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Title: Magic


magic - October 7, 2007 06:10 PM (GMT)
name:magic

age:4

gender:brute

appearance: Magic's color is silver gray on top, and snow white on bottom his tail is all black like the night sky, his eyes are sky blue, and has a small patch of black fur on his four head. He is light on his feet which makes him silent when he runs. He has a voice that sounds trustworthy but mostly doesn't talk alot. When he howls at a full moon it is soothing its like a song. Magic is strong and can run fast and can catch alot of prey. His teeth are like needles. His ears are fragil yet he can hear well. Magic's tounge is bright pink. his fur is smooth and soft like snow. His Claws are very sharp and can cut prey easily. his legs and paws are strong and rough like rocks. He has a scar on the back of he left ear its in the shape of an "X" but you can just barly see it because of the fur. When you see magic you might get scared because of his serious look.

personality: Magic loves weather it sooths him and he likes to run in the fields and forests. He likes a challenge if there are big game he will accept it and fight. He hates humans they killed Magic's pack. Magic doesn't like full moons because it brings back bad memories about when his pack died. When it rains he thinks about what other wolves out there are doing and makes him sad. he loves the night thats when he feels happy and howls away. Sometimes if Magic felt lonely he would go search for wolves. Magic feels like he is the only wolf in the world thats lost something dear to him his pack. Magic likes getting into trouble but not when it puts his life in danger. He usally isn't freindly at all and doesn't talk much he doesn't trust anyone. He is friendly, caring, and can cheer sombody up but mostly he is sad, and sometimes has no feeling. He also likes looking at the stars. Magic is very serious about things but that doesn't mean he isn't fun. One quote that gets stuck in his mind alot is "each path is like a choice it can lead to trouble or luck if you cant choose then you have no hope."

history: Magic was only 1 year old when his pack died by humans that changed his whole life to this day he hates all humans and nothing can change that. When Magic was growing up he always felt alone.. Nobody there for him so he got great on his fighting skills because he had all the time to himself. Magic works hard for survivel and he had no help hunting so he became stronger by bringing down prey by himself. Every now and then he when he was growing up he would try to prove to himself that it wasn't his fault that his pack died. He had dangerous incounters with animals and nature. He use to have a friend her name was Inu and one day Magic just left but Magic never found her again. He thought that she was dead but she still might be out there. Then it came to that day where he Woke up and found himself in a feild where he incountered a human and a bear. Then a few days later it rained and he wanted to truly find a wolf to play with or talk to but when his chance came he refuesed. So hours later he regreted it and found a river and then fell asleep. But more into his past he had a great life he thinks he will never find happiness but sooner or later he will. His parents were wise but he still had much to learn he was respected in the pack and he thought he'd be like this forever. Thats why he likes challenges to win them and then be respected. All he wants is just his life back but so far nothing has changed. But he continues to learn more about humans. One event in his life almost got him killed but he managed to escape it he has alot of small scars on his legs and almost everywhere because he always gets hurt. Magic then learns from his mistakes. He found a pack and stood up for a pup named Scar. Magic was Scar's best friend but then Magic wanted to move on so he did. Now all of that changed almost all of his feelings for wolves how he acts and how he fights.

Kisu - October 7, 2007 11:22 PM (GMT)
Well, you're going to have to make a few changes. First and foremost, you need to check your spelling and grammar before we can accept this.

Secondly, this is a realistic wolf RPG, meaning though our characters talk to one another, everything else is based off of real life. There is no magic in the SotW world, so Magic could not have his jewel or use magic in any way.

You'll also need to add a little bit more information to your appearence and personality sections. If you need ideas, try looking at the already accepted applications.

One las thing, wolves live in packs, not herds.

Thanks

Kisu

magic - October 7, 2007 11:24 PM (GMT)
yea i kind of get them mixed up

Kisu - October 8, 2007 12:48 PM (GMT)
Okay, just add a liiiiittle bit more for your appearence and personality and I an accept this ^.^

magic - October 8, 2007 07:52 PM (GMT)
okay :D i put just a bit more like two sentances for both

Kisu - October 10, 2007 01:15 AM (GMT)
Looks good then, accepted ^.^

Magic - May 11, 2008 08:35 PM (GMT)
if anybody is curious i edited it just one word fixed it was like a year ago so i made alot of mistakes. im sorry if i put in herd instead of pack ..




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