Ok, I am posting my character here because I can't seem to anywhere else.

Name: Raul Guerrero
Gender: Male
Age: 2 seasons
Appearance: The most handsome wolf ever-seen lurked between the dark of the trees. His coat was shining in the light of the moon. It was hard to see, but he was grey, brown, cream and a little bit of black. His eyes were like gold. They were spooky in the dark because if you couldn’t see his coat, then you would probably think it were a pair of eyes floating in the air. His build was strong and powerful from what could be seen. His legs were full of muscle and his head was massive. His ears were pricked up-wards, listening to the crickets sing and the water falling. Raul Guerrero yawned and the size of his teeth were reveiled. His canines were about 5 inches long and they had a sharp tip. His other teath were big and shiny. He had a big bushy tail, with all his colours mixed into one. His paws were big and his claws looked long and sharp.
Personality: Raul Guerrero was a cheaky and proud wolf. He was always at the top of his game and if he wasn’t, he fought to get it back. He is very charming and very very seductive. You know how looks can kill? Well if not, you haven’t met Raul! His size gives away just how powerful he can be. Raul Guerrero is a warrior. There is only one way to look at this brute and it is with respect. He is a ‘no-second chances’ sort of wolf. You get one warning with Raul and if you over step the mark, you’re a goner for sure. Don’t let this full you into thinking he is the most heartless wolf you have ever met! Because although he has a sheild built around him, his heart does beat. Will you be the one to break that sheild?
History: Raul Guerrero’s father had been killed in a mighty fight and Raul blamed himself and ran away at the age of 7 months.

An example: Raul Guerrero was strangely the only pup born of the alphas for that year. It was a cold winter’s night when Raul was born. The little coloured pup was always getting into mischief as he had no other pups the same age as him for anything to do. Raul’s mischief got the better of him. His father had often talked about the ‘forbidden forest’ in which he was never to go. Raul, thinking that nothing could hurt him, decided to wake up in the night and go to that forest.

He crept out from beneath his mother’s paw and out into the open. He walked strongly across to the forest. It didn‘t look so scarry to Raul so, he went further and further in. All this time, there were a pair of eyes following the coloured pup everywhere. Whenever Raul moved, the eyes slithered forward another couple of metres. Raul was so far gone into the forest that he was looking left, right, forwards and backwards. He was spinning around to try and get out. But suddenly, the eyes jumped out in front of the stranded pup. It was another wolf. The wolf was pure black and it stood as tall as the trees. Raul howled for his father and he came running. But it was too late. By then, more wolves emerged from their hiding places. They were attacking his territory. Raul’s dad gave the warning howl and the warrior wolves came soon afterwards. A huge battle went on and on. In the end, his father didn’t make it. Raul made his way back to his mother and said he was sorry. He said he didn’t want to cause any trouble, he just wanted to go into the forest to play and explore.

A few months had passed since then and Raul Guerrero was getting bigger and stronger, even if he didn’t realize it. He lived in silence from that day forward. Only ever communicating when he really had to. The next day, a few of the male wolves from the pack ganged up against him. They said that it was his fault about his fathers’ death and that if it weren’t for him, his father would still be alive. Scarred of what they might do, Raul Guerrero ran away.

There is only one problem with this application. You've got length, description, detail, the only little thing is that the description and personality shouldn't be written "in character" quite so much. You don't have to describe Raul moving or doing things, just what he looks like and acts like.

Here's an example of another app:
here

The last thing is that your wolf's name and your character account name need to match so things don't get confusing. You'd either need to rename your wolf or ask an Admin to change the account name for ya. :) Other than that, like I said, this is a good first app, and were it not for the style and name discrepancies you'd be in. :D

Welcome to SotW! :lol:

Thanks for the tips. I would like Raul Guerrero to be his name so I'll ask the admin for a new name.