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u spit first

This cat kzee rymes suck more then hoes//
he throws in-whatever and hopes it goes in-together//

he talks bout killing and throat slitting, damn e thug//*
last time i checked cap guns dont shoot out slugs//

Kzee is new and still his rhymes got old fast//
he got his rhymes from the garbage cuz they pure trash//

now let me guess your gonna spit a diss to my name "Bizerk"//**
and say he dont jerk cuz it works! son your wack thats why im spittin first//

yo Kzee id like to see you pull out an actual diss//***
and wont use the words "fist" oh "throat slit//

i got so much beef on these sites, ive exticted the cattle//
you think your ill, and only come with one punch battles//


* - in diss the emcee above you he didnt diss he only talked about killing
** - every battle i get into all the shitty emcees seem to say "bizerk cant jerk"
*** - like i said he never disses jsut talks about killing people (diss the emcee above you)


iight yo spit your verse now

Ayo u shouldnt have called me out to battle u should've quit/
cause we all knew u were going to bite instead of spit/

On the mic dis man decided not to spit/
he said he was to sick/ after hours of sucking on his dads dick/

I dont knoe y dis man even decided to rap he shouldve joined the mob/
maybe den he'd get a real good blowjob/

"Your beats dont make no sense so why is it a soundtrack"/
cause all ur shit ain't good its bitten which makes it whack/

In the end he needed help from the admin Stadyc/*
because he didnt knoe how to spit cause he was a drug addict/

" A personal from his msn messenger that is what his name is called
* He asked Stadyc for help because he couldnt think of anything and later he said he would research some things on the internet on what to say.
Ready 4 Votes now aite.

ayo its was aight nothing that good

Flow: B
Punches:K
Rhymes: K
WordPlay: Neitha
Metas: Neitha
Similies: Neitha
Opener: B
Finisher: B

Vote: B

its was kinda a simple battle nto really any punches.

Flow: B.........it was tight but bizerk had the stronger rhythm
Punches: K....he had the better punches (bizerk mostly talked bout himself)
Rhymes: K....his rhymes sounded better
Opening: K....opening was stronger
Finishing: K...finshing blow was stronger

Vote: Kzee

allright battle nothin special...

Flow: bizerk
Punches:Kzee
Rhymes: Kzee
WordPlay: none
Metas:none
Similies: none
Opener: Kzee
Finisher:Bizerk

Vote: Kzee

no real punchin..but keep it up...

Vote

Flow - Tie
Structure - Tie
Punches - B
Wordplay - None so Tie
Comples - None so Tie

Vote b!

Bizerk took this one.......Such better flow

but bizerk had a really weak opening i don't think it even ryhmed.

But alot of what kzee was saying didn't mean much...like the mob thing wasn't that great.

My vote for bizerk


Edit: I like the trash diss bizerk.

Flow - bizerk
Structure - tye - both were good
Punches - kzee
Wordplay - kzee
opener- kzee
finisher-bizerk


umm....well they were close ones......yall both keep up da good work

but chea Kzz got mah vote .........blah

vote:kzee

Dis battle was kinda weak ta me...lemme break it down...

Bizerk:

This cat kzee rymes suck more then hoes//
he throws in-whatever and hopes it goes in-together//
^^^Didn't rhyme dunny...not feelin dis...suck more den hoes/vacuums punches are all played...weak opener

he talks bout killing and throat slitting, damn e thug//*
last time i checked cap guns dont shoot out slugs//
^^^nice personal...nothing else here

Kzee is new and still his rhymes got old fast//
he got his rhymes from the garbage cuz they pure trash//
played wordplay...seen dis one too much...nice personal again tho...props for dat...

now let me guess your gonna spit a diss to my name "Bizerk"//**
and say he dont jerk cuz it works! son your wack thats why im spittin first//
^^^You over explained yourself in the bar...and put one at tha bottom of tha page...people will understand after tha first time...punch about spittin first is nonsense...who goes first has nothing to do wit being wack...bad bar...I think you put it in so he didn't try ta do tha played name pun...that's all...

yo Kzee id like to see you pull out an actual diss//***
and wont use the words "fist" oh "throat slit//
^^^Again seems like you're tryin to keep him from doing something...not feelin dis as it's just a nonsense filler

i got so much beef on these sites, ive exticted the cattle//
you think your ill, and only come with one punch battles//
^^^exticted is extincted? or excited? lol...nice finisher...best bar so far...nice punch and personal

Overall: It seems like you're tryin too much to keep him from spittin certain things you've seen before and not focusin on attacking him...it's is smart to battle defensively...but you did it too much...gotta attack more...nice personals...so pretty good shyt...

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Kzee:

Ayo u shouldnt have called me out to battle u should've quit/
cause we all knew u were going to bite instead of spit/
^^^average opener...not a whole lot here...

On the mic dis man decided not to spit/
he said he was to sick/ after hours of sucking on his dads dick/
^^^eh...not feelin dis...

I dont knoe y dis man even decided to rap he shouldve joined the mob/
maybe den he'd get a real good blowjob/
^^^flow is terrible...gotta keep tha bars about even, or tha second one a little bit over...but never dis far under...punchline is weak

"Your beats dont make no sense so why is it a soundtrack"/
cause all ur shit ain't good its bitten which makes it whack/
^^^bad delivery but good personal/punch...work on tha delivery tho...

In the end he needed help from the admin Stadyc/*
because he didnt knoe how to spit cause he was a drug addict/
^^^wat does drugs have to do with spittin?...gotta show relationships in ya punches, without explaining it feel me?

Overall: You can do ya punches well, but your delivery and flow needs a lotta work...so you come off as unexperienced...

Vote: Bizerk seemed more experienced as his personals were better constructed and his flow was nice and consistent...stronger verse overall..

~peace, 1, dun
:angry:

ok battle not the best but not bad
heres ma vote

Flow: bizerk
Punches:Kzee
Rhymes: Kzee
WordPlay: None so tye
Metas: None so tye
Similies: none so tye
Opener: kzee
Finisher: bizerk

Vote: kzee

close one iight you both needa elevate

its tied yoh continue the voting close battle damn good luck man with the battle bezerk lol seriosly u never on though aite later yoh and continue voting

yo people we need votes, we still tied and THIS WAS THE FIRST BATTLE ON THE SITE AND IT AINT OVER YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol look how long it takes for peepz to even vote comon we even raise the stakes inorder to vote and all yall are either whack or dont knoe how to rap cause it takes less then 5 minutes to vote properly aite so lets finish this battle aite and we need active peepz that stay on this site permanently not for 2 days and then they leave aite so peace out and stay active.

opener:b
flow:kzee
metas:none
punches:kzee
finisher:kzee

kzee got this one
not too exciting either way though

Thanks for the vote woah what a close match but it prolonged since the beginning even though we were the first battle on the site lol well 5-4 Kzee wins close battle though seriously lol