Name: Zoreem rascur
Meaning of name: The one who stalks
Gender:Male
Age:Four


Appearence: He is the color of rust that has been stained with blood. He is tall in stature. His long sturdy legs can carry him long distances. He can run very fast too. His long thick ears, can hear lots of sounds. His long thick tail flys through the wind, but gives and eerie feeling. He has black paws and the rest of him is rust red. He bears no scars, for none have challenged him for now.His eyes are of bright yellow, that see through your soul if he stared at you. He has a thick build around his shoulders and torso. His paws are small for his size but, his claws are very sharp. He has this one strange marking across his tail though. It is a black marking, but it is not of fur. His looks are grim, but that doesn't account for his attitude.


Personality: He is strange in many ways. You can never tell when his next move is. When he finds a mate, he'll only take the best mate there is. He'll turn his nose up to anyone he doesn't see that is fit to be worthy enough to fight him. He gets angry whenever he loses a match. He won't take any simpathy from anyone after his lose in a match. He'll bite and snap at anyone who tries to comfort him. He joins a pack for position, . He rarely howls, if he does, its only to get attention from another pack. He stalks both prey and respect. He's secluded somewhere in hiding. He can be hard to describe when you meet him in person. Most likely if that wolf is a she, he'll treat with that wolf with respect. If the wolf is a he, he'll be hard to think about because with male wolves, never know when he'll strike.He mostly thinks about his daily life. He wonders what he'll get to hunt, where he travels every day, when he'll join a pack. Always wonders about his life. He himself never knows whats going to happen. He wonders what life will offer him and all sorts. He wouldn't really be much of a good alpha. He jokes around too much.


History: His birth wasn't a pleasent one. He had only two survivng siblings, a brother named Rad and a sister named Utada. The birth was too rough on the mother and it killed her. It left three other siblings stillborn. Only Zoreem and his two other siblings were left. The father tried to take care of them as much as he could but it didn't work. By the time they were a year old, their father died of wolf attack. The three lived to see the day because thier father hid them. They were parentless now. They wandered and learned to hunt by themselves. The group soon split up. And Zoreem was on his own. He learned the ways of the wolf, and didn't like it fully. He always howled for no reason. And then a wolf much bigger that he was said "if you don't shut up, i'm gonna make you." He knew what those words ment and stopped howling. He wandered, looking for company. Then one day he found his brother Rad. Except that he was injured and bleeding. He was rushed to a pack to get a healer to help him but, he was never seen again. He always wondered what happened to him. He knew he was alright. He could smell in the air that it was his brother. After that he met up with his sister several times and told her what had happened. She was shocked, but knew he was alright.

When he was two years old, he took the chance to breed. Hze tried muiltiple times but he never got one. He waited for the day he could get a mate and got one. She was breed and they waited. When she gave birth however, it didn't end happily. She died and her pups were stillborn.
He was disapointed, and made a promise that he would only chose the best mates, so this didn't happen. He wandered for days looking for his brother and sister. He found his sister several times, but never found his brother. His sister told him that he was fine and that he had traveled beyond the borders of the farthest territorys. He didn't think about crossing the borders, he would just wait patienly.

Out of your 20ish sentences for personality there are about 15 for breeding. Your wolf cannot be made just to breed with other wolves. You need to change his personality so it is not centered around him being obsessed with breeding. Otherwise length is good.

~Niccy

Your application cannot be accepted. It does not follow the rules of the site. You cannot make a wolf centered around breeding. What you need to do is change or take out this part of your personality:

This is part of your profile is too focused on breeding making your application as a while seem as though you made this character just to find a mate and breed. You need to change it. If you need additional help I'll help.

~Niccy

Good. Accepted :)