You know the deal. Place all the reviews for this story here. Be honest.

um, 1 word for now:

amazing.

keep it up twin! and i do mean, keep it up. no 11 month lapse in updates.

SO co-sign with Nuri.

SO great, SO heartbreaking, and SO intriguing. I need the background story. I need to know how this came to be. I NEED for you to explain to me why Whit just let the best thing that ever happened to her marry......*sigh* Kay.

I NEED IT and I need it NOW.............or whenever you get a chance. Thanks bunches.

Taking the co-signs and owning them, yeah they're right amazing. But I told ya'll that 11 month mess will not happened! Not to worry.

Keep up the great work though.

Amazing start.

I understand that she did what's best for her but ..... Kay?

Loved that she went dressed in black it showed that a part of her was dying @ the same time as him marrying her. Fox heard her, that's beautiful but he think's it was all lies.

Wonderful work as always.

yes...symbolism. loves it! ^_^

ok, my theme for this story: YOURE DOING TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!
too
many
things.

thats damn right, krazy kay. you are the 3rd person in the relationship. the 3rd wheel. remove yourself. get a flat.

i am loving the flashbacks. and how youre keeping on the main show storyline, somewhat, but not completely.

miles = priceless. golden.

and fox is KILLING me. (see, doing too much there)

man, i wanted there to be more detail at the end of 3, when fox came over, further prolonging having to go home and fake a nut on kay, hehe. (sorry, pardon my vulgarity, ahem) but yeah, ive been told to practice to patience so i guess ill try.

this is going to just keep getting better from what ive heard ladies. no citations yet Popo Crys!

Um, yeah. Co-sign with what Nuri said.

Just.................co-sign.

BITCH! I thought you loved me! WHY??? WHY???? WHY??

All this pain! Ugh! I just wanna grab those two and say SPEAK! Damn!

Beautiful, Sylv, beautiful!

soooooooooo amazing. damn. i didnt exactly cry, but i was close.

this is why me and whit are HERE. and twin. and the part ab the nighttime in bed being the time when your thoughts are the loudest. yeah.

the parts in italics, the actual quotes, are those from the transcripts? they sound pretty close to the real thing.

Wow! I don't even know where to start. Damn! My Whit! I feel your pain!

Great update Bo!

I'm sorry. Italics for indicate that it's a flashback, not taking place in the present.

lol, you misunderstood me. i'll ask you in chat or on aim.

lol @ Whitresa, love them.

Wow, I miss it too Fox, I miss the two of you too.

These two, trying so hard to be happy/content with what they have when they really need something else, so sad.

I hate Kay get hurt but it's time for Fox & whitney to make their way to each other.

sigh, good job again. whit is killing me. shes reprimanding herself like shes her own mother. no one should be that hard on themselves. sounds familiar.

i loved the sexiness of it all too.

damn! damn! damn!

All these damn plots and schemes! Al! Whit's secret, Kay's secret, ohhh, love it!

Whitresa! Classic! Loves it!

ugh! i don't LIKE you! the Blessing Strike is still pending. ((waves fist))
stop with the dtm.

um, that whitresa-ness was great. i couldnt have imagined it more perfectly. esp with the crying...just, UGH.

i need to go gather myself.

Alright. Some quick thoughts:

Alan: needs to take a dirt nap with Dud. He is on my SHAT list.

Theresa: GOLD! I love the girl. She had grown up and I am soo glad she is there to talk sense to Whit.

Dud: DUMB AS A BOX OF ROCKS! And why could I see that scene with him and Al played out so clearly in my head, right down to the movements and facial expressions. Damn, he is soo stupid.

Mysterious caller on the phone: WHO???????!!!!!!!

Whitney: she is still shakeable. And I wish she would stop singing Kay's praises. That chick ain't far from fake her damnself. But Whit is soo busy putting herself down, she doesn't have time to see the real in other people. Oh, when will the shades come off. WHEN?????!!!!!!!!!

I really liked this chapter. I got more info to the story but now there are more questions. This is not fun, Sylv. Is this your way of getting me back for my fic? Real cute but I can't take much more of this intrigue.

UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What alister want ot do with the baby. If whitney is out the way.

ugh you got my emotions screwed up....NOT cool.

Update this masterpiece soon. Thanks bunches

Okies. So you know I LOVE this chapter. You know your characters so the interaction is believeable. This update ROCKED!

Got to see Kay's true colors and how Al does collect. I wonder what he is gonna have Kay do? And I wonder how Whitney is gonna whip Kay's ass b/c if Kay thinks Whit gave up the love of her life just to be taken out by the secretary from hell, she has another thing coming.

Trevor is my fav. Can I have a guy just like him? Picking up and moving for his Binky. Michelle better hold on to him because I am hatin'.

Dud, I am SO glad you are dead. Keeping Whit away from her bestie T and from her family. Man is on crack. But Trevor how did you make your way back into Whit's life and why did you have to worm your way back in at all?

Yeah, to coin Nuri, DTM. DOING TOO DAMN MUCH! But I know it is all coming full circle and hence the intrigue has been taken to new heights. And speaking of Nuri,

IMPRESSIVE BANNER! I really do get the feel of the story in it. The emotions through out the story have been conveyed in that banner to a T. Just, just....DAMN! No words. Speechless. The banner just speaks for itself.

But I do feel like I am about to go to church on a hot Sunday morning, fan and all, walking down the countryroad when I see that banner. Dang, that is a pretty detailed picture. You never cease Nuri, never cease.

I thought this chapter was alright.

I SWEAR you make me feel like I'm watching a movie! LOVED the sorted details!

