I am a fallen angel,
My wings are broken and bent
I was thrown out from sky
To the ground I was sent

I begged for them to let me stay
I pleaded as I cried
But they still threw me out
Saying that I deserved to die

I screamed for help as I fell
But no one heard my pleas
And if anyone did
They where to busy to rescue me

I was thrown out for no reason
They were just tired of me
And as I fell through the clouds
I was blinded and now I cannot see

I used to have friends up there
But now I am alone
I used to be their Queen
But they tore me from my throne

As I lie here in the rain
I start to cry
The reason I am doing this
Is because I know I’m going to die

As I lie here dying
I think about what I’ll miss
I am but fourteen
I haven’t even had my first kiss

I feel my life fading
As I lie here in the rain
I am losing feeling in my body
I can barely feel the pain

As I take my last breath
Feeling wet and cold
I long for just one thing
Someone to love and hold

But I will never have that
For now I have died
The only thing I wish is
That someone would have cried, for me


Comments and crits are loved!


xX~Kuro~Xx

so saad! TT_TT but I like it. ^.^ yesh I do. I like everything, how about you? (<--silly rhyme that isnt very good)

Okay, I just LOVE this smiley, so I have to say..

Write one about someone getting flushed down the toliet! :toilet:

lol, you all know you love me, so dont hide it! Everyone loves Zuzu! :lol:

But anyways, awesome poem. At the moment I cant think of how to make it better. But its good! Better than I can write. And keep at it! yaaaay Kuro!

That... depressed me o_O But it's very good!!!! Good job Kuro!! :D

~Niccy

Thanks everyone!

Awesome!

I think I started on this site when I was 11 (I'm 14 now) so I found a poem I wrote back then.

One day you will be a star,
a singer or a writer,
and you will get your own car.

One day you will be a star,
a tourist or a hard worker,
and I know you won't be far.

One day you will be a star,
even if you are not,
you will and are,
a star in my eyes


XD
I was a talented writer
even though it took me a while to learn how to roleplay XD

Wow, that's good Jess!

Thanks :D

I found some more of mine! I posted these with Shania;

My thought about the Amarth(for Skah, isa'fea, and Din'dea);

In my heart, my life is here
in a place that is very near
thought the Amarth have much to learn
I have many words to say and burn
Even thought I may be in a nice pack
the Amarthcan just sit on a tack
because their cruelity reeks
and being mad as I speak
The amarth may be strong
but sometimes, they can be wrong
for the Isa'fea is one not to be messed with
because the Amarth's evil is just a myth
and there are many survivors from their packland
and I think they are weak and they are not so grand

Anyone can use it. You may replace 'Isa'fea' with Skah or Din'dea. If you do use it, please put (By Shania) Anyone can use the second one

My Home....(for loners)

I have no home
a place of my own
out here all alone
here to grumble and moan
Days pass and I see
the loners go as they please
I never get the urge to say
what I want to do and play
I have been here and heard the tone
but I have no place to be my home...


Evil Shall Rule(for Amarths);

The darkness has come
and everything is done
to the surrounding packs
never looking behind their backs
to see the danger which is near
which they never listen with their ears
Evil shall rule
while the others drool...

Silent days(For the Din'dea)

As I pass through this grass
everything reminds me of the past
the trees, the ground, the sun itself
for every wolf has a true pelt
My slyness may be true
but still, I can feel blue
My feelings are hidden behind my eyes
in the truth made of pure glass
Silent Days pass on
while I am moving along


True Heart(for the Skah or loners);

Maybe a day may pass by
but none cane hear my cry
My past gives me a weakness
while the others seem to rest
Everyone I've met seems to not care
but everyone here seems to follow the white hare
When I meet he right varg
they will have a True Heart....

Friends(for everyone, but dedicating this to the Isa'fea);

We have known eack other for years
always share the truth with tears
You have always been here for me
even through sorrow, or times of glee
You have never left my side
even when your pack seems to slide
I know we are friends
to the very end

I dedicated these poems to some packs. Everyone can use them, even if they are not in that pack.

This is one I wrote on my account 'Star and Daisy'

The Peace Dove(For Skah Pups);

The Peace dove is coming our way
and never will they see
the darkness of the day.
Even though I may be small
and maybe weak
I can still make a loud call
The battle that rages on
Skah and Amarth
the words never race along
The Skah will win
with Tor on our side
and the Amarth will never grin
about their toughness again....

Nothing stays the Same(for everyone);

Seasons come and seasons go
nothing stays the same
life goes on and everyone grows
nothings stays the same
Why does things have to change
when something seems so fine
though life can seem so strange
through the golden vine
of life, the past, and the fame
because Nothing Stays the Same...

you all can use them if you want :]