Name: Hope

Age: 4 years

Gender: Female

Pack: Loner

Position: Loner

Appearance: Hope is an odd looking wolfess. Her eyes are like her fathers, a deep acidic yellow. But her pelt is a mix of the two, mainly white with grey spots all over it. Hope was born with a frame similar to her mothers. Long and slender, but built for hunting. Her fangs are long and sharp, as are her claws. She does have muscles, but they are hidden by her pelt. Hope isn’t one of the prettiest wolfess, infact, compared to most she is quite plain. But even through this, she does have a dark charm to her. A vibe that she sends out that just screams darkness. Hope isn't the best of fighters, her talents are more for hunting, since her mother was the chief huntress at her old pack. But thats not to say she can't fight, for all wolves can. Its just she can't fight like the best of them.

Personality: Hope always felt she never fitted in. At her old pack it was clear she didn’t, since she had inherited her father’s darkness. She has a deep longing to belong somewhere. Although she is dark, Hope can’t be described as evil. She does have some nice traits that lay in her. Hope has a deep sense of loyalty, proven by the fact that she stayed with a pack that she disliked just to stay by her mothers side. Hope really loved her mother, for she always thought that even though the whole pack didn't want her, her mother did. She isn’t one to give her heart away to the first guy that comes along. Infact, it takes time to gain her trust full stop. But, if you do gain her trust, she will be one of the best friends you could ever find. But, at first apearance she comes across as rather anti-social, and shy, but she is far from shy once you befriend her. Her loyalty knows no bounds.

History: It was a warm spring night, as Chasity lay in her cave, alone. Usually the Niza dens where peaceful and calm, but tonight, a young femmes painful howls echoed through the walls. She had always wanted to be a mother, but now she had a chance, and her pups would be brought up forsaken and different. Why had the white wolfess let her heart fall for a Mal? They where supposed to be polar opposites, yet opposites attract.

The next morning, Chasity nursed her two beautiful girls. One was as black as the night sky, and the other was white with many grey markings. The black one she called Diabla, and the other she named Hope. Chasity never told anyone who Hope and Diabla’s father was, and just said she didn’t know who he was. Bot one wolf, Ryou, a wolf who had been born in the Mal, but left since she didn’t fit in, noticed something oddly familiar about the two.

It took her a while, but when Hope and Diabla turned 1, she realised. Their father was Donovan, an evil wolf from the Mal, not only that, but the brother who had terrorised her through all her pup hood. Ryou spread the word to others, and rumours started to spread everywhere. Everyone knew Hope and Diabla where different, and a bit dark, and now they all knew why. Diabla left to live her father, but Hope had a great loyalty to her mother, and despite her darkness she stayed.

Then, something terrible happened. One morn, while Chasity was out hunting with her hunters, a Mal wolfess attacked. Her name was Thriste, the mother of Donovan. She was angry that Donovan had loved this femme, and killed her on the spot, before being taken down by the other hunters. They carried Chasity’s dead, limp body back, and on seeing the bloody site, Hope chocked back tears and said she was no longer bound here. She left that day to find her own place in a different world, where no one would know of her screwed up family.

If you could add a bit more length on your appearence and personality, that would help. Other than that, great appy! ^.^

I added a few more, is it better now? I would have added more but I'm rushing today because its my birthday party today and mum is panicking like you wouldn't believe.

No problem, looks good! Accepted! ^.^