Title: Alternate Bttf: Part Three
Description: the conclusion of the AU trilogy...
bttf44 - October 24, 2006 06:10 PM (GMT)
Sorry for slacking up on this, yesterday. I just got caught up in the frenzy of a certain comment page for a certain video yesterday and the day before. Of course, the video was great - some many of the comments made me feel sick. Oh, well, back to the story.
November 13, 1955
7:00 AM PST
It was the morning after the night of the famous Hill Valley lightning storm - which was the same night that Jennifer and Marty had gotten Marty's father to stand up to Biff Tannen and Marty's parents to kiss and fall in love. Furthermore, it was also the same night that the Doc of 1955 had sent the slightly younger Marty and Jennifer back to 1985, as well as the same night that the slightly older Marty and the Doc of 1985 were sent back to 1885. While that night will be memorable to just about all the Hill Valley residents - it will be of especially great significance to Doc, Marty, and Jennifer.
Jennifer and Doc were both sleeping in the living room of Doc's mansion. Jennifer was sleeping in the chair, with her feet on the hoverboard - and she had put Doc on the couch. Jennifer had also placed Doc's letter from 1885 near the fireplace to dry. The television had been on all night, and now a program was just about to start.
'Hey, kids,' asked the television announcer, 'what time is it?'
'Howdy Doody time!' replied the kids on the show. Then they began to sing, 'It's Howdy Doody time, it's Howdy Doody time...'
Doc then woke up, and he clutched his head.
'Great Scott!' exclaimed Doc. Then he began to make his way to the television, accidentally kicking the hoverboard from under Jennifer's feet. 'Ooh... Howdy Doody time?'
Doc then got out his tape recorder, and he began to speak into it. 'Date, Sunday, November 13, 1955. 7:01AM. Last night's time travel experiment was apparently a complete success. Lightning struck the clock tower at precisely 10:04 PM, sending the necessary 1.21 gigawatts into the time vehicle, which vanished in a brilliant flash of light leaving a pair of fire trails behind. I, therefore assumed that Marty, Jennifer, and the time vehicle were transported forward through time into the year 1985. After that... after that... I can't recall what happened. I don't even remember how I got home! Perhaps the gigawatt discharge coupled with the temporal displacement field generated by the time vehicle caused a disruption of my own brain waves resulting in a condition of temporary amnesia. Indeed, I now recall the moments after the time vehicle disappeared... into the future... I saw a vision of Jennifer saying, 'I've come back from the future'.'
Jennifer began to awakens and get up. Doc didn't see her, though.
'Undoubtedly, this was some sort of...' Doc continued.
'Hey, Doc. Doc,' called out Jennifer, as she grinned at Doc
Doc turned around, he saw Jennifer and began to scream.
'Argh! Argh! Argh!' Doc shrieked.
Doc stepped backwards from Jennifer, but the hoverboard was there - causing Doc to trip over it and fall backwards onto his piano. His elbow landed on some keys, which causes a rather sinister sounding chord to play.
'Doc, calm down, okay?' pleaded Jennifer. 'Just calm down, it's me, it's Jennifer.'
'No!' protested Doc. 'It can't be you! I just sent you back to the future!'
'But I came back from the future, remember?' pleaded Jennifer. 'Last night, you fainted... I brought you home.'
'This can't be happening!' Doc cried out, with disbelief. 'You can't be here! It doesn't make sense! I don't believe you are here.'
Doc then ran into the bathroom, and he slammed the door. Jennifer spoke to Doc through the door.
'I am here, and it does make sense.' Jennifer pleaded. 'Marty and I came back to 1955 with the you from 1985 to get a book back from Biff. So once we got the book back, you - that is the you from 1985 - and Marty were in the DeLorean when it got struck by lightning and you and Marty got sent back to 1885!'
Doc then opened the door and asked, in disbelief,'1885? It's a very interesting story, future girl, but there's one little thing that doesn't make sense. If the me of the future and Marty are now in the past, how could you possibly know about it?
'You sent me a letter,' Jennifer explained, as she showed Doc the letter.
oooooooooo
A few minutes later, Doc was reading the letter, 'Dear Jennifer, if my calculations are correct, you will receive this letter immediately after you saw the DeLorean struck by lightning. First, let me assure you that Marty and I are both alive. However, Marty has fallen very ill - and we don't have any good medicine in this era to make him better. So you'll have to pick up some aspirin from 1955. The lightning bolt that hit the DeLorean caused a gigawatt overload which scrambled the time circuits, activated the flux capacitor, and sent Marty and me back to 1885. The overload shorted out the time circuits and destroyed the flying circuits. Unfortunately, the car will never fly again.' Then Doc turned to Jennifer, and asked, 'It actually flew?'
'Yeah, well,' explained Jennifer, 'you had a hover conversion done in the early 21st century.'
'Incredible!' replied Doc. Then, turning back to the letter, he continued, 'Marty and I began to attempt to repair the damage to the time circuits. Unfortunately, this proved impossible because suitable replacement parts will not be invented until 1947. On top of everything, Marty has fallen ill - and there doesn't appear to be any suitable medicine in this era. Aspirin should be able to cure his illness, though.'
'I hope aspirin is strong enough for his illness,' Jennifer said, with concern. 'He's my boyfriend, and I would hate to lose him. He means so much to me.'
'Right, I understand,' Doc said, nodding. He then turned back to the letter, and continued, 'I have buried the DeLorean in the Del Gato mine adjacent to the old Boot Hill Cemetery as shown on the enclosed map. Hopefully it will remain undisturbed and preserved until you uncover it in 1955. Inside, you will find repair instructions. My 1955 counterpart - that's me - should have no problem repairing it so you can drive it back to September 2 on 1885.'
'I'm sorry, Doc,' Jennifer said, apologetically. 'I should have been more careful around Biff. I didn't know he would punch me out like that.'
'There are plenty worse places to be than the Old West,' Doc said, softly. 'I could've ended up in the Dark Ages. They probably would've burned me at the stake as a heretic or something. Let's look at the map. It says here the time vehicle is buried here in a side tunnel. We may have to blast.'
'Well, Doc,' Jennifer said, sighing, 'I just hope we can get your older self and Marty safely back in 1986.'
'I personally wouldn't mind staying in the Old West,' replied Doc, 'but, yeah, I can imagine that Marty would like to return to his own time.'
'Well, anyway,' Jennifer said, 'I suppose we should head over to the drug store soon, and pick up some aspirin for Marty.'
bttf44 - October 25, 2006 12:50 AM (GMT)
November 14, 1955
10:00 AM PST
So Jennifer and Doc were walking to Boot Hill Cemetery, they saw an old mineshaft, just like 1985 Doc in 1885 mentioned in his letter. Nearby were a few tombstones. Dynamite blew - and Jennifer, Doc and Copernicus covered their ears.
'Whoa!' exclaimed Jennifer. 'I think you woke up the dead with that blast.'
'Take this camera,' instructed Doc. 'I want to document everything!'
As Jennifer and Doc went inside to find the DeLorean, Doc was saying, 'This reminds me of the time I attempted to reach the centre of the earth. I'd be reading my favourite author, Jules Verne. I spent weeks preparing for the expedition, I didn't even get this far. Of course, I was only 12 at the time. It was the writings of Jules Verne that had a profound effect on my life. I was 11 when I first read '20,000 Leagues Under the Sea'. That's when I realized that I must devote my life into science.'
Jennifer noticed a little alcove. It was covered with wooden planks, one of which had the letters ELB marked on it.
'Hey, Doc,' called out Jennifer, 'check this out. I believe those are your initials.'
'Oh, yes,' replied Doc, 'just like in 'Journey To The Center of the Earth'! That means the time machine must be right through this wall.'
Doc and Jennifer then chopped through the planks and rocks. They went through and they saw the DeLorean, covered in a sheet. Doc sighed with astonishment.
