Name: Maoko

Age: 3

Gender: Brute

Appearance: He is a black wolf so he can slink around in the shadows. His orbs are a deep Gold. He has 20/20 vision and he has a long snout. His left hing leg is his weakest spot for it has been hurt many timws befor. Maoko has big paws and white claws. He has a scar on his brow which scares a lot of people. He has big eyes and a big nose. His tail is bushy and fluffy. He also is very slender and is wll fed.

Personality:
He is a killer, but, has a soft side. He wants to follow Larion by his side as one of his future pack members. He is a killer :wolfrun2: and will do what ever Larion tells him. What he looks for in a fae is a little bit of a killing side in her. He also wants her to have a natural mother instinct, too. Maoko is blood thirsty abd sort of knows what Larion is up to. He wants to have a good life once Larion is king. Obviously that won't happen ;) . Maoko also wants to be a good wolf once Larion riles.

^^That part sucks so much... <_<

History:
Maoko is 6 months old and he walked through the trees wondering around. He was banished from his pack at a young age. It was all because he had killed all of his family because he was blood thirsty. He remembered that day...

Maoko was walking with his mother, father, sister, and brother. They all didn't know that Maoko was a bloodthirsty killer yet. His golden orb looked at each one of them. He figured out the strongets was his father. He walked up to his dad and walked behind him for a whie and then he lunged at his neck from the siode. He tore his neck open with his siter screaming in horror. The blood pouring into his mouth was salty and sweet. His brother lunged at him aiming for his shoulder and Maoko doged it and then his brother jumped at him scratching him on the snout. Maoko jumped at his brother but missed and he turned around to find him behind their mom. He lunged at his own mother tearing her shoulder flesh and jumping onto her neck and tearing it open with all of his force. He then jumped off of her as she fell dead and then he flung onto his brother tearing his stomach open. His blood was the sweetest so far and he was happy. Maoko then spotted his sister. blood dripping from his teeth as he snarled at her. He attacked from the side holding onto her head. He bit down and crunched her skull between his teeth. He then went back to his pack and they figured out what had happened and banned him...

Maoko kept walking as his eyes looked on. A smile crept across his face as he remembered that day. He was good after when he killed his parents and what made him a killer was he was in love. A brute had came and killed his love and he killed the brute and then remembered how good blood had tasted since then he's bee a killer....









Please accept him and have Zita look at this too!!!

Just wanted to say that hues are commonly referred to as the COLOR of something. I.E. pelt or eyes.

If you don't want to say eyes then orbs or something like that would be the word you are looking for.

~Jess

Also, you'll need to add some more to your appearence and personality to meet the minimum requirements. Thanks!

Oh, and fyi, I don't think people is an appropriet word...possibly replace it with wolves. Also, I'd say that Maoko isn't bloodthirsty, so much as mentally deranged.