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Title: Ozarku
Description: Extinct Existence


Ozarku - November 24, 2007 09:11 AM (GMT)
Name:Ozarku
Age: 4
Gender:male
Appearance:
Ozarku's structure took after his species long died out cousin, the dire wolf. His whole body was abnormally more large and muscular than any other wolf he had met. When encountering him, you can tell his muscles where always tense as if ready for a battle at seconds notice. Running out of his hind end was a beautiful black tail that moved in the wind like leaves on a tree. Not only was his body large but his head was too, which was nice for the fact his teeth where more massive and seemed to be able to crush anything he chewed with ease. On top of his large head lay the ears of a normal wolf. His legs where proportionally shorter causing him to travel slower and not a very good hunter. Seeing Ozarku in the wild was a very ghastly sight. Wether under the moon and in dim star light, or in the suns radiance, his black coat gave off an ominous evil aura. The aura was so over powering that you couldn't make out his brown, majestic undercoat. When facing him you saw on the left side of his face, a socket where his once beautiful eye resided. The lost eye was strangely formed, if you could have looked at it, it would have been black in the center, and around it blue but freely formed like a splash on the ground. His only eye left was white. This cause most to believe that he was blind. This was not the fact. His nose in the winter a pink rosey color and when the warmer months came black as his pelt.

Personality:
Ozarku is shrouded in intelligence, mystery, and solitude. His state of mind is always that of keeping out of everything that doesn't pertain to him. He is very mystifying, even to himself. He himself sometimes wonders what goes on with himself, as if his own mind keeps things hidden from him. This terrified him at times. His intelligence is his most useful trait. He plans every move out, possible out comes, and everything there is about a situation before making a decision to do anything. He loves solitude, that is until he actually gets it. Once reaching solitude he longs for a pack, or just a companion to keep him company. This makes things very complicated with him.

History:
Ozarku lived a normal yea of puppyhood with his 2 older sisters, mother and father. That was until the day one of his sisters went out on a hunt for small catches. She stayed gone an unusually long 2 days. When she came back she was foaming at the mouth and seemed to have been in recent fights. As soon as she walked i no the area where he and his family lay she went crazy and attacked them. She had unusual strength and speed and made quick work of all of his family besides him. He shamefully ran off as fast as he could and left his family there to be killed by his own sister.

After running for many moons, stopping only to drink water and scavenge of other animals leftovers, he fell unconscience. After sleeping many moons he awoke from a wonderful dream. He had the sudden urge to hunt, to kill something. What could he kill though? He had never hunted alone. Deciding that his instincts must kick in he put his nose to the ground and started to smell something out. The first thing he smelt was an unusal smell to him. He didn't know better so he followed the scent. When he reached the end of the scent it was only a dead corpse. Deciding to eat what he could he walked up to it and started to tear a piece of the meat away. Right as he pulled his first chunk, a wolverine came up and swiped at his face. Ozarku yelped in pain. The swipe caused a deep gash, a mixture of blood and yellow fluids fell to the ground. His eye felt like it was on fire. Knowing that he stood no chance at high weight and condition he turned and ran as fast as his dire wolf like legs would carry him. Ozarku found himself on the lands of a pack. There he was accepted and stayed, learning everything he didn't learn because of his family's death. After living a short period of peace, rabies once again struck home, and as before, he left his pack.From that day forth he promised himself to be in complete solitude.

Zine Aldasia - November 25, 2007 04:25 PM (GMT)
Hello, and welcome to SotW! I'm Zita, I'll be your app mod on this flight. ^_^

APPEARANCE: Good, except I'm confused about the description of the eye he lost (free iris? what?) and I'm not sure if his nose can change color. >.< Have you read about that somewhere before?


PERSONALITY: One more sentence and you're good. :)

HISTORY: Four more sentences. Could you clarify why he lost his eye? It seems kind of random and out-of-nowhere the way you have it written. What caused it to burst like that?

Ozarku - November 25, 2007 08:54 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Zine Aldasia @ Nov 25 2007, 04:25 PM)
Hello, and welcome to SotW! I'm Zita, I'll be your app mod on this flight. ^_^

APPEARANCE: Good, except I'm confused about the description of the eye he lost (free iris? what?) and I'm not sure if his nose can change color. >.< Have you read about that somewhere before?


PERSONALITY: One more sentence and you're good. :)

HISTORY: Four more sentences. Could you clarify why he lost his eye? It seems kind of random and out-of-nowhere the way you have it written. What caused it to burst like that?

about the eye iris thing.. i wasn't really sure how to put it. but my wolf hybrid has this beautiful blue eye. It has a pupil in the center, and around it the color is blue but the shape is weird its like a splash on the ground. (say like you spill water on the ground.) and I read on some website that in colder months the wolves nose change to a pinkish color due to lack of warmth and sunlight. and I'll clear up the eye lost thing. =]

**there fixed it see how you like**

Zine Aldasia - November 26, 2007 03:05 AM (GMT)
It's all good! Welcome to the game! :P

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