*Gentle* good bad ugly all that jazz. :heart:

:heart: :heart: :heart:

Yes! I'm sooo gonna be on your ass now! OMG! Everybody wants somebody they cant have, lol. And whats this hinting of secrets?

Yeah, I want an update :D

I like to know what Theresa & Whitney secrets are.

Um, the secrets are killin me here. I'm gonna need some answers ASAP.

I love how everyone seems to want everyone else. But who do they NEED? And I don't know Fox, is she the one you're suppose to be with? Wait and see.

Whitney is such an over achiever. Someone is gonna need to ground her.

OH SNAP!

Talk about a good teaser. I am very, very intrigued.

SO Gwen and Whitney are half way around the world, Whitney is haboring feelings for Dylan who really likes Gwen, and Fox is still in Harmony with a torch still burning for Gwen. Damn, Gwen got that whip appeal. Whit and Fox need some love too.

Yeah, this is a recipe for soo many things, and I can't wait for more.

Good job, Sparkie!

YAY! Glad ya'll like it!

Dag Ava. Sparkie....huh? So that's my new government name.


I'm gonna try and put up chp 1 tonight.

OK.....what is everyone hiding from? I hate that Whit's heart got crushed before it even had a chance to blossom.

I've loved this idea since you told me about it the other night so I'm gonna need an update soon.

WONDERFUL start Crys......

Dang Crys....Ava's putting that name out kinda hard.

I KNOW right Mika!!! She's on the list. :clear11

AHHH, overseas-age. i love it already. the prologue sounds great. i like the way you described dylan as the elephant bt the BFs.

whit's wearing her matchmaker hat in this one i see, sigh. i feel her pain.

who is this jade? he def doesn't need gwen, and he doesn't need her either! or, wait, are we rooting for just strictly a whitlan pairing here?

i like how you incorporated the patented AngPictureLink style! holla!

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
OK, I'm def LIKING Jade, that last line was greatness!

Aww, I :heart: :heart: :heart: the Whit/Sim talk. Esp Sim calling Whit Sparkie, I wonder where you got that from ;)

LMAO all this drama. T "stole" Ethan eh? Poor Whit, two best friends caught up in a 'stole man' drama.

Loma & fox are friends eh? Loving it, theyre very cool!

Love the update!

Great start trippie! I love this fic! I absolutely love Whit and Simone's relationship. It's golden! Awww Domi is soooo cute! lol. Awww at Whit praying about her new ill feelings about Gwen. That's got to be hard, falling for a guy who's falling for your best friend. It's Dylan's lost, not Whit's. I'm excited to see when Foxney meet. I'm patiently waiting for that but my patience is short lol. Sam is in prison? Hmmm...I wonder what he did? lol. Jack is just too cute lol. I like him for some reason. What does Gwen have against Theresa? Haha I know there's a lot to that story. Paloma is a jewel! Fox better listen to her and pronto! Thanks. Jade irks my nerves already for some reason haha. Now the big question: What secrets does Whit have? I know you'll reveal them in due time but umm remember you have some impatient readers lol. Update soon pwease :D . Thankies

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This fic is GREATNESS!

You have reached a new level, Crysta. I love how we are all blooming in our writing.

So IN LOVE with Whitney and Simone. They are sisters and best friends. That convo was priceless. I don't know how many times I laughed outloud.

Poor Whit with her Dylan and Gwen situation. But Rule 1 of friendship, Whit. Never let a man come between you and your girl. It is not worth it. But I have been there, girl. Just keep praying. God has a plan for you.

Speaking of the plan, Fox and Paloma are too adorable. I was smiling through their scene. And Jade is the hotness. Fox deserved that slug, not gone lie. You don't talk to a girl like that but Jade, you don't sleep with your sister's ex. That is just scandalous. Man, there is too much drama going on.

Um, Jackson Henry.................GORGEOUS! Just wish he wasn't mooching off Simone and Noah. And Sam is in the Big House. Wow! There are just twists and turns everywhere.

TOO AWESOME! I really love how you throw us into a scene and we really don't know what is going on until we read more. It keeps us enthralled. Like the scene when Noah and Jackson went to see Sam and we find out he is in jail threw me for a loop. Perfect! Keep that coming.

Ok, I would throw your government name in here but I won't. This update was just too damn good. The following chapters better be coming at warp speed now b/c I want more. MORE, DANG IT!