'It's been buried here for 70 years, 2 months, and 13 days,' remarked Doc. 'Astounding.'
oooooooooo
Later, Jennifer and Doc were repairing the time machine. Jennifer was reading 1985 Doc in 1885's instructions. Doc stared at some parts through a magnifying glass.
'As you can see,' Jennifer was reading, 'the lightning bolt shorted out the time circuit control microchip. The attached sh... sh...'
'Schematic,' Doc said, helpfully.
'... schematic diagram will allow you to build a replacement unit with the 1955 components,' continued Jennifer, 'thus restoring the time machine to perfect working order.'
'Unbelievable, that his piece of junk could be such a big problem,' muttered Doc. 'No wonder this circuit failed - it says, 'Made in Japan'.'
'What do you mean, Doc?' Jennifer asked, confused. 'All the best stuff is made in Japan.'
'Unbelievable!' replied Doc.
oooooooooo
'Well, Doc,' Jennifer said, quietly, 'I wonder how your older self and Jennifer are coping with being in the Old West, especially with Marty being so sick, so I return to 1885 on September first?'
'Actually, it's better to send you back on September second,' replied Doc. 'You see, because my older self wrote the letter on September first - if you were to come back in time before my older self wrote the letter, it could create a time paradox. So it's better to wait until the next day.'
'Oh, okay,' replied Jennifer. 'It does sound like a nice era to visit, but I wouldn't want to live there forever. I'm pretty sure that Marty wouldn't, either.'
'You know,' explained Doc, 'when I was a kid, I always wanted to be a cowboy. I've always dreamed of visiting the Old West. It's amazing that I actually ended up there.'
'So, Doc,' asked Jennifer, 'where can I change into some different clothes?'
'Come with me,' urged Doc, as he showed her to the closet where he had various outfits from different time periods. 'How about this pink Victorian dress? I think you'd look really good in that.'
'Oh, I love it, Doc!' gushed Jennifer, as she went to the bathroom to change. After Jennifer finished changing, she was wearing a pink frilly Victorean dress that went down to her feet.
She then came out of the bathroom and asked, 'How do I look, Doc?'
'It looks like you'll fit right in,' replied Doc, after taking a good look at Jennifer.
'I just hope I don't run into any Tannens!' Jennifer grumbled. 'I'm fed up with them!'
'Don't worry, Jennifer,' Doc replied. 'Marty and I will be with you. When you find us. we will protect you.'
'Thank you, Doc,' replied Jennifer. 'You're such a good friend.'
Doc and Jennifer then headed out to the old abandoned drive-in movie theatre.
Jennifer then proceded to to say good-bye to Doc.
'I can't believe I'll have to wait 30 years to see you again,' Doc said, with tears coming from his eyes. 'You kids have been great friends.'
'Hey, Doc,' Jennifer asked, 'if you go to the future, look me up, okay?'
'Indeed I will,' Doc replied.
Jennifer then accellerated the Delorean up to 88 miles per hour, until it broke the time barrier.
Jennifer Mcfly - October 25, 2006 02:28 AM (GMT)
i had to write a chapter of this hope you dont mind btff 444 i hope i did a good gob on this!
sunday november 15th 1985
12:00 am
jennifer then replied so where can ichange into some diffrent clothes doc
then shows her to the closet he has with various outfits from diffrent time periods jennifer was changing she came out how do i loo kdoc docs like youl fit right in jennifer was whereing a pink frilly victorean dress that went down to her feet i just hope idont run into any tannens! im feddup with them
dont worry jennifer me and mart ywill be with you when you find us we will protect you thank you doc your such a good friend wtith that they headed out to the old abandond drivein movie theartre.
bttf44 - October 25, 2006 03:41 AM (GMT)
I merged this with the other chapter. :)
Jennifer Mcfly - October 26, 2006 01:54 AM (GMT)
Jennifer then proceded to to say goodbye to do icant belive ill have to
wait 30 years to see you again doc said with tears coming from his eyes
you kids have been great friends hey doc jennifer asked if you go to the
future look me up ok? indeed i will doc said Jennifer then proceded to
make the delorean go up to88 miles per hour
november 10th 1885
jennifer was driving the delorean when all of a sudden indians were
trying to attack her shit indians jennifer said she proceded to hid in a
cave were she enconterd a bear and fell on to a fence post and past out
mark parker theres a passed out girl here help me bring her in the house
5 hours letter jennifer woke up mom mom is that you just relax jessica
parker said i had the worst nightmare jennifer said i dreamed i was in
the past and being chased by indians there there now your safe in 1885
jennifer shot up from her bed 1885 yes at the parker ranch jennifer
responded parker ranch so whats your name any way child you seemed
to hit your head pretty hard um jennifer parker she said jamie then
replied are you related to us no i dont think so jennifer said
well jennifer dinners gona be ready soon so come and get it with that
jennifer went down stairs to meet her great great grandfather the first
parker born in america steven parker so who is this jennifer asked oui this is steven parker first parker born in america jennifer asked can i
hold him well i dont think he likes stranges very much jennifer then
picked up steven so your my great great grandfather and then jennifer f
felt
somthing wet her arm great your my great grandfather and you
peed on me. so jennifer mark parker asked what were you doing in the feild and i nthis town without a hat um i cant realy aford hat ah jamie
has a hat that will match your outfit realy jennifer said yea come with
me jamie then said mark come with me what jamie i dont think we
should trust this girl ah but jamie i think shes realted to us or somthing
look how mark acks around her he never acts that way around
strangers
jamie gave jennifer that hat so where are you fro manyway jennifer
replied san fransico and with that jennifer said thank you very much and
she heded out to find marty and doc.
bttf44 - October 26, 2006 03:57 AM (GMT)
September 2, 1885
6:00 AM PST
Jennifer was driving the DeLorean when, all of a sudden, Indians were trying to attack her.
'Shit! Indians!' muttered Jennifer, as she proceeded to hide in a cave - where the indiand shot at the DeLorean, ripping the fuel line.
'Damn,' muttered Jennifer, as she felt like crying.. 'Now we might be stuck here forever.'
Jennifer then heard a growl behind her. She turned around, and she saw that it was a bear. Jennifer screamed as she ran out of the cave. Jennifer tripped, causing her slide down a hill and crash into a fense. Jennifer was then rendered unconscious.
'Jessica!' called out a young man called Mark, as he slapped Jennifer to see if she was awake. 'There's a passed out girl here. Help me bring her in the house.'
oooooooooo
Five hours later, Jennifer woke up, and sleepily asked, 'Mom? Mom, is that you?'
'There, there now,' the woman said, soothingly. 'Just relax. You've been asleep for nearly five hours, now.'
'I had the worst nightmare,' Jennifer groaned. 'I dreamed I was in the past, and I was being chased by Indians and a bear.'
'Well, you're safe and sound,' the woman replied. 'Here now in 1885.'
Jennifer shot up from her bed and shouted, '1885!'
'Yes,' replied the woman, 'at the parker ranch.'
'Parker ranch?' Jennifer exclaimed, stunned.
'So whats your name any way, child?' asked the woman. 'You seemed to hit your head pretty hard.'
'Um, Jennifer Parker,' Jennifer replied.
'Are you related to us?' asked the woman.
No, I don't think so,' Jennifer replied.
'Well, Jennifer,' said the woman, 'dinner's gonna be ready soon, so come and get it with that.'
Jennifer then went downstairs to meet her great-great-grandfather.
'So, who is this?' asked Jennifer.
'This is the first Parker born in America,' explained the woman. 'Steven Douglas Parker.'
'Can I hold him?' asked Jennifer. 'He looks so adorable.'
'Well,' replied the woman, 'I don't think he likes strangers very much.'
Jennifer then picked up Steven and said, 'So you're my great-great-grandfather...' Jennifer then felt something wet her arm. '... and you peed on me.'
