Name:Valand
Age: 3Years
Gender: Male(or brute)
Appearance: His coat (or pelt) is bright white, like new fallen snow, with blackish highlights around his neck and on the tip of his tail, along with brilliant golden orbs. He has more fur around his neck to where he has a" mane" so to speak. He has a long fluffy tail; his own fur is actually quite soft compared to most wolves. His paws are slightly oversized for his own size; this makes him seem more like a puppy. His under belly is an offset of white, more grayish. His legs are stronger and a lot longer than others letting him hunt, and run faster, his long tail acts as leverage, letting him turn more easily. His longer legs make him bigger than a lot of wolves, just by a little, which in most cases still intimidate, so he crouches low. His snout is a moderate size, with a soil brown nose; his teeth are sharp, like most wolves. His ears are fox-ish in some ways, Like the fact that his ears are larger than normal and tipped with black, like his tail and neck. His fighting style is faster and harder to dodge, but in exchange makes him more vulnerable, he uses his dexterity to fight, always moving around then he waits for an opening, then fast as lightning he strikes, leaving prey or enemy, dieing. He seems, a little like a fox in most ways, His ears are large his tail is long and fluffy and tipped with black, also with longer legs like a fox. His unusual qualities , make him stronger than many expect from him.
All in all he is balanced.
Personality: He has a sharp mind with a mellow, out going attitude. His rouge-like charm can easily help him get what he wants, like confuse others, distract or anything similar to it. His out going personality makes him easy to get along with, thought he is still obedient .He can think moves ahead with most foes, to minimize damage to himself .He is a little goofy, but very playful and sweet. Though if on missions puts comrades before the objective, he could never leave anyone behind, even if he disliked them. He has a heart of gold; he enjoys helping others asking nothing in return. His golden heart makes him soft and kind, and would do much for one wolf. He is fascinated by nature, and really just listens, to water wind and rain he enjoys to observe and listen, thought he has lived in it all his life. His sharp mind, helps him in many situations, form hunting to fighting and planning an ambush is a breeze for Valand.He dose get nervous and touchy when he is around a wolf he likes.
History: Valand lived in the rugged mountains when he was young, with pools of sapphire and emerald. Living on the lowest mountain, surrounding mountains reached to the heavens. Valand's Father was rouge, Nykaga, and taught him the ways of wolf and rogue; he had a tough time learning the rogue ways. Though he wasn’t the best rogue he was a good rogue .His obedience came from his father, whom always was rough with him.
When he had left with his brother, Skye and sister, Tusega,Out on a hunting trip in the far east mountain,2 days into the trip they were ambushed by Crimson, 2nd in command of bounty wolves, and killed Skye and Tusega.Valand was chased him to a field, where his father was being held. He was killed before Valand.He just couldn’t believe what had happened, he was frozen, he couldn’t do anything. As Crimson approached, he darted as fast as he could go, as far as he could get from there.
For seasons he wandered aimlessly. It was the dead of winter, in a raging snow, he lay down to die and forget, as he thought his life slipped away he awoke, in a cave lined with crystals that glow. He was only 1 Year then. A massive silver wolf came near him. he demanded what was going on and was told, he was saved by a wolf named Kai, a massive gray and white wolf with icy blue eyes. He taught him later to use his mind and movements to fight, instead of brute strength. He taught him what herbs did what and how to use them to make something right, to think and interpret others moves. Also he was taught to never give up. Kai's teachings made him strong and sharp. He lived with Kai for 2 years,Kai one day left the cave and never came back. He still heard stories form clans and wolves he came by, so he knew he was alive and well. He wandered form place to place, helping wolves he came by, trying to find a pack to accept him.
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You need to add a lot more to personality (it has to be a minimum of 10 sentences) And History needs more as well. You're about 9 sentances off on that. ^.^
Looks like you edited, thanks! ^.^