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Wirian - August 17, 2007 06:25 PM (GMT)
Come one, come all!
Budding poet Charlotte has presents for you!
All you need to do is write out this form!
Your name:
Character name:
Brief appearance:
Brief personality:
What you want the poem about:
Anything else that could be useful:

For an example, just check the poem in this signature!

Kasadya - August 17, 2007 06:51 PM (GMT)
Your name: Kuro
Character name: Kasadya
Brief appearance: Black with gray eyes. Tip of left ear is missing
Brief personality: Lonely, Rude, Disrespectful, Cruel, Loyal to friends (If she has any)
What you want the poem about: Her life really just a general overview
Anything else that could be useful: not really

Kalina - August 17, 2007 06:53 PM (GMT)
Charlotte is workin on it and will get it finished and posted ASAP :) Thanks for the interest

Wirian - August 18, 2007 02:30 PM (GMT)
The daughter of royalty
My life was to be a tragedy
I am the only one to survive
Of my most honourable line
I took my place
When the time came
Only to lose it again

A battle with another
I just wouldn’t submit to him
And so I bear that one scar
The tip of an audit to be no more
That is when I arrived here
Now the others will live in fear

Charlotte says if you want it adapting at all tell her, and would appreciate it if you put a copyright sign in your siggy

Gaderel - August 18, 2007 02:44 PM (GMT)
Your name: Ghost
Character name: Gaderel
Brief appearance: She has a silver pelt. She has 3 scars across her maw. Left eye is light icy gray the right is light icy blue.
Brief personality: Is cruel but has a softer side.
What you want the poem about: General life poem
Anything else that could be useful: nope

Wirian - August 18, 2007 02:45 PM (GMT)
Charlotte is going to start work on your poem and we will hopefully have it up quickly. Do you have her profile up as I can't find it? If not can you post her story here?

EDIT: found it :)

Femke - August 18, 2007 02:53 PM (GMT)
My silver pelt set me apart
As did size and strength
And then one day as I played
I saw a friend tumble to his death
His mother scarred me
And I ran
To find refuge once again

Adopted by the alphas
Of a pack of strength
I watched its demise
While hidden in a cave
And now I look upon these lands
Hoping a home without tragedy can be found

© Charlotte saunders


For those looking for examples there is another in the signature of this account

Kuune - September 8, 2007 11:06 PM (GMT)
Your name: Kuro
Character name: Kuune
Brief appearance: Gray and Tan with green Eyes
Brief personality: Is a thinker not a fighter.
What you want the poem about: A general life poem.
Anything else that could be useful: His bio it's in accepted characters K.

Zyattiath - September 9, 2007 04:11 AM (GMT)
Your name:Angel

Character name:Zyattiath

Brief appearance:One might think one of her nature would lean more towards the side of not taking care of herself and not really caring about what she looks like. Yet this is far from the truth. Zyattiath is a clean freak and absolutely hates it when her pelt gets dirty. At least with mud or other debris, she doesn't care as much if it gets stained with alittle blood from a fight. Yet sometimes even that will just tick her off enough to start a fight to the death. The other wolves death of course. The warm thick fur that covers her body is mostly silver and white. White runs from her underbelly and down the inside of her legs... Also touching to her chin, blending nicely with the silver hued in her pelt. Around her tail and the edges of white there is some rust colored fur that adds to her beauty. These markings are deep and add contrast to her pelt.

Frame is sculpted with the most elegant of things in mind. Small dainty frame is fine and flowing. Long elegant pillars are strong and muscular, running into small dainty paws at the ends. Her long feathered tassle is elegant and she often times holds it high in a authoritive manner around others. Frame is sculpted that of a female, curves enchant her beautiful frame like it does none other. Yet all these traits come from her mother lineage, on her fathers side she has his deep wise face. Deeply carved facial features give her a angelic appearance. Optics are perfectly upon her dial as her somewhat pointed muzzle adds to this appearance. Eyes are deep gems that draw you in, these gems are hued the colors of emerald. Along the outskirts of her raven colored pupils sit small flecks of amber that reflect even the faintest rays of light. Simply she is a work of art of Mother Nature... A work of art that could bring tears to your eyes because it was so beautiful upon first appearances. Even the most beautiful of wolven can be rotted straight to the core

Brief personality:Although the thoughts within her would bring shivers to even the darkest of wolven, her expression is usually rather stoic. Calm and collected she stays using her ways to pry things from wolves she thinks hide things from her. Zyattiath doesn't need to even suggest that another has commit a crime, just mention the possibility of it to let them know that yes indeed she knows and she will get it out of them. As stoic as she is she is as wicked as they come. She herself is not afraid to get her ivories dirty if someone as swayed her the wrong way. Personally she thinks no one should have to put up with thick headed wolven so they should be purged from the earths atmosphere. Stupidity is something that lights a very short fuse within her, she can put up with it to a point and then just as calm as she can be... Zyattiath can fly off the handle so to say.