Then a young man walked into the room and asked, 'So Jennifer, what were you doing in the feild and in this town without a hat?'
'Um,' stammered Jennifer, 'I can't really afford a hat.'
'Ah,' replied the man, 'well, Jamie has a hat that will match your outfit.'
'Really?' Jennifer asked, stunned.
'Yeah,' replied the man, 'come with me.'
The woman then said, 'Mark, come with me.'
'What, Jamie?' asked Mark.
'I don't think we should trust this girl,' Jamie said, skeptically.
'Ah,' sighed Mark, 'but, Jamie, I think she's related to us, or somthing. Look how Mark acts around her. He never acts that way around strangers.'
Jamie then gave Jennifer the hat, and asked, 'So where are you from anyway?'
'San Fransisco,' replied Jennifer. Than Jennifer said, 'Thank you very much!'
Then Jennifer headed out to find Marty and Doc. She checked her dress pocket, and she saw that the bottle of aspirin was still there. After wandering around a little bit, she found the Palace Saloon. She stepped in and walked up to the bartender.
'What'll it be, stranger?' the bartender asked Jennifer.
'Uh,' stammered Jennifer, 'I'll have, uh, ice water.'
'Ice water?' asked one of the old timers, while his buddies started to laugh.
'Water?' asked the bartender, incredulously. 'You want water, you better go dunk your head in the horse trough back there. In here, we pour whiskey.'
The bartender then poured Jennifer a small glass. Jennifer just stares at it.
'Excuse me,' Jennifer asked, 'I'm trying to find an Emmett Brown.'
Before the bartender could respond, though, a tough sounding voice said, 'Well, lookie what we've got here! Pretty nice dress, girly!' Buford then began to lift up Jennifer's skirt, and he added, 'Although, I think you'd look better wearing nothing at all.' Buford then touched her breast and tried to give her a French kiss.
'You jerk!' Jennifer shouted, she slapped Buford.
Buford then started to chase Jennifer.
'Go get the rope,' Buford shouted to his gang. 'I think it's time to teach this broad a lesson.'
Jennifer was running away with all of her might, but she saw Buford and his gang catching up with her. Buford then lassoed a rope over Jennifer's neck, and dragged her over to the new courthouse. They then tied her up to the pole and then said lets hang her.
'We got ourselves a new courthouse,' declared Buford. 'High time we had a hanging!'
'Somebody help!' shrieked Jennifer, as the noose was tightened. Jennifer put her hand between her neck and the noose so she wouldn't suffocate. Buford and his gang were laughing loudly.
'Haven't had a hanging in a long time!' added Buford.
Suddenly, Doc showed up - and he shot a gun at Buford, cutting the rope loose from Jennifer. 'It'll shoot the fleas off a dogs back at 500 yards, Tannen - and it's pointed straight at your head!'
'You owe me money, blacksmith,' growled Buford.
'How do ya figure?' demanded Doc.
'My horse threw his shoe,' growled Buford. 'Seeing you was the one who done the shoeing, I figures you was responsible.'
'Well, since you never paid me for the job,' said Doc, 'I say that makes us even!'
'Wrong!' growled Biff. 'See, I was on my horse when he threw his shoe - and I got throwed off. And that just caused me to bust a perfectly good bottle of fine Kentucky Redeye. So the way I figure, blacksmith, you owe me $5 for the whiskey, and $75 for the horse.'
'Look,' Doc protested, 'if your horse threw his shoe, bring him back and I'll reshoe him!'
'But I shot that horse!' argued Buford.
'Well that's your problem, Tannen!' retorted Doc.
'Wrong,' growled Buford. 'That's yours. So from now on, you better be looking behind you when you walk. 'Cause one day you gonna get a bullet in your back.' Then to his gang, Buford added, 'Let's go!'
Buford and his gang then ran off, leaving Doc and Jennifer alone.
'Doc!' Jennifer yelled out, excitedly.
'How nice to see you, Jennifer!' gushed Doc. 'Did you bring the aspirin along for Marty?'
'Yeah, it's right here in my pocket,' Jennifer replied, as she pulled out the bottle from her pocket and showed.
'Good!' replied Doc. 'Let's go back to our place, and we'll tend to Marty.'
Jennifer Mcfly - October 27, 2006 12:12 AM (GMT)
'Excuse me,' Jennifer asked, 'I'm trying to find an Emmett Brown.'
Before the bartender could respond, though, a tough sounding voice
said, 'Well, lookie what we've got here! Pretty nice dress, girly!' Buford t
then began to lift up Jennifer's skirt, and he added, 'Although, I think
you'd look better wearing nothing at all.' he then touched her breast and gave her a french kiss.
jennifer then replied you jerk she then slaped him as he chaged after
her he told his gang to get the rop bufford said i think its time to teach
this broad a lesson jennifer was running and she saw bufford tannen
come after her he tied her up to the pole and then said lets hang her
then doc showd up and shot a gun at tannen and cut lose the rope from
jennifer take that tannen! bufford then said hey blacksmith you owe me
80 dollers well then i guess were even sence you never paid me for
the job bufford then said you better watch your back blacksmith cause
one of these days youl have a gun pointed to your back bufford ran off,
jennifer then yeled out doc! Jennifer doc said with a stern tone to his
voice jennifer i gave you explicit intrucions to stay in 1955 but doc j
jennifer said i had to get the asprin for marty i cant lose him! so where
is doc then said well its gret to see you again as the two hugged
doc then brought jennifer over to his house. marty jennifer said i have
some asprin for you marty slowly woke up jjenifer? yes wow arent you
the sight for sore eyes let me look at you marty your acting like you
havent seen me i na week i havent anyway marty here take some
asprin marty took it then jennifer and marty started to chat.
bttf44 - October 27, 2006 03:41 AM (GMT)
Jennifer was a bit apprehensive, as she followed Doc over to his house. She saw that Marty was asleep on a cot.
'Marty,' Jennifer said, softly, 'I have some aspirin for you.'
Marty then slowly woke up, as he said, 'Jennifer?'
'Yes, it's me' replied Jennifer. 'I brought you some aspirin.'
'Wow, aren't you a sight for sore eyes,' exclaimed Marty. 'Let me look at you.'
'Has it really been that long since you last saw me?' Jennifer asked, smiling.
'Well, I wasn't sure if I would ever see you again,' replied Marty. 'I wasn't sure if Western Union would ever deliver the letter to you.'
'Anyway, Marty,' Jennifer said, as handed Marty some tablets and a glass of water, 'here, take some aspirin.'
Marty then took some aspirin, as he swallowed. 'Thanks, Jennifer,' whispered Marty.
'So, Jennifer,' asked Doc, 'where did you park the DeLorean?'
'It's in the cave,' replied Jennifer, quietly. 'I ended up running into some Indians, then I was being chased by a bear. The fuel line is ripped out.'
'You mean we're out of gas?' Doc asked, incredulously.
'Well, what about the Mr. Fusion?' asked Jennifer, confused.
'Mr. Fusion powers the time circuits and the flux capacitor,' explained Doc. 'But the internal combustion engine runs on ordinary gasoline, it always has. There's not going to be a gas station around here until sometime in the next century. Without gasoline, we can't get the DeLorean up to 88 miles per hour.'
'So what'll we do?' groaned Marty. 'We can't be stuck here forever. We have a life to live in 1985.'
'Well, look on the positive side,' Jennifer said, in an attempt to be optimistic. 'At least we have each other. Anyway, if Doc was able to send us back home to 1985 from 1955 - I'm sure we'll be able to find a way to return to 1985 from here.'
'I hope so,' Marty said, sighing. 'This era is too boring to me.'
'Yeah, Buford is really getting on my nerves,' Jennifer said, sighing. 'He got fresh with me in the saloon, then he tried to hang me. So anyway, Marty, how are you?'
'Feeling a little better,' replied Marty, 'now that you're here with me.'
