I was unsure where to post this, so hopefully I did this right..

Name: Raksha
Age: 2 years, 11 months
Gender: female
Pack: Loner
Position: n/a
Appearance: She has a solely black pelt with a curious symbol on right flank; that of a byzantine cross-like shape. Her tail is a plume of ebony tinged with red at the tip.Her eyes are pumpkin-orange. Her teeth were a brilliant white, accenting her proud face, while her gums are pink and healthy, like the flesh of a newly ripened plum. Her muscle structure is tone, her neck delicately arched. Her paws are large, indicating not daintiness, but a fighter. Raksha's ears are long and pointed, having short fur instead of the usually short rounded ears of her breed. She is a black-phase grey.

Personality: Well known for her sarcasm and wit, she often hides her emotions behind her humor. She loves fishing with a passion, and long treks through dense wood. She harbors an incredible diskike for females who disguise power hunger with love. She has a thing where she tilts her head to the side when she's thinking. Although she has a kind disposition, she can be quick to make a sharp remark and quick to feel as though she is being insulted. She loves to hunt caribou as well as fish and has perfected her hunting tecnique for the male version of the breed. She is silly and playful and loves a good conversation.

History: She was born within a small ordinary pack. As she became older, she was forced from her pack because she ascended the ranks and the Alpha female became jealous. Although there was no reason for questioning, she let fear overcome her and forced Raksha out. raksha traveled the base of the Carpathian mountains for a year before stumbling onto a rival pack's territory. Upon finding the distinguishing marks of her heritage upon her, they attacked, leaving her in the mountains harsh elements to die. Luckly, a band of traveling merchants came across her and took her in. They were inexperienced and assumed she was a mere dog lost in the wilderness. They nursed her back to health and she tried to be civil, but the moon called to her. A call which no wolf may escape. She broke through their cabin window and fled, once again condeming herself to wander the world once more.

((I hope this is better ><))

you'll need a lot more on your appearence, personality and history...at least a paragraph for appearence and personality and two for history. Check out some of the already accepted descriptions if you need some guidence, and feel free to ask Admins and Mods ^.^

Mmkay, I fixed it.. now what? :)

Sorry to bug you with this Raksha, but we cannot accept this unless you complete all that is asked of you. Here is what you need to do:

1. Add at least two (2) sentances to appearance for a total of ten sentances.

2. Add at least three (3) sentances to personality for a total of ten sentances.

3. Add at least one whole paragraph, ten (10) sentances for a total of two paragraphs that are ten sentances each.

I would recomend reading over the rules again to make sure you havn't missed any of them. Since your application is not complete and all I would highly recomend it, just so that in the future we won't be hounding you about a simple mistake ^.^

Fix all this up and your application should be acceptable. Have fun with it and let your mind go crazy! (But not too crazy because then I might not be able to accept it o_O -giggles-)

~Niccy