A great talent of hers seems to be to cause discomfort among those she doesn't totally care much for. Yes she finds pleasure in this, not physical discomfort... Just discomfort itself. Although she seems to cause trouble among those around her she is rather intelligent. Yet what is one of intelligence suppose to do with it if she doesn't keep those beneath her in check. One could rule the world with the right strategy to go with persistence. Perhaps one day she would rule over everyone. Zyattiah is one of persistence towards this goal, yet she has the ruthless behavior to get her all the way there. She has no remorse for the death of those that stand in her way.

As evil as it may seem that she wouldn't care about ones death. Zyattiath sees it just all as a way of life. There is a cycle, they are born live and die and then their bodies are returned to the mother earth to aide in plants growth. Therefore they would never truly die, just change forms. Yet even with all this in mind, she tries to make pack life more like that of a family. Keeping ties those within the pack was important to her, yet those that aggravated her she would simply kill or banish from the lands. More so likely kill so she wouldn't have to deal with them later. Banish if they where that pathetic that it wouldn't matter if they were dead or alive.


What you want the poem about:general life/ taking over the world/ power hunry

Anything else that could be useful: she will do anything to get what she wants- to rule the world

Faia - September 9, 2007 09:07 PM (GMT)


Your name: River
Character name: Akina
Brief appearance: A silver pelt with ocean blue eyes. Beautiful and thin build.
Brief personality: Sweet and calm, sometimes overly nice. Fiery temper sometimes.
What you want the poem about: Just about her, you know... i dont. :/
Anything else that could be useful: hmm... she's caring, and warm hearted, but deep inside her, there's a hunger for power that she gets from her brother Faia.

Adia and Mikaki - September 10, 2007 06:01 PM (GMT)
Kuro:

It should have been forbidden
And yet it was aloud
A litter without permission
To be born to a mother proud

Seven pups in total
A large litter to say the least
Though two were soon to die forever
The rest of them would live

A fight did occur
Between forbidden and allowed
And in that fight they sealed their fate
Never to return again

Loyalty shall never waver
Between brother and brother
And so they stand here side by side
Ready to start again


Angel:

A desire lingered in her mind
A desire to rule
Not just to rule a pack
But to rule the world
That desire did rule her
And in her eyes it glowed
Her hackles raised in anger
And her teeth bore in spite
She set off to find her mind
And rule the world with all her might

No matter what the cost is
Personal or else
She will not rest until she gets it
Or her heart dies
So fear this cruel femme
For your death may be near
Just another step for her
Not that she would care

River:

It swells inside the chest
Just weak at first
But it grows
Soon it is obvious
In everything you do
That little streak of hunger
That refuses to linger
You want power
But what will you do?

To begin with you are kind and warm
Just as I am now
You care for others and that stuff
But it just won’t last long
For that hunger will consume you
Like everyone like you.


If you want them adjusting at all please tell me and if you use them put © Charlotte Saunders at the end of your poem. Thankyou

Zyattiath - September 10, 2007 08:19 PM (GMT)
Wow your good thankies you like hit the nail on the head for Zyatt :P

Kaden - October 18, 2007 11:11 PM (GMT)
Your name: Kuro
Character name: Kaden
Brief appearance: Brown and gray mix with green eyes
Brief personality: Stubborn and loyal with a sorta uncaringness about her
What you want the poem about: General life poem
Anything else that could be useful: His character bio in accepted characters K.

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Yes I know I keep coming back and I can get annoying sorry, but I just LOVE your poems! All my characters start with K....it's weird but whatever.....


Wirian - October 24, 2007 09:18 AM (GMT)
I'm onto it :)

Keon - November 8, 2007 11:28 PM (GMT)
Your name: Kuro
Character name: Keon
Brief appearance: White with bright blue eyes
Brief personality: A cold hearted killer
What you want the poem about: General life poem
Anything else that could be useful: His character bio in accepted characters K.

Another and your not even done the first...sorry! :(

Tamaska - November 20, 2007 06:21 PM (GMT)
For Kaden:

You don't understand me
Noone understands me
To be abandoned as a pup
To have to fend for yourself
Me and Tressa
Friends forever

Stay by my side
I care for you
Never leave my sight
I'll fight for you
Don't leave me
I don't want to be alone
Nor you to be alone

Can't let you out my side
Scared you be gone
Scared I won't be able to help
Stand by me
Never leave me.


Is that ok?

For Keon:

Don't doubt me
I always keep my promises
If I say you'll die then you will
At my jaws
Your blood in my mouth
See if I care

My first words were those of death
And death I was quick to bring
Many die before me
You'll be next
Quote me




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