'Aw, Marty,' gushed Jennifer, blushing, 'that's so sweet.'
Just as Marty and Jennifer were about to kiss, Buford came in through the door.
'Well, blacksmith,' snarled Buford, 'you owe me 80 dollars! Someone said you lived here - so I'm gonna shoot you in the back if you don't get the money to me right away!' Buford then noticed Jennifer, and he added, 'Well, well, well, look who we have here! I like you in that pink dress, though you'd look better in nothing at all!'
Buford then tied up Jennifer, while Marty watched helplessly from his bed, as he was still too sick to move. As Marty watched Buford drag Jennifer outside, he began to cry. He was worried that Buford might kill her.
oooooooooo
'Marty, what's wrong?' asked Doc, as he walked into his house and saw that Marty was crying.
'That bastard kidnapped Jennifer,' Marty sobbed. 'Doc, what should we do?'
'Don't worry,' Doc said, softly. 'We'll think of somthing. We can maybe contact the police, and tell them that Jennifer has been kidnapped.'
'Oh, Doc, what if he kills her?' Marty asked, sobbing. 'What if he kills her? She means so much to me, and I can't stand to lose her.'
'Try not to fret, Marty,' Doc said, as he gently laid his arm on Marty's arm. 'You need your rest, Marty. Did Jennifer give you some aspirin?'
'Yeah, yeah, he did,' responded Marty, as he wiped his eyes with the back of his hand.
'Good,' replied Doc. 'Just leave everything to me, Marty. We won't let Buford and his gang harm Jennifer. Just try to get some rest, now.'
'Yes, Doc,' Marty said, sighing, 'I will.'
ooooooooooo
As Jennifer came to, she looked around the room, while she was in as daze. Where am I? Jennifer thought, to herself. How did I get here?
Just then, Buford came in and he snarled, 'Well, well, well, I see that our broad woke up now. You ready to give me what I want?'
'Never, you bastard!' Jennifer spat out.
'Don't you dare speak to me that way!' snarled Buford. 'Didn't your parents teach you any manners?'
'Yes, I have manners!' retorted Jennifer. 'Just not for the likes of you!'
'How dare you!' snarled Buford. 'You know, broad, I could...'
Just then, the police stormed into the room, and Marshall Strickland snarled, 'You stop right there, Buford Tannen!'
'Oh, how nice to...' Buford started to say.
Marshall Strickland then punched Buford out, and he handcuffed Buford behind his back. The rest of Buford's gang entered the room - and they started at the police, shocked. The police knocked them out, too - while handcuffing them. Then Marshall Strickland released Jennifer from her restraints, and let her go.
'Thanks,' Jennifer said, breathing heavily. 'You just saved my life.'
'We're just doing our job,' Marshall Strickland said, smiling. 'Now just run along. You won't have to worry about Buford and his gang anymore.'
As Jennifer went outside, she saw Doc standing there. She ran up to Doc and threw her arms around him. Doc returned the hug.
Jennifer Mcfly - October 27, 2006 11:40 PM (GMT)
jennifer replied yea bufford is realy getting on my nervus so marty how are you feeling a little better now that your here with me aww marty thats so sweet as jennifer embrassed marty with a kiss bufford came in thru the door well black smith you owe me 80 dollers someone said you lived here so i m gonna shoot you in the back if you dont get the money to me right away!!! bufford then notcied jennifer there weel well look who we have here i like your in that pink dress though youd look better in nothing at all! buff ord then tied up jennifer and kidnaped her marty help crap that bastards kidnaped jennifer doc what should we do doc replied dont worry we will think of somthing.
bttf44 - October 29, 2006 11:42 PM (GMT)
September 4, 1885
10:00 AM PST
Marty, Jennifer, and Doc were sitting on top of the DeLorean - as it was being pulled by horses. Doc had a whip in his hand. Marty was reading the speed off of Doc's digital speedometer.
'24!' announced Marty, as he read off the speedometer.
'It's no use, Marty and Jennifer!' Doc said, dejectedly. 'Even the fastest horse in the world can't run more than 35 or 40 miles an hour.'
'So are we stuck here forever, Doc?' asked Marty, as he was on the verge of tears.
'Yeah,' agreed Jennifer, 'I already miss being able to listen to rock and roll.'
'I miss being able to play rock and roll,' Marty added, nodding.
'Try not to fret, you two,' Doc said, softly. 'We'll think of a way to return to our time.'
'Well, you're the doc, Doc,' Marty said, trying to feel a little more optimistic.
oooooooooo
Doc was pouring some liquid into the DeLorean, as Marty and Jennifer were sitting inside it.
'Bartender says that's the strongest stuff they got,' Doc said, about the liquid. 'Try it, Marty.'
Marty tried to start the car, but it stalled. There was a strange noise coming from the back of the car.
'Need more gas...' Doc was saying.
Suddenly, there was a loud boom, as the fuel injection manifold broke off the back of the DeLorean.
'Damn!' groaned Doc. 'It blew the fuel injection manifold. Strong stuff all right. It'll take me a month to rebuild it.'
'A month?' Marty asked, horrified. 'No offence, but I hate living in this era. There's nothing to do!'
'Yeah,' agreed Jennifer, nodding. 'This is not the lifestyle that I'm used to.'
'I know, I know, I know!' Doc mumbled, as he moved towards the window. 'I wish... Wait, I've got it! We can roll it down a steep hill... No, we'd never find a smooth enough surface. Unless... Of course... Ice! We can wait until winter when the lake freezes over...'
'Winter! Doc!' Marty cried out, horrified. 'We don't belong here, Doc! This is a boring era!'
'Wait,' insisted Doc. 'Let's just think this thing through logically. We know it can't run on its own power, and we know we can't pull it. But, if we can figure out a way to push it up to 88 miles per hour... huh?'
Just then, there was the sound of a train whistle. Doc glanced outside, and he saw the steam train pulling into the station..
'That's it!' exclaimed Doc.
Marty and Jennifer jumped up, and they high-fived each other.
oooooooooo
Later on that day, Doc and the teens were talking to the train engineer.
'How fast she can go?' The engine said, as he repeated Doc's question. 'Why, I've powered her up to 55 myself. I hear that fearless Frank Fargo got one of these up to near 70 out past Verde Junction.'
'Is it possible to get it up to 90?' asked Marty.
The engineer laughed, and replied, '90? Tarnations, son, why'd ya ever be in such a hurry?'
'Well, it's just a little bet that he and I have,' Doc explained. 'That's all. Theoretically speaking, could it be done?'
'Well, I suppose if you had a straight stretch of track with a long level grade,' explained the engineer, 'and you weren't hauling no cars behind you - and if you could get the fire hot enough, I mean hotter than the blazes of hell and tarnations - well, yes, you might be able get her up that fast.'
'When's the next train coming through here?' asked Doc.
'Monday morning at eight o'clock,' replied the engineer.
oooooooooo
Doc, Marty, and Jennifer were looking at a map of Hill Valley. As Doc was describing the places, he showed Marty and Jennifer on the map.
'Here,' said Doc, 'This spur runs off the main line three miles down to Clayton Ravine. There's a long stretch of track that will still exist in 1985. This is where we'll push the DeLorean with the locomotive. Funny, this map calls Clayton Ravine Shonash Ravine. Must be an old Indian name for it. It's perfect. Nice long run that goes clear across the bridge over the ravine, you know, over near that Hilldale housing development.'
'Right, Doc, but according to this map...' Marty said, worriedly, 'there is no bridge. Well, Doc, we can scratch that idea. I mean, we can't wait around a year and a half for this thing to get finished.'
'Marty...' Doc interjected. 'It's perfect! You're just not thinking fourth dimensionally!'
'Right, right,' Marty said, blushing. 'I have a real problem with that.'
