I am probably not going to like this, and I have had some critique on him already, and I know what "I" percive as his flaws.
But in depth is always nice.
There are several pictures, because some are better at sowing his points than others.
This is a two part, and once I get a critique, I'd like to show you his brothers, and hope I picked the better one, lol. Too late now if I didn't but I didn't just grab the first fish I saw, lol.



What did I see?? Well first his anal is too long. This is my personal pet peeve. I think it ruins the whole line of a fish.
Second uneven color, it doesn't go all the way out to the edges.
Third the fraying thing happening on the anal.

I also know he is a little voluminous in his finnage, making his body look a little overwhelmed.

These are his two sisters.. I prefer the first one on color alone, as her unpaired fins are even in color.



The one has uneven color in her unpaired, and a kink in the spine as well.

I've only the one picture of this one for some odd reason.
If I look harder I may find more, but this is probably the best one, lol.