YAY! I'm SO glad you guys like this!!! Reading all these wonderful comments makes my heart warm, basically why I write. :heart:


I'll try and keep the updates flowing. I actually used your method Ava, writing it out then typing it out, must say it really works better, creative wise anyway, time wise it blows. :nono:

and DAMN Ava Sparkie is now my government name!?! :rant:

LMAO, yes, you know it. Even though, YOU said it was your government name like 3 posts again. Yes, scroll up, please.

And yeah, writing it out does work better. For me anyway. So glad it is working for you as well. It just sucks when you get it all written out, you proof it, and you know it's the hotness and you want everyone and their dog to read it, you then have to type it out which takes a little time. At least, you are doing one chapter at a time. Try two....NOT FUN! But it all works out. So keep doing what you do b/c it's working.

let me just get this out:
I DON'T LIKE JADE!
:flame:

Domi is soooooooooooooooooooo adorable! that pic! the interaction bt her and simone! awwwwwwwwww! im SO mad simone let her cry herself to sleep. poor thing. i hope she wakes up in the middle of the night wailing from being so hungry. simone was wrong for that one.

omg, you incorporated my Face. im in the brary right now. you cant just bust in with stuff like that!

actually, the entire phonecall home had me dying. i cant wait to hear more ab this jackson character.

DUMBING UP! a greatness phrase.

DAMN, sam is in jail? whats the story behind that? cant wait to find out.

paloma and fox as bff...at first i was like um, ok...but i guess it can work.
she needs to work on beating jade's ass.

WONDERFUL CRYS!

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

um, yeah.......................

I have no words. Just DOING TOO DAMN MUCH, CRYSTA!

Whitney and Sam?! Theresa and Hank?! And both Bennett men were married?! And Grace was murdered?!

And Theresa is related to Gwen and Jade?!

And Whitney had a baby with Sam which she gave up for adoption?!

LAWD, these folks need to open a laundromat b/c this is just TOO MUCH dirty laundry.

I don't even know which way is up right now. I am still in shock. But I have to say, I LOVED Fox and Whitney's meeting. And their back and forth. Fox has not given Gwen a second thought and Whitney ain't even thinking about Dylan. Those two are in so deep already and they don't even know it. Can't wait to see more from them.....and from everyone else.

SUPERB, SPARKIE! SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why I gotta be Sparkie dough... <_<


YAY glad you liked it!!!!! :heart:

I have noo words! Fucking brilliant! I dont even know where to start!

Domi is just too grown! Cali is pure sweetness!

I love all these sisterhips and best friendships!

Foxney is hilarity!

Crysta, this is greatness!

YAY!!! Glad you liked it Het!!! :wub:

Yeah Domi's grown but she's so cute!!! :heart:

Ummm yeah...what everyone else said. Lol trippie you know this is greatness. I don't have to tell you. But if you don't know.... IT'S GREATNESS! There are so many great parts that I can't just pick out a few. So expect me to randomly tell you in IM what parts I love lol. Update! Thankies :)

First of all, I really was reading the last chapter like it was the only one til I realized it didnt' flow with the last chapter. Then I scrolled up. Yes I know, leave me alone dammit.

So anyway, it's late, and this is too much to absorb right now. I'll have to post more tomorrow. But this was one hell of an update Crys.

Trippie! I loveee the update! You should know this already though lol. Foxney, I just love them. There aren't any words to describe how much I love them in this fic! I'm going to keep this short cause you already know how much I love this chapter even though you have the nerve to NEVER like anything you write. ::: heavy sigh ::: What am I going to do with you trippie? lol. Anyway, love the chapter. If there's anything in particular I want to comment about that I haven't already in IM, I'll holla at cha. lol :P

lol trippie. whatever I don't dislike everything. SO glad you liked it though.

lol, I love this fic! All these relationships, just greatness!

Domi and cali are a tad too grown but soooo cute!

I heart Foxney! Those two are too cute!

Greatness! Nuff said lol

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

too many jokers!

Noah doesn't get it does he? He should listen to his wife.

Whit wow, I'm glad both SImone and T called you on your running. I hope you don't leave.

Sam's coming he? And why did mystery person say son? Hmm, should be interesting.

Foxney! I loved it except Whitney spazzing but still loved it too.

wow, I dunno how you keep track of all these ppl but good job.