Name: Teaka
Position: Pup of Skah
Pack: Skah (Daughter of Khu and Kiri)
Age: 5-7 weeks
History: ...
Color: Teaka is the smaller of the two pups, her brother being the larger. Her fur is of an ebonite hue, the only thing that differentiates her from that of her mother, are whire paws. When she ages, she like her mother will acquire the same white bib like patch of fur beneath her muzzle. She is of light and slender build, tail elegant and well plumed, ears large and well proportioned with that of her head. Muzzle is tapered in a regal fashion, and she had a certain aire of 'look at me' around her. Golden orbs glow from beneath black brows, charcoal nose resting on the tip of her muzzle. Her face is pointed, almos foxlike, making for a beautiful wolfess when she ages.
Personality: One word explains Teaka.. Maturity. She tends to sit back and watched the other wolves talk and show dominance... Teaka wants to grow up. She will hang onto every word an adult says, rather than play with her brother. She likes company, and will distress if left alone, she tends to follow along behind her brother, willing to let him lead, although sometimes she enjoys to play games.. Her way. She is outgoing and likes to play dare. She is laid back and calm and nothing makes her fret. To her knowledge is key.
Alrighty...I think I'm going to have to move this back to 'Pending', There are a few things you may need to fix.
1) Has Teaka been accepted as a Skah pup, or is that the pack you want him to join? Unless he has been officially accepted, you'd just have to leave "Pack" and "Position" blank. If he was born of a Skah wolfess, please state that. (I'm pretty sure this is Kiri's pup, right?)
2) You'd need to fill in your History. Even if you'd want it to be secret during the roleplay, it must be posted in the application. Just remember that, even if the roleplayer has read your history here, their character can't use it unless he/she has been told. They're not mind-readers, you know. :P Just write a bit about his parents, perhaps. I understand that since he is a pup, he doesn't have much.
3)Add at least 4 or 5 sentances more to your Appearance and Personality. Add more than just color to appearance, perhaps build, size, eyecolor etc etc. Also, try and copy/paste the post onto Microsoft Word to fix any grammar or spelling mistakes.
Once these steps are completed, I'd be happy to move this back to accepted. Please don't post until I (or another Mod) does so.
Sorry I didn't know that this was there... It has been tweaked by both me and Kiri... Is it now acceptable? Sorry if I seem rude, I am not trying to be. This is my first pup after all, geez. I am happy with it now, so please reacept it... And I cannot help my spelling... my word processor doesn't word when I am online, and matters are worse when I get on really late.