feel free to slaughter/applaud! virtual red bic allowed!

I am TOOOOOOOOOO happy right now. I finally get my Foxney fic from Nuri. Couldn't stop CHEESIN' after I stopped screaming.

AAAAAAAAAH on with the gushing! :wub:

I just love your version of whitresa. Veradis is beyond gorgeous. Totally see aspects of you and your twin. AND I totally see you in Whit. This is absolute greatness.

AMAZING start.

I cannot wait for more. NOT sure if that guy from garage_sale is actually Fox or you're gonna pull a Sylv and have the two leads meet like 99 chapter's later.

Whatever the case I'm HOOKED and I'd like an update ASAP!!!!!!

BUT I can *actually* wait after MG: 5/06 is completed.

*tries not to be mad that she wasn't warned before this was posted*

Loved it. A little intrigued about Whitney and her family now. She seems to love them, but I sense some distance. I'm assuming you'll explain that.

I do like Veradis and Whit's relationship. She's persistent. Um, who said I was Veradis? I claim no such title. Glad she makes her go out and do things. Nothing wrong with being anti-social, but not all day everyday.

A yard sale fetish. Interesting. We all have something though, right?

You know I love it. I'm JUST as interested to see the other one that you said was too much for a first fiction. I would like the opportunity to agree or disagree with your conclusion, but okay. I'm fine with just this one...for now.

UM WHOA!

I think I just stepped in The Twilight Zone!

I feel like I know these characters. And not like in a fictional way but in a REAL way.

I absolutely adore it. And you know how I am with the element of surprise. Once I put my heart back in my chest, I read until I couldn't read anymore.

I love the imagery you paint with the words. You couldn't just have Whit looking at pictures, she was gazing at a suspended sunset. And you couldn't just have her sitting at her computer. She was bathed in milky articfial light.

I gotta admit. I'm jealous. This is just TOO DAMN good. And it's the first chapter. You are giving me a run for my money, girl. Can you teach me how to write like this? I mean, I realize this is a Foxney fic but I just want to learn more about Whitney. I care so much about her now within these first words.

So welcome to our world, Nuri. You do realize you need to update like last year, right?! Good. Just as long as you know.

And LOVED the Kayne Song in the beginning. Such a great beginning. It just set up so much. I need to download that ASAP.

Blast you! The word chad has negative conotations for me and here you are handing me a cute talented little brother *sigh*

lol @ introvert Whit, really would be one too, I'm glad she has someone to drag her out.

Can hardly wait for more!

awww, im so happy everyone pretty much likes it. gives me encouragement to go on. :clear1

uhhh i dont see that happening for awhile. youre just gonna have to enjoy AFD.

lol crys. i was waiting for your response the most. i aim to please. and come on, wasnt it just sitting here in the fanfic section, smiling at you when you checked the board the other night, SO much better than me alerting you to it? the 'BAM!' factor is such a powerful tool.
im glad you picked up on the whitresa. i want whit to have that kind of close relationship, bc its factored so much into who her character is on the show, but i didnt want to make her the typical T. she needed some spice and remixing. youll see a lot more of her over time.
um, none of the making readers wait 10 years for the meeting of the couple, dont worry.
and i plan on updating soon, before mission:impossible-0506 is complete.

suck it up.

yay, thats what i want.

ha! no i do not give classes. like i told crys, the way i write is a mystery even to me, so i cant go teaching ppl. and please, dont be jealous, my writing isnt that great. and look who's talking!! miss ridiculous sex scenes! dont even! and the way you make me think im having a panic attack right there along with whit is still much to me.

yes you do!! the title of the song is the title of the fic. although i can barely stand to listen to it these days, it was played so much. but for whatever reason, if started playing in my head when i was sitting in class brainstorming the story. and TOTALLY abnormal for me, the title of this story was one of the first things i came up with. that never happens to me. so thats why im so gungho ab this i think, and why i started writing it so soon. its like its writing itself; its supposed to get out of me.

lol, i promise i wont let you down. i know the name makes some cringe, but it just fit for me to use it, and make the character who he is. trust me.

smh. april...APRIL was the last time my eyes saw this greatness. my heart cont. to break. ::cries hysterically::

that is in no shape or form, pressure boo. :D

but um yeah....

lonely. all falls down is so lonely. they have no body to read on their own.... {{forgot the rest of the words to create my own twist}}

Great story. How long would Fox wait for Ehitney to come out.

::: floating on cloud nine ::: You updated! I love love LOVE this fic! Great update hun. Waiting for more...And I just remembered there's an icon for my happiness right now :cloud9: lol

lol, love V even though she's a bit slow.

Fox! Brief but :D

Wish Whit would let herpes hilton wannabe have it :nono:

thanks. precisely what i said to nuri.

Now that my hypoglysimic rant that nobody heard is over.... I can now present a coherent interpetation of my thoughts...

*ahem*

Can I just start off my thanking the heavens of writing ghosts for finally CHANNELING lake NHA-R... I greatly and profoundly appreciate the resurface of this masterpiece. My brainwaves appreciation reaches no bounds...

KERR UNIVERSITY HARTLEY CAMPUS!!! One question... WHERE is this school so I can enroll?? Fucka Brooklyn College....Seriously, I want to be apart of the Kerr student body at Hartley campus. Help me help you help me. -Crysta P.

I canNOT stress how brilliant you are with visionary execution. Your words are HYPER hypnotic... they make me collapse, dance, chant...all kinds of non-crysta traits. The part when Whit went into a trance...OMG THE CLOUDS PARTING FOR BRIGHTNESS. JEEESUS. TO THE COLONGE REFERENCE ABOUT FOX...I gotta be careful around your work. Its too emtional. *Note to self* Bring extra meds...

THAT BITCH LEA... WHIT boo, I got you. She goin down. I PROMISE. THAT is all on that little toad.

GOOODness I didn't realize how much I missed Whitresa and Foxney!!!!! Man I heart Vera, despite her naivity she has a good solid head on her shoulders, and her friendship with Whit is the GREATEST!!! SOOO relatable. You're brillaint with that too lake NHA-R, making us loyal readers just dive into your gear head first no life jacket and indulge in the hydrogen dioxide greatness of lake NHA-R. Good times...

So are you gonna let me wait a whole winter until I can swim in the lake or can we ice skate??

smooches my love.

CANNOT STOP LAUGHING AT CRYS' REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!
lmao lmao lmao
you're talking ab me and my visionary execution...what about you and all this metaphor!!?!? i don't think i've ever seen you use it so brilliantly. just wow. lake nha-r. i flove it.

there should hopefully be some ice-skating, so go ahead and locate your skates for easy access.

lol het, herpes hilton. i wasn't trying to make Lea *that* bad.

and thanks so much mo and ang :)