EDITED!!! =D

Name : IceFeather

Age : 1 1/2 years

Gender : Female

Pack : Loner (Former : Shining Star Pack)

Position : None

Appearance:
IceFeather is a black furred wolf with a patch of white shaped into a feather on her back. Speckles of white on her tail earn her the 'Ice' part of her name. Small for her age, what she lacks in size she makes up for speed. Darting from one place to another and trying to confuse her foe is how IceFeather chooses to battle. Long legs have average sized paws that have sharp, white claws. IceFeather has ice-blue eyes that have a wise look to them. No matter how she moves, her paws never make a sound. Her voice, on the other hand, holds a growl in every word, which she directs at anybody but her friends. IceFeather's howl is quite the opposite. A low howl is what she loves to sing with, the howl often mourning for her loved ones.

Personality:

IceFeather is naturally a kind and caring wolf, and loves to have friends who she can depend on. However, due to her former pack telling her lies for half her life, she doesn't trust anyone who approaches her for the first time. To hide her true self, IceFeather shows the aggressive side of her as a mask. Displaying a calm and wise wolf, with a cold nature and horrible aggression is how she reacts to those around her. If she comes to know a wolf as a close friend, she may gradually show her true self to them. However, it may be difficult to befriend such a wolf. Memories, such as her only true friends and her brother StoneClaw, fill her with joy, and a longing for them. While memories of her pack and father fill her with a terrible rage. Submissive to those who seem to hold a commanding aura, she will listen to those who speak wisdom and follow those who decide commands for a good cause. Determination, spirit, and loyalty are what keep her going during hard times.

History:
IceFeather was born into a strong pack, called the Shining Star Pack, whose names reflected their appearance or nature. GaleStorm and WillowFlower, the Alpha and Alphess of the pack, were also her parents. Two males, StoneClaw and CloudEye, and one female, ShadowTail, were her siblings. Being the Alpha's first litter and nearly being the splitting image of her father, IceFeather had a high rank(for pups) from birth.

Before IceFeather was born, a huge hooved animal had appeared from the mountains. It had the body of an ox, but it seemed possessed by a demon. It wreaked havoc in the pack's territory, scaring large and small game alike. The Star Pack grew weaker from lack of prey and they saw IceFeather as a savior. If she was the daughter of the great GaleStorm and WillowFlower, then she could do something about the situation, right?

The pack, deciding together that IceFeather received special treatment, gave IceFeather most of the kills they rarely made. She thought about these every so often, but never really took the time to look at it. She would sometimes refuse the offerings, but her father, putting the same faith into her, would order her to eat them.

Just before becoming a year old, IceFeather found that her only true friends, DragonTooth and TigerStripe, were a bit restless and seemed to be hiding something from her. One day, though, StoneClaw confronted her. "My sister, there is something urgent I need to tell you." StoneClaw said that day. IceFeather, who had been talking with her friends, looked up at him. "What is it, StoneClaw?" she asked, sensing panic within her brother. "I should've told you this earlier.." she heard him mutter. "But the pack has dark plans for you. They intend to send you to kill the demon ox that has been in our territory!" Now panic flooded into his voice and eyes.

The young wolf looked at StoneClaw, then heard "It's true, IceFeather..." and "It is." from both sides of her flank. She looked at DragonTooth, sorrow and guilt shadowing his amber eyes. TigerStripe had the same expression in her deep blue eyes. "Why..?" IceFeather choked out, gazing at her brother again. He sighed. "Because you are practically our father's image, showing skills and power that neither I, CloudEye, or ShadowTail have ever shone." Well, that explains a lot.

IceFeather's eyes darkened and she spoke in a firm voice. "Then I'm leaving." she stated. None of the wolves around her said anything. StoneClaw and DragonTooth only dipped their heads in understanding. IceFeather turned to TigerStripe, resting her muzzle on a striped shoulder. "I'm sorry..." whispered the young female. TigerStripe's pain must be rough, but IceFeather understood. "I forgive you." replied the black wolf.

"Well, if you're leaving the pack, then I guess I'm going too. There's no way they're gonna get their stinkin' paws on me!"

IceFeather snapped her head up, looking at the black brute in front of her. DragonTooth returned the gaze and walked over to her. "I'm going and you can't stop me. I'm gonna protect you every single step of the way." he said, determination lacing his voice. "Fine then, you worm-brained mutt, it's your choice." TigerStripe teased.

IceFeather and DragonTooth thanked StoneClaw, and said farewell to TigerStripe, her words being too much. And together, two dark wolves abandoned their pack and family, and left behind all the lies. Crossing ice covered mountains and a never-ending moor or two were the most they came across in their journey. But as IceFeather and DragonTooth came into the Nura Forest, DragonTooth never to be seen again after going to hunt for the two travelers.

And it has been just IceFeather since then...

You need to add four more sentences to personality and seven to history. Then it should be good ^.^ Love her markings :)

Oh, yes. I have edited this earlier. But I have to ask if I have to put a new thread up if I needed more to it? o_o? I didn't RP before this and I'm quite new to it. ^^;

Looks good to me now! ^.^