'Don't you see?' Doc continued. 'The bridge will exist in 1985. It's safe and still in use. Therefore, as long as we get the DeLorean up to 88 miles per hour before we hit the edge of the ravine, we'll instantaneously arrive at a point in time where the bridge is completed. We'll have track under us, and coast safely across the ravine!'
'What about the locomotive?' Marty asked, worriedly.
Doc grinned, and said, 'It'll be a spectacular wreck. Too bad no one will be around to see it.'
Just then, a feminine voice interrupted them. 'Argh! Help me!'
Doc turned to where the sound was. He saw a girl in the distance riding on a buckboard with out of control horses. They were heading for the edge of Shonash Ravine.
'Great Scott!' exclaimed Doc. Then, to the horses, Doc called out, 'Git!'
'Hiyah!' Marty and Jennifer said to their horses.
As Doc caught up to the woman, he shouted to her, 'Jump!'
The girl jumped off into Doc's arms just in time. The horses veered left at the end of the ravine, as the wagon broke off and fell down the ravine.
'Whoa,' Doc called, to his own horse.
The girl's hat sat on her head and covered her face.
'Oh, thank you, sir!' gushed the girl. 'You saved my...' The girl then lifted her hat, as she looked at Doc and was momentarily speechless. '...life.'
Doc stared back at the woman, and his eyes grew wide. This girl looked exactly like Jennifer Parker! This girl must either be an ancestor or a distand relative.
'Emmett Brown, at your service, Miss...' Doc started to say.
'Um, um, Parker,' the woman stammered. 'Clara Parker.'
'Clara,' Doc breathed. Then, after a pause, he added, 'What a beautiful name.'
Just then, Jennifer stared at Clara, and she gasped, 'You look just like me!' Then Jennifer and Clara both fainted.
'Great Scott!' gasped Doc. 'We'll have to take them back to the saloon with us, and see if the bartender has anything to wake them up.'
Doc and Marty then lifted the girls onto their horses, as they rode off to the saloon.
Jennifer Mcfly - October 30, 2006 04:19 AM (GMT)
marty and doc went to the sallon and asked the bartender for some
wake up juice the bar tender gave them the juice 2 cups of it and told
them to put clips on the girls noses just then bufford walked in and
kidnaped marty jennifer got some wake up juice and then woke up
mmarty buffor dthen said well look what we got here its miss i think i
mso tuff well you have 2 options miss parker you either become my
girlfriend and give me the pleasure i desire or 2 your boyfrined gets
hanged tommrow ok jennifer said i lbe your girlfriend doc said jen what
are you doing jen said i know what im doing doc doc then said bufford
howd you escape prison i made the warren andoffer he coulddent refuse
with that jennifer walked off to tanne and bufford let marty go then
bufford tied jennifer up to the house so that she couldent esacpe.
bttf44 - October 31, 2006 02:41 PM (GMT)
Marty and Doc carried Jennifer and Clara over to the saloon, and they walked up to the bartender.
'Hey, Chester,' Doc asked, somewhat quietly, 'can we have some wake-up juice for these girls? They've both passed out.'
'Sure,' replied Chester. Then, turning to his assistent, he said, 'Joey, let's make some wake-up juice.'
Marty watched, as Chester and Joey set out a variety of ingredients to make the wake-up juice.
'In about 10 minutes,' said Chester, 'they're gonna be as sober as a priest on Sunday.'
Chester then walked over with two funnels, clothes pegs, and two glasses of the liquid. He then handed the items over to Doc and Marty.
'Here, stick these clothespine onto their noses,' instructed Chester, 'and when they opens up their mouths, go ahead and pour it on down their throats. Oh, and stand back.'
Marty and Doc did what Chester said - and, at first, nothing happened. The girls then stood up, opened their eyes, and jumped up.
'Wah! Hot! Hot!' the girl shouted, in unison, as they went outside to the water basin and dunked their heads in it.
Marty and Doc went outside, and they lifted the girls out of the water and looked at their faces.
'They're still out,' Marty said, with concern.
'Oh, that, that was just a reflex action,' explained Chester. 'It's gonna take a few more minutes for the stuff to really clear up his head.'
As Marty and Doc carried the girls into the saloon, Buford and his gang walked in began to tie up Marty. Just then, the girls began to wake up.
'Well,' Buford said, learingly, 'look what we got here! It's Miss I Think I Am So Tough! Well, you have two options, miss. You either become my girlfriend and give me the pleasure I desire - or your boyfriend gets hanged tomorrow.'
'Okay,' Jennifer said, 'I'll be your girlfriend.'
'Jen, what are you doing?' Doc asked, concerned.
'I know what I'm doing, Doc,' Jennifer said, quietly.
Doc then turned to Buford, and asked, 'Buford, how'd you escape prison?'
'I made a warrant and an offer he couldn't refuse,' explained Buford.
With that, Jennifer walked up to Buford and said, 'Let Marty go!'
Buford then tied Jennifer up to the house, so that she couldn't escape. Marty felt helpless, as he watched Buford and his gang drag Jennifer away. Marty then put his head on the table and began to cry. The patrons all stared at Marty, shocked. Seamus McFly then walked up to Marty, and sat down next to him.
'What's wrong, Clint Eastwood?' Seamus asked, sympathetically.
'Buford, that bastard, kidnapped my girlfriend,' Marty sobbed.
'Oh, no, that's not good!' gasped Seamus. 'Buford is known around these parts as a womanizer.'
'What?' cried out Marty, as he lifted up his tear-stained face.
'Ah,' Seamus said, quietly, 'do you need a gun, Clint?'
oooooooooo
A few hours later, Jennifer woke up. 'Where am I?' Jennifer asked, a bit disorientedly.
'Why!' Buford replied, leeringly. 'You're in my house, beautiful! Take off your clothes, now.'
'Why?' Jennifer asked, appalled.
'You should know why,' Buford sneered, as he carried Jennifer into his bedroom and started to rip off her clothes.
With tears in her eyes, Jennifer thought, I'm sorry, Marty - but, in order to keep you alive, I have to do this.
As Buford finished ripping off Jennifer's clothes, he then raped her. Jennifer began to cry.
'You know you like it,' Buford taunted.
'I'm not that kind of girl,' Jennifer sobbed.
Without saying a word, Buford tied Jennifer to the bed. Then Buford said, 'I'll be back for your sweet body later.'
Jennifer was crying brokenly, as she felt dirty. Oh, Marty, I've been violated. I am no longer a virgin. Jennifer then began to cry heaving sobs.
oooooooooo
Marty, depressed over Jennifer being kidnapped, was drinking glass after glass of sasperella. Buford and his gang walked in, and they knocked out Marty. They then carried Marty over to Buford's cabin.
When Marty woke up, he demanded, 'What are you doing with me? Why am I tied up like this?'
'Well,' Buford replied, 'you get to watch the show where I have sex with your girl.'
'You bastard!' shouted Marty. Marty then realized that he was barefoot, as well as being tied up. He then felt real uneasy.
'Oh, yeah,' Buford sneered, 'if you try to stop me, I'll kill her!'
'You damn bastard!' shouted Marty. 'Go to hell!'
'Help!' Jennifer shouted, in desparation.
Buford then put some tape over Jennifer's mouth, and began to rape her. Marty watched, with tears welling up in his eyes. Marty then began to weep silently. Then, after Buford was done violating Jennifer - he then lifted her up and, after quickly redressing her, dragged her to another location.
Buford then ripped off Jennifer's clothes, and he said, 'Now you will kiss me and make love to me, otherwise your friends will be killed.'
'You bastard!' Jennifer yelled.
Buford then slapped her, and he snarled, 'Don't ever speak to your lover like that again, or I will do worse to you!'
After what seemed like ages, Buford finally decided that he was done violating Jennifer - and he left the room. Jennifer felt so tired, she just put on her pajamas and went to sleep.
oooooooooo
Meanwhile, back in Buford's cabin, one of the gang members began to run his fingers up and down the soles of Marty's feet, causing Marty to break out in helpless laughter.
