Name: Demonya
Age: Roughly four years of age.
Gender: Female
Pack: She has been alone for a long time thus making her a loner.
Position:
Appearance: With her jet black pelt, Demonya blends into the shadows with only her bright icy blue eyes to be seen. She has an obscure white stripe that runs the length of her underside. She has a long seeming faultless gait, effortlessly gliding across ground. Demonya has a deep scar that cuts across her muzzle from when she was a pup. She is best not to be angered as she has long, sharp ivory teeth which could quite severly damage any one that looked the wrong way at her. Demonya has a howl that sends shivers down your spine, its high pitched and unnaturally loud. She is a tall wolf and she holds herself high making herself look even taller still.
Personality: Demonya usually keeps to herself, as she has issues trusting others. When she is not being anti-social she is fairly easy to get along with. Although if you are on her bad side, look out as she is notorious for being incredibly violent in fights and arguments. She is very intelligent and a quick thinker. She is a valuable asset to any pack as she can find her way out of any predicament. She avoids males where possible, as she believes that she is unlucky as any male that has befriended her has been killed or exiled.
History:
As a pup Demonya life has been difficult. She was the only surviving pup in a litter of four and her mother died soon after her birth. She was raised by another female in the pack named Cocio. After she turned one their pack was attacked, she was hunting at the time and came back to ind the majority of the pack dead. Cocio had survived but only narrowly. Demonya looked after Cocio as well as she could, but Cocio's wounds got the better of her and unfortunately she died.
On her travels she came across another pack, they had heard about her other pack and they sympathised with her and took her in. In this pack she met Lucanus a young male slightly older than her. Although as she got to know him she started to fear for his safety as he often went to a nearby pack for meat as the pack was unable to find enough food for everyone. When tha alpha male found out about this Lucanus was cast out of the pack and was left to fend for himself. The alpha male accussed Demonya of helping him so she to was cast out. Since then she has been by herself wandering form place to place finding a place to call home once again.
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Name: Demonya
Age: Roughly four years of age.
Gender: Female
Pack: She has been alone for a long time thus making her a loner.
Position:
Appearance: With her jet black pelt, Demonya blends into the shadows with only her bright icy blue eyes to be seen. She has an obscure white stripe that runs the length of her underside. She has a long seeming faultless gait, effortlessly gliding across ground. Demonya has a deep scar that cuts across her muzzle from when she was a pup. She is best not to be angered as she has long, sharp ivory teeth which could quite severly damage any one that looked the wrong way at her. Demonya has a howl that sends shivers down your spine, its high pitched and unnaturally loud. She is a tall wolf and she holds herself high making herself look even taller still. Even though she is four years of age she is still as agile and playful as when she was a pup. She still reguarly preys on an unsuspecting butterfly when no one is watching her.
Personality: Demonya usually keeps to herself, as she has issues trusting others. When she is not being anti-social she is fairly easy to get along with. Although if you are on her bad side, look out as she is notorious for being incredibly violent in fights and arguments. She is very intelligent and a quick thinker. She is a valuable asset to any pack as she can find her way out of any predicament. She avoids males where possible, as she believes that she is unlucky as any male that has befriended her has been killed or exiled. She gets on better with the pups than than any adult, mainly because she acts like one. But if any danger were to arise she would be the first one to put her life on line to save the young ones.
History:
As a pup Demonya life has been difficult. She was the only surviving pup in a litter of four and her mother died soon after her birth. She was raised by another female in the pack named Cocio. After she turned one their pack was attacked, she was hunting at the time and came back to ind the majority of the pack dead. Cocio had survived but only narrowly. Demonya looked after Cocio as well as she could, but Cocio's wounds got the better of her and unfortunately she died.
On her travels she came across another pack, they had heard about her other pack and they sympathised with her and took her in. In this pack she met Lucanus a young male slightly older than her. Although as she got to know him she started to fear for his safety as he often went to a nearby pack for meat as the pack was unable to find enough food for everyone. When tha alpha male found out about this Lucanus was cast out of the pack and was left to fend for himself. The alpha male accussed Demonya of helping him so she to was cast out. Since then she has been by herself wandering form place to place finding a place to call home once again. As she has been by herself for such a long time she was forced to teach herself the basics of being a wolf, but she had no idea of her limit on strength. Often being on the losing side of a bear that she would try to bring down.
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