EDITOR, HILL VALLEY TELEGRAPH:
I do apologise for the delay in this new story, but I've been busy with exams and such.
Anyway, the new story on the HVT is now online!
Doc and Ritchie go to 1995 to pick up some move tickets, but when they return to 1986 they discover an alternate reality where Doc's family don't exist and Marty has broken his wrist! Somehow they've changed history.....
Comments here please!
Mike Mahoney
Editor, Hill Valley Telegraph
www.hillvalleytelegraph.uni.cc
DOCSGIRL:
hey that was awesome! i really liked it alot
BLIND SPOT:
Hey Mike, that was a great story! I've been wondering when your new one was going to be up.
Cool to see a slightly futuristic Hill Valley. Seeing how different 2015 was from 1985, I'd always been curious of how it looked in the "between" years. I do wonder, though, how Tiff met Michael Hinton in the 'original' Lone Pine timeline. Seeing as she was off work, Hinton couldn't have met her there.
BTTF FREAK 88:
Thats AWESOME! My bad, I forgot to read the full story. lol I skimed through it. Sorry
SCFARRIS:
What can I say except that it was great Mike. Good work
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MARLENE MCFLY:
S'cool!!
VERNE BROWN:
hey that was REALLY good
MR. TUESDAY:
"Funny how everything concerning us is always on the front page somewhere"
I was wondering when somone was gonna put that line in a fanfic.
That alone is enough for me to say "Good Fic"
FRASIER CRANE:
Nice one! I quite like stories where history has been changed, and even though it wasn't like 1985-A in this story, the changes were still good and showed how much Doc's and Marty's lives would have been affected if not for the Tannens.
I also liked the tie-in to the previous story (Verne's project) and how Marty, Jennifer and Lorraine were written into the story. And the twist after Ritchie saves Tiff was good - it was only then I realised why the story is called what it is!
And yes, I did also like the line about the newspaper headlines.
EDITOR, HILL VALLEY TELEGRAPH:
I thought the newspaper joke would get a few laughs.
I'm glad everyone likes the story. Next one is currently being written!
Mike Mahoney
Editor, Hill Valley Telegraph
www.hillvalleytelegraph.uni.cc
This is another one of Mike Mahoney's awesome fics. In this story, Doc and his oldest son (Ritchie Chase) take a trip into the future - and he inadvertantly makes Marty's life worse off. I don't exactly agree with the concept, but it's still a very interesting read.