'Oh, listen to you laugh,' taunted the gang member. 'You have such lovely ticklish feet. I am really enjoying this!'
Marty felt so helpless, as being tickled on the soles of his feet was pure torture.
'You can't stand this, can you?' the gang member continued, as he then ran his fingers into the arches. 'Oh, yes, I can tell that you're really suffering.'
Marty kept squirming, as the tickling sensation was so unbearable. He couldn't believe this member from Buford's gang was actually putting him through this torment. The soles of his feet were so unbearably ticklish, he didn't allow even Jennifer to tickle him there. The gang member was obviously relishing in his torment, though.
'Yeah, I'm going to make you laugh like this for a very long time,' the gang member taunted. 'I bet you never laughed this hard before in your life.'
Marty decided that he really had no choice but to surrender to the unbearable tickling sensation. He still could never get used to it, though. After what seemed like ages, the gang member decided that he was finally done tickling Marty, and he left the room. Marty found a way to release himself from the ropes, and he immediately fell asleep.
bttf44 - November 3, 2006 10:55 PM (GMT)
Doc was brainstorming with Seamus McFly and Mark Parker on how to rescue his friends.
'I have an idea,' suggested Mark. 'Why don't we dress up as gang members? Then we should be able to rescue your friends.'
'Are you sure that's such a good idea?' Doc asked, doubtfully.
'Aye,' Seamus replied, nodding. 'I'm not so sure I like the idea of dressing up as a gang member. Still, we'll do whatever is necessary to rescue your friend.'
'Goodness,' mumbled Doc, 'I hope they're still alive. And I though Biff was dreadful enough!'
'Who?' Seamus asked, confused.
'Oh, uh, just someone I know,' Doc said, covering. 'I suppose we could try dressing as gang members. I just hope this works.'
'I'll certainly be happy to help you, Emmett,' Mark said, quietly, 'as I kind of suspect I might be related to Jennifer, somehow. She looks just like my younger sister, Clara.'
'Uh, sure,' Doc gasped, with his mouth hanging wide open. Then she gasped, 'Clara's your sister? Great Scott!'
'I wonder if I might be related to Clint Eastwood,' Seamus added. 'He looks just like my younger brother, Martin, who got stabbed with a bowie knife five years ago.'
'Really, Seamus?' Doc asked, stunned.
'Aye,' replied Seamus, nodding. 'Martin used to let men provoke him into fighting. He was concerned that people would think him a coward if he refused. That's how he got a bowie knife shoved through his belly in a saloon in Virginia City. Never considered the future, poor Martin. God rest his soul.'
'Wow, Seamus!' gasped Doc, stunned. 'Mar-, uh, Clint seems to have the same problem as your brother did. Also, Jennifer always gets ticked off from other guys. She punches them out!'
'Aye,' Seamus replied, nodding. 'Then why didn't she punch out Buford?'
'It's because Buford is too strong for her,' replied Doc. Then, with tears in his eyes, he added, 'I'm really worried about Jennifer. I somehow feel this is all my fault.'
'What do you mean it's all your fault?' Mark asked, concerned.
Doc then grabbed a shot of whiskey, and he said, 'I had sent Jennifer to get some medicine for Marty, when Marty was sick.' Doc then drank the glass, and he passed out.
'Oh, no!' gasped Seamus, stunned. 'What are we going to do, now?'
'Don't worry,' Mark said, gently. 'I'm going to fix up some wake-up juice, and Doc should be fine in about ten minutes.'
'I'll go find us some gang attire,' Seamus explained, 'then, after Doc is sober, we'll go save Marty and Jennifer.'
oooooooooo
Meanwhile, Jennifer woke up in the bed she fell asleep in. She realized she was restrained, and she asked, 'What am I doing here - and why are my clothes ripped?'
Buford then ran in to the room, and he smirked, 'You can finish giving me my pleasure!'
Jennifer then began to cry, and she asked, 'What do you want me to do now?'
'Oh, I can think of one thing,' Buford replied, with a laugh.
'What, Buford?' Jennifer asked, sobbing. 'What do you want me to do?'
'Well, I want you to strip for me,' Buford replied, chuckling, 'then give me a lapdance, then have sex with me.'
'Fine, Buford,' Jennifer said, sobbing. 'I'll do whatever you want me to.'
oooooooooo
Marty woke up to find himself restrained to the bed. 'Where the hell am I?' Marty asked.
'You will laugh for me,' the gang member said, chuckling, as he ran his fingers up and down Marty's soles. Marty immediately burst out into helpless laughter.
'I really love the way you laugh,' the gang member taunted, as he ran his finger into the arches. 'I can tell you're really enjoying this. Your laughter is music to my ears.'
Marty tried to will himself to not be ticklish, but it was useless. Marty just squirmed and laughed with ticklish agony, as the gang member continued to relentlessly tickle his soles. Marty then decided it was useless, and he just surrendered to the tickling sensation.
'That's a good lad,' taunted the gang member. 'Just keep on laughing. You make a good tickle toy. You have such lovely ticklish feet.'
'Wha-, hahahahaha!' Marty was laughing too hard to talk. He couldn't help but wonder what was happening with Jennifer.
oooooooooo
'So you'll do anything I want you to do?' Buford asked, chuckling. 'All right, then, you'll work at my strip club.'
'Right,' Jennifer replied, 'no one wants to see somone like me strip.'
'Come on,' Buford protested, chuckling. 'You're a beautiful girl with a decent sized chest.'
With that, Jennifer wanted to slap him - but she knew if she did that, Buford might beat her.
'Okay, Buford,' Jennifer said, fighting back tears, 'I'll work for you.'
'Oh, one more thing,' Buford added, chuckling. 'You're also gonna work as a prostitute.'
'What?' Jennifer asked, stunned. 'I thought I was just a stripper!'
Buford just chuckled, and he added, 'Oh, and you're still my girlfriend - so no flirting with other guys!'
'Okay, Buford,' Jennifer asked, blinking back tears, 'what do you you ned me to do for you?'
'Before you go to work, Jennifer,' replied Buford, 'I want you to French kiss me.'
'Okay, Buford,' Jennifer replied, as she French kissed Buford. She nearly felt like throwing up.
oooooooooo
As Doc stepped into Buford's cabin with Mark and Seamus, they heard Marty laughing helplessly, as Marty was being tickled on the soles of his feet. Doc then knocked out the gang member. Mark and Seamus grabbed some rope to tie up the gang member, as Doc went to free Marty from the restraints. Marty was panting quite heavily.
'Thank you so much, Doc,' Marty said, breathing heavily. 'Gee, the soles of my feet are so unbearably tickling, being tickled there is pure torture.'
'I can imagine it is,' Doc said, nodding sympathetically. 'Say, do you know where Jennifer is?'
'I really have no idea,' Marty said, shaking his head. 'We'll have to go find her. I'm worried sick about her.'
'Me, too,' Doc said, blinking back tears. 'Buford isn't too kind to woman. I just hope he isn't making her a stripper at his saloon.'
'What?' Marty gasped, horrified. 'If he is, I'll kill him!'
'Not if I kill him first,' Marksaid, grimly.
'Why?' Marty asked, stunned. 'What happened?'
'Well, a couple years ago,' Mark explained, 'Buford raped my sister, Clara - and she was pregnant. We had to give up the baby for adoption. We named the little girl Jennifer Jane Parker.'
'Wha-' Marty gasped. 'That's weird. It's the same name as my girlfriend.'
'So Clara really is related to Jennifer,' Doc said, stunned. 'This means that Clara is Jennifer's great-great-grandmother! Great Scott! So if I end up falling in love with Clara, and we get married, Jennifer will be in my family?'
'What are you talking about?' Seamus asked, confused.
'Uh, nothing, nothing,' mumbled Doc.
'Then how can Jennifer be related to Clara?' Seamus asked. 'You know, she does look a bit like Juniper Parker. Juniper is the girl who was interested in my brother, Martin.'
