Hey i'm new and i would like to join a pack if it's okay it doesn't
matter who's pack i join and what rank iam thanks^-^
Name: Rain
age: 3
gender: female
apperance: white pelt with red tiped mouth and paws. also black tipped
ears and black tipes on pelt. eyes silver with a hint of black. very
fit lloves to run and play. She i very muscular you can see the out line of herback,shoulders,and leg muscels.
she is well built and is very energetic. She has deep embeded scar of a claw mark on her left back leg. Also she has a very buiteful face and long ears. she has a very fluffy tail and is as long as a Ires shetter.
Personality: she is kind when it comes to her pack. she is loyal and
will throw down her life for her pack. some time she can be alittle
anoying. Most of the time she a very happy go lucky kind of wolf. She keeps to herself when it comes to her past and sometimeswalks along the river by herself to think. She puts her pack befor herself so that she can gain trust from the other pack members. She is a very good fighter and will fight untile the battel is one or untile she can't move anymore.
history: she used to be owned by a kind old lady. when she turned three
the old lady had to set Rain in the wild because she as been getting
sicker and sicker from her cancer.when rain was asleep she gave her to a
DNR to set her 5 miles away from the house. The next day when rain
woke up she found herself in a new place. she was scared at first but she
learned to exsept the fact that she is now inb the wild. so she is
looking for a pack so she doesn't have to be alone. the rest of her past is
kept to herself.
well thats about all of it i hope i can join a pack real soon.
p.s. i'm not sure if this is were my character form is suppose to put it if not srry
Okay, you're going to have to do some work on this application...
First of all, you'll need a lot more information about your appearance, personality, and history. If you need some inspiration, try looking at some of the already accepted wolve's bios.
Also, you need to make sure you check your grammar and spelling before you post. We don't worry about a little mistake every once in a while, but I noticed quite a few in your post.
Just let one of the Admins know if you need any additional help! Thanks!
~Kisu
I edited your topic name to your name just so you know nothing weird happened. :)
Anyway, if you look through some of the accepted applications, you will be able to see what is needed of you. Some are over done but good too. Here are a few examples:
http://z7.invisionfree.com/soulofthewild/i...?showtopic=2960http://z7.invisionfree.com/soulofthewild/i...?showtopic=2317http://z7.invisionfree.com/soulofthewild/i...?showtopic=1369The last two have a long history but the content is good. But as you can see, their personality and appearance are at least a good ten sentences each. That is what your minimum should be. As for your history the minimum should be at least twenty good sentences. Use those to get a bit of an idea of what else you can write about :) When you are done reply to this topic and one of the Admin will be right over to check it over for you :)
~Niccy