Clouded Eyes

I was born with clouded vision,
and though young I was,
I sooned learned to live my life without collision.
I watch the world behind glazed eyes,
as I took sure steps forwards,
my life passed through my mind,
As I wondered what I would be,
I sighed at the world's treachery.
I wondered why and wondered long,
Why did they have to do me wrong?
How come I had to be blind,
why could I have lived life right,
This clouded vision I certainly don't mind,
though at times,
I truly wish, that I could see the world,
drink in the colors and swirls.

It wasn't fair,
it wasn't my fault,
No one seems to care.
Though my vision's is clouded,
my other senses are more alert than ever,
My life is lonely and empty though other's seem crowded.
Though it may seem selfish,
I just wish to lead a normal life.
Without the stares of others,
without their cruel taunts,
All my family pities me, sisters, father, brothers and also mother.
They think I'm weak and worthless,
but I can truly see,
As sometimes,
you have to be blind,
to have true vision.

I know I know, short eh? But oh well. xP Maybe I'll post a pic up too.

Aww.... It's beautiful Icicle. And it's length doesn't matter as it still tells a story. If you like the poem, then it's perfect. B)

Thanks. xP I just thought of writing a simple poem. Anyone can have it as long as they post here and tell me. I just might make a siggy to fit the description of the wolf in the poem and that will be a giveaway too as long as they tell me on this board. All I need are their names, charries they play, charrie they're gonna use the thing on and what they want, the poem, siggy or both.

Well, Here they are:

Siggeh:




Avvie:

thats so pretty!
hey do you think you could make a poem for my wolf Bradhadair?
I've never had an ablilty with poems and I admire people that do!

Sure....Lemme try.....What type of wolf ish he though? Evil, Light? Neutral?

more or less evil. If you've heard of Maghach *points to name* she's the same as her mother. Just she's a red pelt and her nick name (and her name means) fire fairy
Her father is Aro though she is just about to meet him for the first time. And he doesn't know it. um.....
she's a little fire ball of everything.
Though on the out side she is small and cute and looks inecent she really isn't
if you need more jsut ask! I can always provide more!

Here is my attempt, Yesh, I know it's totally short but my muse is low.:

They call me the fairy
made of flames
I'm made of everything
you can't possibly guess
Hatred, Kindness, Evil,
They all lurk within my soul
Now I'm really on a roll
I may look small,
I may look cute,
but you can never know.
My fur is stained with flames
Not even put out by rain.
Evil is the strongest thing
The word lets out a pleasing ring.
If we meet,
I'll let you know,
what evil really is.....

dude I love it! sometimes short can be better!
I'm gunna go put it in my siggy, and it really does fit her!
Thanks so much, you do have a talent for it

Thankehs, :P