'Who's Juniper?' asked Doc.
'Ah, Juniper Parker,' replied Seamus. 'She was a very beautiful girl. All the boys in town had a crush on her.'
'Where is she, now?' asked Doc.
'Well, she lives by herself now,' replied Seamus. 'She got so depressed about Martin's death that she locked herself in her house.'
'I have an idea to get her out of the house,' Doc said, as he snapped his fingers. 'Clint could pretend to be Martin!' Doc then turned to Marty, and he asked, 'Would you be willing to help us get Juniper out? Seamus' little brother seemed to really like Juniper alot.'
'Sure, Doc,' replied Marty. 'I'll do anything for my family - I mean, my friends.'
'Good,' replied Doc. 'Well, first let's find Jennifer and save her from Mad Dog!'
Jennifer Mcfly - November 5, 2006 12:28 AM (GMT)
well marty doc said we need to get jennifer to the hospital nad fast ok
marty said they took jennifer into the hospital and a doctor was able to
see her right away the doctor came out and said it appears this girl has
been under a lot of stress and fro mthe examanation it appears she
was raped about 10 rimes and who ever did it also cut her arms and
legs i nthe process she is also pregnat were gonna keep here her for
only on day she should be up and ready intime for the clock tower
festival
val okay marty and doc said in unison they then went to the police statio
n to make a complaint about mad dog.
bttf44 - November 5, 2006 01:16 AM (GMT)
Meanwhile, Jennifer was busy working and serving drinks - when a strange man came into the bar. Jennifer wonderd who the man was.
She walked up to the man, and asked, 'How can I help you, stranger?'
The stranger then lifted up his hat, and he said, 'It's me, Jennifer. I'm Doc Brown.'
'Doc, am I glad to see you!' exclaimed Jennifer, as she threw her arms around Doc. Then, realizing something, Jennifer added, 'I'm sorry you have to see me dressed like this. Let me go change.'
'Sure, go right ahead,' Doc replied, smiling.
Then, a few minutes later, Jennifer came back out with a blue vest, a white tee shirt, short blue cowgirl skirt with white lace to the edge, and pink cowgirl boots.
'Come on, Jennifer,' urged Doc. 'Let's get out of here before Buford realizes you're gone.'
'Okay,' Jennifer replied, 'I'm with you on that. Can we go to the hospital?'
'Why?' asked Doc, concerned.
'Well,' Jennifer replied, 'Buford hurt me really bad.'
'That bastard!' fumed Doc. 'What did he do to you?'
'I can't tell you,' Jennifer replied. 'I'm too embarrassed. All I know is that I have to see a doctor as soon as possible.'
Then Doc noticed that Jennifer's arms and legs were bleeding.
'Oh, my goodness!' gasped Doc, horrified. 'I can't believe he did that to you!'
Jennifer then collapsed. Marty ran up to Jennifer, threw his arms around her, and began to cry. Marty then picked up Jennifer, as he wept brokenly.
'Oh, Doc, what are we going to do?' Marty asked, sobbing. 'What are we going to do?'
'Well, Marty,' Doc replied, quietly, 'we need to get Jennifer to the hospital fast. She does look badly hurt.'
'Okay,' replied Marty, weeping, 'I'm so worried about her! I hope she isn't too badly hurt.'
ooooooooo
After Doc and Marty took Jennifer into the hospital, a doctor was able to see her right away, and do a few examinations.
'It appears this girl has been under a lot of stress,' the doctor explained, 'and from the examination, it appears she was raped about ten times - and whoever did it also cut her arms and legs in the process. Furthermore, she is also pregnant. We're gonna keep her here for one day. She should be up and ready in time for the clock tower festival.'
'Okay!' Marty and Doc said, in unison.
Doc then turned to Marty, and said, 'Let's go to the police station, and make a complaint about Mad Dog.'
'I hope they lock him up securely this time,' Marty said, angrily. He then began to cry, as he thought of how hurt Jennifer was. 'Oh, Doc, I want to find Buford and fast.'
'I'm afraid it's a bad idea,' Doc insisted.
'But I want to have a duel with him,' Marty sobbed. 'I want him to pay for the way he hurt my Jennifer.'
'Oh, Marty, you're not thinking rationally right now,' Doc insisted.
'Maybe Clara can cover for Jennifer, since they look alike,' Marty suggested, weeping.
'Look, as soon as we get back to to 1985,' Doc said, grimly, 'I am going to destroy the time machine. Look at the pain it has caused Jennifer. If it wasn't for that machine, she wouldn't be in this mess! Marty, promise me you will let the train crash into the DeLorean. The time machine must be destroyed, for it brings too much pain.'
Just then, Seamus McFly walked into the hospital along with Mark Parker.
'How is Jennifer doing?' Mark asked, concerned.
'I'm afraid he's badly hurt,' Doc replied, as he rubbed Marty's back. 'Mar-, uh, Clint is all broken up over this.'
'Aw, he's crying,' Seamus said, quietly. 'I guess he really loves Jennifer.'
'He does,' replied Doc, 'and he wants to have a duel with Buford. I don't think it's a very wise idea, though.'
'No, it really is not,' Seamus agreed, quietly. 'I'd hate to see him suffer the same fate as my brother.'
'Oh, yeah, right,' replied Doc.
'Clint really does look like my brother,' continued Seamus. 'He was usually a very nice person, but he would lose his judgement whenever people would rile him up.'
'Really?' Doc asked, stunned.
'Aye,' replied Seamus. 'Buford used to be a good person, too - until one day when his whole family died in a fire, then he completely changed.'
'You're bullshitting me!' Doc exclaimed. 'Buford ever a good person?'
'I know it sounds unbelievable,' Buford said, gently, 'but it is true. He was so enraged, he stopped caring about humanity.'
'You're really serious?' Doc asked, incredulously.
'Aye,' replied Seamus. 'He also lost his girlfriend, when she died of influenza.'
'Great Scott!' gasped Doc. 'No wonder Buford is the way he is!'
Just then, Marty finally stopped crying, and he said, 'Doc, I'm going to go check up on Jennifer, now.'
'Go right ahead,' Doc replied, encouragingly.
oooooooooo
As Marty walked into the in-patient room, he saw that Jennifer was just starting to wake up.
'Marty, I had the worst nightmare!' exclaimed Jennifer. 'I dreamed that some pervert called Buford Tannen had forced me to become his sex slave, and that I got raped. I also dreamed that I went back in time.'
'Well, Jennifer,' Marty replied, as he fought back tears, 'I'm sorry to tell you this, but that was no dream.'
'What?' shrieked Jennifer. 'You mean all this really did happen? I really did get raped?'
'There's also a decision you'll have to make,' Marty said, quietly. 'Do you want to keep the twins, or have an abortion?'
'How could you even think of an abortion?' Jennifer asked, incredulously. 'I want to keep them, and raise them in the future!'
'Even if they are Buford Tannen's kids?' Marty asked, stunned.
'Well, it's not their fault that their biological father raped me,' Jennifer said, quietly.
'I guess you're right,' Marty said, sighing. 'What are we going to tell the doctors in the future, though?'
'Well, I'll just tell them that they're your kids,' Jennifer said, quietly.
'My parents are going to kill me,' groaned Marty. 'Besides, what if your kids end up looking like Tannens?'
'Well, I hope they're nothing like Tannens,' Jennifer said, sighing. 'I plan to raise them up to be nice and respectful people. You'll make a good father, Marty. I guarantee it?'
'Yeah, I hope so, too' Marty replied. Then, nervously, Marty added, 'Is this going to create a time paradox? I mean, in 2015, we only had... are going to have... two children: Marty Jr and Marlene.'
'Not anymore than refusing to race Douglas Needles would,' Jennifer said, quietly.
'What?' Marty asked, stunned. 'What's this about racing Douglas Needles?'
