Name: Christina Vallie Anthony

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Grade Level: 1

Sex Preference: Males

Appearance: Christina is around 5’3 and weighs around 115 pounds. She has some muscle but not too much. She is usually found in jeans (mostly ripped) and shirts that have some kinda logos on them.
Her hair is a charcoal black and her eyes and mysterious blue. Her ears have been pierced 3 times, twice in the lobe, once in the cartilage, and also her tongue, nose and belly button are also pierced.
When you see Christina she will probably be a little hunched (when she is walking she somehow sinks down and when she is sitting she sinks down), trying to stay unnoticed. Also she always wears her mother’s silver cross around her neck and never takes it off.

Avatar: (Amy Lee)

Personality: Christina tends to be very anti-social, she really doesn’t like talking to people because in the end they think she is a freak because of her negative look at life. One of the only things that makes her happy is drawing, once she gets into her moment she feels free from her problems, its like something awakens inside of her and she feels like she can do anything. Also she iprays sometimes when she feels the need because of her adopted father for one and because of what happened to her mother. She prays that her mother is doing well in heaven.

Christina was made to believe by her mother that she was worthless, her mother was once caring but then began to drink and emotionally harm Christina making Christina hate herself. One day when someone tried to help her mother they made her believe she wasn’t worthless but she is still on the deciding line basically. But she knows that she is good at something but when she uses her powers, it makes her doubt herself more and more. She really doesn’t like working on stuff that she isn’t interested in but when something catches her eye she will work away till it is perfect.

Christina does have her moments of weakness though. When she is thinking about her mother, praying or frustred with something she becomes emotional but if someone was to catch her when she is like that she would probably get very angry at them and seem very cold to them. Also if she really believes in something and has enough courage she will say what she feels.

Powers:

Power 1:

Shape Shifter, she can only change into things she has seen, felt, touched and heard before (unlike some who can just see someone or something and change into it) when she changes into something new it really strains her body and leaves her emotionally unstable for a few days. Also depending on the object it might cause her great pain.[/b]

Skills: She is a great artist; she loves to draw and is very good at it. This helps her take her mind away from pain and it also helps her understand something she wants to change into more. She is also an excellent cook and she knows how to keep her strength up

Hobbies: Drawing, she feels a certain sense of home when she draws. It was like the home she never had. She also likes to ride anything that goes fast, it makes her feel alive and it clears her mind

History: Christina’s mother cheated on her father and the product of it was Christina. The man Christina’s mother married left driving her mother into a depressive, alcoholic phase. Christina cared for her mother a lot, no matter what she did. But then one day Christina's mother began to yell at her for things like being the child of her cheating and being worthless because her father left causing Christina to begin to hate her mother but also hate herself at the same time because she was only 8 and lived by the rule "Mother knows best."
One day a Minster from the Church came and explained to her what had been going on and he tried to help her mother but sadly failed. That night Christina snuck into her mother's room, while she was passed out and took her mother's silver cross and hid it, in case her mother saw it because her mother use to be religeous but now believed that god was a fake.
After her 13 birthday Christina’s mother had hung herself and Christina found her. Since they couldn't find her real father and her mother's last husband didn't want her the Minser of the chruch offered to take Christina and she accpted.
When she turned 15 years old Christina decided that it was time to search for her real father to in hopes that he would accept her. She first found her shape shifting powers when she first left; she was studying a deer to draw. She managed to get close enough to it to touch it. After she finished she closed her eyes and tried to imagian herself as the deer. Suddenly she opened her eyes and her hand was a deer's leg. She at first thought she was dreaming but after a few pinches she realized it wasn't a dream. She managed to get her hand back to normal with little pain. After awhile she managed to turn into the deer mostly after a week or so and when she changed back she was hit with a wave of pain leaving her helpless with no shelter for a few days. How she found her next power was when she was in pain from her shape shifting power (not the same week, a long time after) and someone came to help her. She reached up and touched their face and suddenly the pain was gone from her and into the other person. she watched helplessly as the person rolled around in pain. She couldn't believe she did that too someone. She ran away, leaving them in pain, afraid of what might happen to her. Right after her 17th birthday she was alone and thinking about what had happen to her in the two years she left. It was a beautiful sunny day but she couldn't help but cry, then it suddenly started to rain. She didn't think much about it at first but when it happened a second time she knew something was up. Thats when she heard about the school. She decided to head to Ireland to check it out.

DOB: July 25th
Parents: Alexia Anthony (Mother), Unknown (Father)
Place: Venice, Italy

What's the WORD?: Mum

put a little more on your history please

Hello! :)

There's just a couple of things that need a little work. It won't be too hard though, so don't panic. ;)

Starting from the top, with your av piccie, what we really need to know is the name of the person you've got a photo of. That's so no one else can use the same person, and look the same way. If you don't know her name, you should probably look for a different pic.

The personality, it would be great if you could add a little more. You've got two paragraphs, which is the required amount, but they both say more or less the same thing. Try and think of at least two more traits, and tell us about those. If that's hard, imagine a situation you might encounter in the RP, and think about how she reacts. Are there any traits showing through? Is she bossy, or does she speak her mind? Is she always moving, or a little aggressive? See what comes up.

If you have a look in the Guidelines area, you'll see a few threads about Powers. Because she's in 4th year, she'll have a few different ones, developed to different degrees. You need to choose a name for these extra powers, and give a brief description, just as you have for shape shifting. Take a look at some of the other apps to give you an idea of what you need to do.

And, as Sakky mentioned, your History needs extending. You've probably got enough events in there already, but you could stand to tell us more about them. How did she feel about it? Why did these things happen? I feel like a stereotypical shrink here. ;) But you could use that too - put Christina on a couch, and ask and ask and ask until you know everything. Then tell us!

Sounds like a lot, but I've got no doubts that you can do it, and do it well. Christina should turn out really great. :)

-Aé.

Updated :D Anything else that needs to be changed?

Okay I think I got it all now :) :) :)

This looks a lot better - good job!

There is one thing I'm going to pick out though, and it's pretty nit-picky, but kinda important. She's in her 4th year, at 17, yeah? So that means that she probably started at the school in 1st year, at age 14. She can't have arrived in her 4th year unless she had an equivalent education at a similar school. Plus the way powers are developed is via education at school - not so much on your own (though a bit ;)). You just need to fix up these little inconsistencies, then your are good to go by my book (but wait 'til BW or Sakky says so too. ;))

Just edit the grade level and it's good.

Okay I wil make her grade level 1 then and take out the other two powers and save them for later then?

okay ur accepted by my standard just wait 4 the second, sorry that there are so many posts from admins in here.

Just confirming - she's 17, but in her first year where most of the students are 14 or so? :)

As long as that's ok, she's fine by me. :) Good luck and have fun!!!

-Aé.

Yah I was wondering if that's okay,...is it okay?

It's fine by me. But I don't have the final say. PM BW, see what she says. ;) Or leave a note in the Shout Box.