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Name:Adiemus
Age: 1
Gender:fae
Pack: loner
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Appearance:Her petite figure is painted silver, Dark raven tints her back, ears and paws. Her eyes are like ice. Cold and show almost no emotion. Her frame his muscular but slim. She moves silently with grace. Her raven nose and lips blend nicely with her beautiful pelt. Her ice like orbs are masked with black outlining fur. She has a scar the runs from her nose down her muzzle and threw to her lower jaw. Her front tooth is broken in half, but this does not hinder her much. She is somewhat angelic in a way. The way she moves is fluent and graceful, with pride. Her orbs are the only feature that is not angelic. The cold appearence of her orbs can be somewhat disturbing. She is strong and muscualr. She is agile and fast on her feet, her reflexs are keen.
Personality:She isn't trusting of many. To gain her trust is a gift. she does not show her emotions very well. Therefore if she actually did care about someone, she most likely wouldn't express this emotion very much, if that at all. She is secreative and reserved. She lieks the company of others but does well on her own. She usually doesn't stay in one place for long. She fears betrayal of those she trusts and losing ones she feels close to. To betray her is to choose death. For she takes this to heart and hunts those that betray her down, stalking them to insanity until she finally strikes. she can be refered to as the angel of death at some points in time.
History: She was born to a pack that was peaceful to begin with. Her closest sibling was Monataria. But unlike Monataria, Adiemus looked up to her father, she wished to follow in his footsteps. Monataria didnt agree with his ways and thought the pack should use force to gain what they wanted. as they matured, Monataria made her views more and more pronounced. Adiemus was tirn between her father and sister.
As they neared a year in age monataria decided to break off from the pack. She stood up and told all those who wish to come to follow. Adiemus looked from one back to the other. She backed away and stood beside her father. Monataria glared at her.."You will pay for your betrayal! Mark my Words Adiemus!" She growled as she turned and left with much of the younger members of the pack who seeked power.
Late one night as they were in the dens a patroller returned frantically."Sir, its Monataria is on the attack!" he said breathlessly.."Its war sir! they are less than a mile away and she has gained more followers. Adiemus felt her heart sink. She did not want to fight her beloved sister. Her father stood, his noble figure a sillohtter in the dens entrance.
"So be it!" he said in a firm voice."Everyone is to be on the move." he said. The pack members quickly left the den and headed for the intruders. Adiemus felt numb and confused. Why was Monataria attacking her birth pack. As the topped the ridge, Monataria and her followers could be seen in the valley bellow. She looked up and saw them, she signaled for them to attack. Adiemus backed up a ways as she watched as a pack of power thirsty wolfs came charging at them. She crouched as they clashed with the pack. Horrible snarls and growls admitted by both sides. She watched as they clung togetehr in big heaps flying fur. Yelps and growls becaem bone rattling. Her ears pricked and her nose twitched as she came across Monataria's familuar scent. She turn and saw the crazed sibling behind her. The brissles on her neck extened and her head low. Her stained teeth were beared as she lunged at Adiemus. She yelped she she grasped her by the scruff and brught her to the ground. She stood and lunged back, colliding with the big femmora. As teeth clashed, Adiemus discovered a side of herself she had never known before. She grasped onto Montaria's shoulder, she felt her teeth hit bone. She scraped her teeth againest the bone. Pain struck her muzzle as Monataris dug her teeth in her muzzle. She let go with a sharp yelp. Both stood labored breathing and bleeding openly. None were slain that night, but some joined up wiht Monataria's Band. That night Adiemuscleaned her wounds and watched as her Birth pack was slowly spliting up. She turned and left. She wanted no part in this.
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