'Nothing,' Jennifer said, with tears rolling down her face. 'Doc says you shouldn't know too much about your own destiny.'
'But Doc would have been shot by the Libyan terrorists,' Marty replied, as he began to cry.
'Okay, Marty,' Jennifer said, as she wiped her eyes, 'you get into this accident with Needles, with the Rolls Royce - and you end up breaking your hand, causing you to give up on your music. Also, the driver of the Rolls Royce press charges against you, - and we end up getting married at the Chapel O Love in Las Vegas. Also, I guess something happens to me in the future - because my future self is always tranked.'
'Oh, my God!' gasped Marty. 'That's horrible! Why didn't Doc just tell us about that? Then this whole mess could have been avoided.'
Doc then came into the room, and said, 'Because no one should know too much about their own future!'
'But, why?' Marty asked, as he was on the verge of tears. 'Shouldn't we be able to prevent the horrible future from happening? Besides, do I have to remind you again that you almost were shot by the Libyan terrorists?'
'Gee, you're not going to let that go, are you?' Doc grumbled. 'Well, okay, I guess you have a point. I guess we should take advantage of the time machine to prevent future tragedies from happening. Maybe I was being a bit pig-headed. In that case, I decided that I won't destroy the time machine after all. We'll probably still need it.'
'That's great, I guess,' replied Marty.
Just then, the doctor went into the room, and he said, 'Jennifer can leave the hospital, now.'
'Well, Jennifer, how are you feeling, now?' Marty asked, softly.
'I'm still in a bit of pain,' Jennifer replied, 'but I guess I can move.'
Marty and Doc lifted up Jennifer, as they carried her over to Doc's cabin.
Jennifer Mcfly - November 5, 2006 02:49 AM (GMT)
marty thinking of how hurt he was wanted to find buffird and fast doc
insisted that it was a bad idea but marty wanted to have a duel with
bufford meanwhile clara decided to covor for jennifer senice they looked
alike doc then told marty as soo nas we get back to to 1985 i am going
to destroy the time machine look at the pain it has caused jennifer if it
wasent for that machine she wouldent be in this mess! marty promise
me you wil let the train crash i nto the delorean the time machine must
be destoryed for it bring to much pain just then semus mcfly walked into
the hospital along with mark parker.
bttf44 - November 5, 2006 05:35 AM (GMT)
As they arrived over at Doc's cabin, Marty and Doc gently laid Jennifer to rest. Marty then decided to grab his headset from the DeLorean, as he wanted to listen to some rock and roll music.
Just then, Jennifer woke up, and she said, 'Well, I'm done sleeping. Hey, Marty, isn't tonight the clock tower festival? I wanna go. It sounds like fun.'
'Sure, let's go,' replied Doc. 'We might see Clara over there.'
'You mean the girl who looks just like me?' asked Jennifer.
'Yeah, that's her,' Doc replied.
'Well, I won't faint again,' Jennifer replied. 'I promise.'
Jennifer and Doc both laughed.
oooooooooo
A few minutes later, Jennifer came out wearing a white dress with white lace around it.
'Wow, Jennifer!' gushed Marty. 'You look so beautiful in that dress!'
'Thanks, Marty,' Jennifer replied, blushing. 'It will be so cool to see the clock tower being put up. The only problem is, if we get our picture taken with it, we won't be able to show it to anybody.'
'Well, I guess it will just be our little secret,' Marty replied, smiling.
'Well, now that you put it that way...' Jennifer said, smiling.
Marty then Jennifer than embraced and kissed.
'Shall we head over to the festival, now?' asked Doc, interrupting Marty and Jennifer's kiss.
'Yes,' Marty and Jennnifer replied, simultaneously.
Marty and Jennifer then followed Doc down to the festival.
oooooooooo
At the festival, Marty and Jennifer started dancing.
Buford then ran up to them, and shouted, 'Hey, what are you doing with my girlfriend?'
'He's not your girlfriend, pervert!' shouted Marty, as he punched Buford in the face, knocking him out.
'Good shot, Marty!' Jennifer said, admiringly.
Just then, Marshall Strickland and some of the other police officers came up to arrest Buford and his gang.
Marshall Strickland then said, 'Buford Tannen, you are under arrest for the kidnapping and rape of Jennifer Parker. We are going to ship you over to New York, where they have tighter security.'
'I was framed!' shouted Buford.
'Yeah, right!' snorted Marshall Tannen. 'I don't believe that at all.'
The police officers then lifted Buford and the rest of the gand onto their horses, as they rode off.
Marty and Jennifer then hugged and began to French kiss.
'You know, Marty,' said Jennifer, 'we won't have to deal with Buford anymore, as he and his gang are being sent to New York.'
'Whoa, Jennifer!' exclaimed Marty. 'Where did you learn that from?'
'I overheard Marshall Strickland saying it to the gang,' replied Jennifer. 'I thought I'd let you know.'
'Hey, Jenn,' Marty suggested, 'let's go get our sleeping bags out of the DeLorean.'
'Okay, Marty,' replied Jennifer, 'you need to bring condoms, though - if we're gonna do anything!'
'Oh, okay,' replied Marty, as he made his way over to the DeLorean. However, once Marty got to the DeLorean, a strange man came up behind Jennifer.
'Who, who are you?' Jennifer asked, panicking.
'Stay quiet,' ordered the man, 'or I'll kill your friends.'
'What?' screamed Jennifer. Just then, the man put chloroform over her lips rendering her unconscious. He then left a ransom note and took Jennifer to his cabin.
When Marty came back to where he and Jennifer were making out, he noticed a note. He then started yelling out, 'Jennifer! Jennifer!' He then brought the note to Doc.
Doc then read the note. 'Dear Doc Brown,' Doc read, 'if you do not hand over the time machine, we will kill Jennifer Parker. Signed, Griff Tannen! Yeah, I'm here in the Old West. Oh, and Marty, I never knew your girl was such a spitfire in bed.'
'That bastard!' Marty seethed. 'If he touched Jennifer, I am going to kill him!'
'Great Scott!' gasped Doc. 'Do you know what this means, Marty? This means that, if Griff knew about us, we must have gone back to the future - before Griff came here. We could have a massive time paradox on our hands.'
'Whoa, Doc,' mumbled Marty. 'This is heavy!'
oooooooooo
As Jennifer woke up, he asked, 'Where am I? Who are you? What do you want with me?'
'I am Griff Tannen!' the man snarled. 'I want you to be my sex slave. I had sex with your future self - and you were a real spitfire in bed.'
'What the hell?' snarled Jennifer. 'I'll do no such thing!'
Just then, Griff punched Jennifer, and said, 'You will, unless you want your friends to die.'
'As if I would have had sex with you in the future!' Jennifer spat out. 'You probably raped me!'
Just then, Marshall Strickland and some of the other police officers entered the cabin. Griff immediately used his sleep-inducing alpha-rhythm generator to knockout the police. Griff laughed, as he threw them out of the house. Griff then sent another ransom note to Doc, before taking Jennifer to 1955 with him.
oooooooooo
Doc lifted up the note with trembling hands, as he read it.
bttf44 - November 9, 2006 01:28 AM (GMT)
When Griff went to 1955, he handed Jennifer over to Biff, and asked, 'Is this the girl you were talking about, Grandpa?'
'Why, yes, it is!' replied Biff. Then, to Jennifer, he leared, 'It's so nice to see you again, whore!'
'How dare you call me a whore?' shrieked Jennifer.
'Youd better behave yourself,' snarled Biff, as he slapped Jennifer, 'or I won't take you to The Enchantment Under The Sea Dance.'
'Like I'd ever go with the likes of you!' shouted Jennifer.
Griff then gave Biff the sleep-inducing alpha-rhythm generator, which Biff quickly used on Jennifer. He then tied her up and brought her to his house - and then he tied her to the bed, so that she couldn't escape.