantic poems i've written in the past. it could probably be a song too.



Sleep with all your lights off,
you are really pure,
you are secure.
Don't make up, our history,
because you have given, so much to me.
I will not let you down girl.

Sleep with all your sheets on,
you are so happy,
you sleep soundly.
Don't let him, make you feel sad,
but if he does, I'll make you glad.
I love you more than the world.

I have had, a lonely heart.
I have felt, so far apart.
I hope that you can see now.
I have thought, of you a lot.
I hope love, does not depart.
You are the best girl in town.

Sleep with all your teddies,
where you're in control,
bearing your soul.
Don't be scared, of your feelings,
if you have some, come please tell me.
I'll be glad to hear you out.

Sleep with all your friends gone,
bearing your matress,
with happiness.
Don't let things, make you feel down,
if that occurs, I'll come around.
I'll be there without a doubt.

We're not quite that old,
but the older we are, the more my love grows.
It's not cool to go take these chances,
to ones who'll fake romances.
Just come with me, I'll love you,
and I know that, you will too.

I likes I likes a lot ................ Nice poem

That was me I forgot to log in its too early for me

damn my computer crashed whilst i was replying so sorri if it comes up twice
anyhu i love this poem :D its beautiful!!

WELL I WOULD SAY ITS GOOD IF I LIKED THAT SORT OF THING BUT I DONT SOOOOOOOOOO.................... ;) ^_^

thanks guys for your replies, this had a lot of thought to it, and rhyming was very very difficult to do! hope i hear more replies about it, and i'll post another one of my old poems very soon.