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Title: Mia
Description: the lonely and confused


flinchpaw - March 24, 2008 01:26 AM (GMT)
Name: Flinchpaw


Age: 1 year


Gender: female


Appearence: flinchpaw is white with black paws. She is not built to fight, so she tries to stay away from confrontation. She is a good runner and hunter though. She has a black stripe down her back. She sometimes has a brownish tint to her fur, because she loves to roll in the dust. Her tongue is also somewhat spotted. If you look into her eyes, you can easily get creped out. She has ice blue eyes with a little brown. She is about the size of a timber wolf. She is good at staying hidden, so you will only see her if she wants you too.


Personality: Like I said she tries to stay out of fights, because she is not very strong. She will join in on a fight if somebody she is close to asks her too. She is very hyper when with someone she knows. She is also very submissive. She is also very cautious until she gets to know someone. She is alone but she usually likes it that way. She is also very wary of humans. She is aomewhat immature but she is mature when she feels like it. Some of her past is reflected in her eyes, like the pain of losing her family. She is also a little ditsy at times.


History: Her parents were killed by a hunter who thought it would look cool to have wolf pelts hanging around his house. Her two siblings were killed too. This happened when she was 10 months old. After that she mistakingly went into another wolves territory and she was run off (luckily with only a few scratches), this caused her to be wary of others territories.


If I missed something (which I probably did) then tell me.

Zine Aldasia - March 27, 2008 03:15 PM (GMT)
I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to you. >.< Do forgive me.

1. Your account name needs to match your character's name. You can either change her name to Flinchpaw, or you'll need to ask an admin to fix your name.

2. Make sure you have enough sentences in each section. As a minimum, you need 10 for appearance, 10 for personality, and 20 for history.

Once you've written more for the sections, give the thread a bump and I'll come look at it again. B)




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