View Full Version: Brutak

Soul of the Wild > Left Characters > Brutak



Title: Brutak
Description: Not ready yet


Brutak - August 11, 2006 08:59 PM (GMT)
This is not yet a done profile I do not have alot of time atm so please dont review it inless your accepting me in ill be working on it over time.


Name:Brutak
Age:3
Gender:Male
Pack:None
Position: Loner

Appearance:
A big brute of a wolf he has Deep deep white fur coat. With black along the ridge of nose and underside of stumoch all though not blending in perfectly gives him a disadvantage.He is still able to move very fast and silently.His eyes are bolth baby blue his nose has one scar down from under the right eye to the tip of his left nostral from a fight he had when he was a pup.He is around 36' very sleek and strong his coat is very comfy and you would just want to cuddle up with him.Of course you would probably be bitten if you ever tried.Thats only if he likes you and doesent really want to hurt you.He is missing half of one toe on his back right leg from another fight when around 2 summers of age.His tassle is very bushy and goes near to the ground in length has a black patch near the end.His strides are longer when running but shorter when walking * Legs in back are shorter he is built for bursts of speed not long running*.

Personality: He is very withdrawn and aggresive at first.If you dont immediatley get growled at then he probably likes you but is very short on paitents. Extremely respectfull of his pack leader.All though has trouble following orders by any one other than Alphas, betas,And elders.
He is more of a loner that is in a pack for one reason to survive.Tends to be calm while be exited and angry he is like some one who gets mad easy but is with a deadly calm when you do bring the angry side out.He enjoys nontalkative company that are calm.He enjoys the company of pups belive it or not contrary to his personality it brings him back to the days when he was innocent and didnt have to fight his own pack for survival.Haveing killed off some of his pack in self defence leaves its scars in him and even when you seem close to him he is still very withdrawn one day maybe hell find the wolf that can bring the true him out of this melchony. He will always *Always* Be a stead fast pillar you can rely on if in need. He is very predictable and tends to be polite while some how being rude without meaning to.Being totaly Loyal to his pack he cares less abought himself and more abought others all though if insulting pack even jokeingly he takes Extreme offense usualy inless its obvious he knows your jokeing.All in All to sum it up He is a Calm Grumpy Loveing Loyal wolf.


History:When he was a pup he grew up half starved with 4 other pups to compete with for food.It wasent common for a wolf to try and take another pack members life in those days. He has killed 2 brothers and a sister in self defence and is alive today with the scars he currently has from the encounters.His father always rode him hard abought staying alive and only the alpha is un expendable. * His father not being the Alpha but being the Beta* If it comes down to it Brutak would throw himself into a onrushing pack of wolves to give the Alpha 5 more seconds to live if he thinks it would help at all.Upon haveing to leave the land or kill the Alpha and becomeing alpha himself.Being loyal and beliveing in nothing but serveing his pack he left his homeland in search of a new home.While traveling he got in a fight or 2 that he usualy won his body gained endurance from his long travels but has very small needs edjucational wise. He can hunt normal and survive on his own he has even taken on a bear in the past and won so he can sleep in a cave. When ablizzard struck he got confused and started heading south back through his lands. Haveing gone through his pack lands without realiseing it he ran into a hostile pack. Surviveing by the skin of his teeth Literaly the skin of his teeth. He ran farther south instead of recrossing his land and bringing the hostile wolves with him.Haveing to live off what he could catch by himself he was very skinny. He found another lone wolf by the name of Kruna who was looking for his sister they traveled together for a while and He enjoyed krunas company.
One day a hunter shot kruna and since then hes been on his own now.
After another year of looking for Krunas Sister hopeing to find another kindred spirit he comes upon a valley.Present day he finds a land that is beutifull and full of green valleys.
With spirits low He starts to move into the land looking around and seeing no wolves he settles down on a hill under a tree that has blossomed. Finaly he can rest maybe even make a new home with a pack.

Ok I am ready if you like then yay if not then really isent that much more I can do than drag the post out long and make it boreing, REally boreing <_<

Aplin - August 11, 2006 11:51 PM (GMT)
Hello Brutak. Before I can accept you application you are going to need to add more to each subject. Appearance and Personailty need at least one paragraph that is at least ten sentances each. For history, you need two paragraphs at least ten sentances each as well. Please do this and I will be back to look it over again. ^.^

~Niccy

Brutak - August 12, 2006 12:19 AM (GMT)
Edited it some made all three areas a lil longer I think my looks reset had like 2 paragraphs and forgot to copy it >< /cry

Aplin - August 12, 2006 01:54 AM (GMT)
Accepted ^.^




Hosted for free by InvisionFree