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Title: Hellvalley/chrystal Tokyo My New Fan Fic


Jennifer Mcfly - December 5, 2007 04:05 AM (GMT)
October 26th 1985
10:00 am
Marty Mcfly Had just woken up and was hungry for breakfast. Quickly and quietly, he got dressed and brushed his hair. Biff, who was his father, slept in late on weekends and was a very violent man. The last thing Marty wanted to do was wake him so he quickly grabbed his skate board and escaped out of a secret exit that Lorraine, his mother, had made for him. Marty escaped out the window to grab a McMuffin, orange juice, pancakes, and milk. He had to hurry he walked into the McDonalds and ordered breakfast. It was 10:03 when he had ordered. “Sorry sir we stop serving breakfast here at 9:45; Biff’s orders.” The employee apologized. Marty said to himself, “Geez, does Biff own everything in this town?” before turning back to the employee and continuing, “Fine, I’ll have a double cheese burger with fries and Pepsi.” After a minute or two, the employee handed the food over to Marty and said, “Here you go, sir.” Marty liked come to this McDonalds because the waitress was very pretty. Marty rushed back to his house as fast as he could in hopes of getting there before Biff awoke.
October 26th 1985
11:30 pm
“Oh man,” said Marty, “If I don't hurry up soon, Biff is gonna send me to boarding school in Germany! Gah! I can't be late again!” Once he arrived, Marty went to his room. He had posters of Huey Lewis, the new Van Halen, and Madonna. He had a crush on her and loved how her style of music and videos caused so much controversy. Marty was hungry and he called up room service at Biff’s pleasure paradise. You could chose a male or female waitress in an outfit of your choice. Marty didn’t like the idea of objectifying woman, although he had a crush on a waitress who also was Biff’s current girlfriend and main striper, Jennifer Jane Parker. Marty called the number and said, “Yeah, I d like 4 triple decker cheeseburgers, curly fries, a Pepsi, a diet Pepsi, and a diamond ring. And I’d like to request Jennifer Parker as the waitress.” A voice replied, “Ok, she’ll be there in 5 minutes sir.” Precisely five minute later, Jennifer walked in and said, “Hey Mr. Marty Mcfly, here’s your food. Why do you need all this food Marty? Are you that hungry?” Jennifer laughed. Jennifer’s laugh was one of the things Marty loved about her. “Actually, Jen the foods for me and you.” Marty answered. At these words, she appeared slightly worried and replied, “Um thanks for the thought Marty, but Biff would kill me if I ate this stuff; I am his girlfriend and main star stripper.” Frustrated that Biff made his life even more hell, replied, “What? A girl like you, his girlfriend?” Feeling an equal frustration at Marty’s lack of understanding, Jennifer replied, “It’s not by choice Marty, if I’m not his girlfriend or his main striper and have sex with him, Biff will kick me and my dad out of the apartment and out of this casino!” Trying to change the subject, Marty suggested, “Well, Jennifer, why don’t you just eat something; I can see your bones hanging out.” Looking at her arms to examine her boney body, Jennifer answered, “Well, Biff never lets me eat more then a lean cuisine and diet pills.”
“Oh my god, that’s horrible!” Marty replied in pure shock. “Well, maybe I can eat the burgers, fries, and shake. I do want my curves back.” Jennifer said and then asked, “So Doc said he invented something and he wants you to come tonight, right?” Marty just looked at her before answering, “Well yeah, Jennifer, that’s what he said.” Looking up in thought, Jennifer asked, “Do you think Doc would mind if I came? I’ve always admired the man.” Marty chuckled and answered, “Sure, Jenny.”
“Um Marty,” Jennifer said, “there’s something ive been wanting to tell you ever since we met when I was 11 and a slave here. I have had the biggest crush on you. You look like my favorite actor, Michael J. Fox and, well, I think we’re destined for each other.” Marty sat there blushing when he suddenly spoke, “Well the truth is, Jennifer, I feel the same way about you; You’re so beautiful, kind, and look just like that hit actress Elizabeth Sue and also Claudia Wells. Lets be boyfriend and girlfriend.” Marty put the ring on Jennifer’s finger. Marty looked at the time and said, “Oh, Jen, we need to leave.”
“But what if Biff notices that I’m not here to strip or pleasure him” Jennifer asked worriedly. “Well, we can create an aqua drop of you; we have tons of these that Biff stopped making ‘cause employees would make fools of themselves and never used an aqua drop. also Jennifer, my dad and Doc Brown originally invented aqua drops, but Biff stole the recipe for them. We need it back. Who knows what he is doing with those aqua drops” Marty explained. “So Marty, I’m ready to go lets go and with that the skate boarded to JC Penny.” Jennifer suddenly informed. Marty and Jennifer quickly hurried to JC Penny, where Doc was standing there, wondering why Marty had brought the waitress and striper from Biff’s pleasure paradise. “Hi, Doc. This is my girlfriend Jennifer.” Marty introduced when Doc suddenly barked, “Marty!!! Don’t you know what she does for a living?”
“Doc, it’s not like she has a choice. If she doesn’t work for him he will foreclose the Parker’s house.” Marty explained. Doc stared with his usual madly wide-eyed stare before tossing his hands up in surrender and saying, “Oh ok, I guess it’s alright if she’s a good guy then. Welcome, Jennifer my name is Doc Emmet Lathdrop Brown and what I have invented here will solve our problems.”
“Doc has Hillvaley always been known as heel valley?” Jennifer asked Doc, who immediately answered, “No, it used to be a nice, quiet town and Biff was just a bully. ‘Till he became rich in 1975; then everything changed.” Excitement coursing through her veins after acquiring this knowledge, she suddenly asked, “Oh! How did he become rich?” Giving this one some thought first, Doc answered, “Well, apparently in the future he stole my delorean while Marty and I were looking for you. And he gave a future sports amanita, thus why he is in power now. So we are going to 2015 to make sure you don’t pass out and stay with us and that Marty, if he does buy the book, keeps it in safe place.”
“Well let’s go!” Jennifer suggested excitedly. They all got in the car when Doc began flipping switches in random places and saying, “Jennifer, Marty, prepare yourself for temporal displacement!” With those last two words, Jennifer and Marty knew exactly what the car was and exclaimed, “So it‘s a time machine!”
WRITTEN BY JENNIFER JANE MCFLY AUGUST 27TH 9:27 PM CHARECTERS MELODY BORWN AND HARMONY MCFLY ARE OWNED BY ME ALL OTHER CHARTERS OWNED BY UNIVRSAL AMBERLIN BOOB GAL STEPHEN SPIELBURG AND BOB GALE BOB CANNON NOW ON TO PERMNIT HELL VALLY
Made readable by Max7345. (I apologize if some parts don‘t make much sense. It was difficult to know what words she was trying to type exactly.)




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