Name: Ketsuki
Age: 3 years
Gender: Female
Pack: Loner
Position:
Appearance: Ketsuki is jet black with a little gray on the tip of her tail. She is very small but can run very quick. She has a large scar on her left hind leg, which stretches halfway down all the way to her paw. She is not very strong because of her small size. She has long fur and a short tail. She has small eyes and huge ears. Her nose is the same color as her fur, and her eyes are dark gray, clouded with confusion at times. Her quick speed makes her a very good hunter, and she is very good at dodging attacks. She has strong legs, and she is a pretty good jumper. She doesn't eat much so she is very skinny. She is horrible at swimming. (Personally, I really can't swim lol ^^)
Personality: Ketsuki is a tough wolf that will not put up with anything she doesn't like, (unless she is ordered by those abover her of course, because she just has to deal with that...) She is very loud and bold. Ketsuki has a bad temper, and a cocky additude. She will snap at you if you say something stupid, so watch out. She is a bit of a show off (not really a bit...) and loves impressing everyone. Ketsuki loves attention, even if it is negative attention. If the spotlight is on her, she's fine. She's not afraid to be embarassed either, she will do the dumbest things and laugh with everyone else. She hates it when anyone calls her small or tiny.. But she is also very brave and respectful to those above her. Ketsuki is very hyper, and can run for very long distances. She is almost always the first to complain in a bad situation, and she loves danger. Ketsuki gets all worked up when someone asks her about her past, because she hates to remember. Inside she is actually kind and sweet, but she just doesn't know how to calm down since she has been alone so long.
History: Ketsuki was abandoned when she was young, and hasn't been in a pack for a long time. Her parents were killed by humans, and that is the reason she has the large scar on her leg. She grew up on her own, with no parents. Ketsuki snoops around in pack territory sometimes, only to get chased away. She feels like an outsider, mainly because she is one. Her bad temper is thanks to having to do everything alone, because she doesn't know how to react when another wolf is with her. She would love it if someone was there for her. She would give anything in the world to have someone to share laughs with. Ketsuki has always wanted a friend that would always be there for her. She has always wondered if there is someone like that out there, who would want to be friends with her rotten self. She gets lonley at times, so she tends to say quiet. (That is why she is so loud when she is around others XD)
She had a brother, but he died shortly after her parents died, because he was so young. All Ketsuki remembers of that day is being alone and cold, and seeing her mother and father being taken away in a huge monster, already dead. She had a large cut on her leg, obviously from the insane humans. Her brother died a few days later, because he was only a pup. She traveled far away from the place she once called home, and now roams around in the territory that hasn't already been claimed by the packs. She has a few other scars that have faded by now, but they are all from her trying to join a pack. She hopes that she will someday be able to join a pack, and be equal with everyone around her. Her bad additude is thanks to her being treated like an outsider for so long. Ketsuki has always wondered if she would change if she got into a pack. She is pretty sure she wouldn't, since it has been so long. All she knows is that she is going to get into a pack. She is determined and she will fight to the death for it.
You might want to go back and re-read the rules for posting an application, there may have been a few things you missed.
You'll need MUCH more description in all three catigories of Appearence, Personality, and History...at least a paragraph for the first two and two paragaraphs for the last.
Try taking a look at some of the alreaady accepted applications if you need some ideas. Thanks!
Oh noes! I am sooooorrry 0.o I am horrible *sob sob*
You need at least two more sentances to both Appearance and Personality. Then you also need at least ten more sentances to your history.
You arn't horrible. We are here to help. ^.^
~Niccy
Perfect ^.^ Enjoy role playing here ^.^
~Niccy