Ok Kay needs her behind WHOOPED! Damn I'm even more curious now, can't wait until this is all panned out!

So I take it Kent plays Trevor's girlfriend/Alan's cousin!?!? COOLNESS great choice!


OMG NURI that banner is amazing!!!!

Um lets have the next update by tomorrow the latest thanks.

st. trevor the russell?
BINKY?

im loving these names.

i need to know who this mystery person on the phone is like yesterday. WHO would care this much ab whit and be trying to warn ppl???????????

i liked the trev/fox interaction. they both seem to have whits best interest in sight.

so kay knows the truth...what a little trick. i just want to get one good punch in on her. and how shes doing big al's bidding. let her come near whit. just let her.

dont know if i like michelle yet, i bet shes going to help alan. that bastard. we still dont know who he was talking to on the phone either do we? see...

D
T
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keep it up twin.

lol, thanks crys and ava on the banner comments. it was a lot to work with. i wasnt sure i was going to fit everything in. the design put up a good fight. but i just made the image bigger, and pushed on through.

im glad you see emotion ava. thats what i was going for. i think the colors came out well.

and yeah, the guy above chad is trevor, and the girl next to him is michelle. author's picks.

I still wonder what Alister want with Foxney kid.

Yeah Nuri's right the nicknames are supurb!


SEE I'm functioning much better now, yeah again I agree with mom nuri I'm hesitant about liking Shells but I DO LOVE that she's being played by Kent, so we'll see.


I have so many theories but I'm not saying squat, knowing you if I'm right YOU'll change it!!!!


You know how I feel about that love scene, so we don't have to go there again.


OMG was I the only one that got a DAMN KICK out of Kay being "Mrs. NC" YET she's the secretary BUAHAHAHAHAHAHA. LOVED that shat.


Keep the greatness coming Sylv.

Alright. I think I can write a comprehensive review for this update now.

So I have said it before and I will say it again. You BROKE the mold with this update. Your writing style has peaked and then some. It can only go SKY HIGH from here on in. I am SOOOOOOOO proud of you, Sylv. I know more EXCELLENCE is to come.

Ok, I guess it is safe to say that Fox and Whitney's relationship was never an ordinary one. With the lies, secrets, and sacrifices, how can two people not love the hell out of each other regardless of the hurt and pain their better intentions have caused. More so on Whit's side than any, but still.

This lovemaking was just earthshattering. I really want to know what happened the morning after. I love the fact the story is still going along with the show and that we actually know what Fox and Whit are thinking. Fox KNOWS Whit. He knows her better than her own family and she knows that. Just once, I really wish she would realize it and just let him love her. She did for that one night but what about for eternity? Why would that be such a bad thing? People lie all the time. Just let the man forgive you and keep it moving.

And this mystery friend. Seems to know Whit as well. A guardian angel and a saving grace. I am glad Whit has someone like that in her life. Can this person also tell her that Fox is the right person for her?

Ok, this turned into a long reply but these things were just on my mind and at 5am, you kinda have to write them out. Still intrigued and I still want TONS more. I cannot wait. Literally, I can't. Like the waiting thing, I can't do. So Hurry PLEASE!

:lol:

TAKE a number Ava

Great update Sylv! Umm I told you in IM and I'll say it again, Kay is a insecure bitch. And Alan, I have no words for him. It's best that way...lol. Loved the Seacliff flashback. ::: heavy sigh ::: I miss my couple. Oh and I understand Fox isn't too fond of Katherine, hell I'm not on most occasions, but I LOVE how she read his ass like a newspaper. And how can you leave us hanging like that?!? :hair: I want to know who was at the door damnit lol. Update soon. Thanks. Love ya

no comment on kay and alan cuz thosw two asses gonna get theirs, right Sylv?


I really liked the Fox and Kat talk, I hope she stays on his ass.

I love these two, even if they make me wanna yell and smack them upside their heads. You love each other, stop the foolishness and get on that!

Love the update Sylv, but I gotta run before Crys gets here.

sigh. it feels like its been 5 years since ive been in this thread.

ok, the beginning is a blur. it really is. bc i was so FUCKIN GIDDY while reading the second flashback that i dont remember anything else.

you got that clip down to a capital T. all your descriptions of their body language are exactly what i think everytime i watch that clip. damn. im gonna have to watch it tonight now.

hmmm, yeah. i really cant comment on anyone else mentioned in the story, besides saying the ppl im not supposed to like i don't, and am iffy ab the ppl it seems like i'm supposed to, and i love fox and whit and miles (i wish he had a diff name in this).

its fox @ the door, its fox @ the door!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it better be!

NO you did NOT come out your black ass face and say ‘…don’t say I didn’t give you anything…’ A SIX MONTH LATE update!!! YOU are such an ass.

On with the review…

Um the little italicized opening was NOT cute wtf is “she”?...

UM who is Michelle?.... OH nm. WHITNEY’S FRIEND…see THAT’S WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SOMEONE WAITS SIX MONTHS TO POST A DAMN UPDATE.

WOW Kay Bennett is a dumbitch. She DROVE OFF with Alan, a guy she BARELY knows. Plan or not, you don’t know him from fucking adam. See the FACT she is using Charity’s name shows a lot. Ugh, divorce this heffa yesterday thanks.

WTF is Kat? OOOOOOOOOOH his grandmother, again…a long break made me FORGET THINGS. Boo, I know how you feel about your gma. I can so relate…

DARE TO BE DIFFERENT? LOVES it. THAT skank did not say that, I refuse to give her such brilliant credit.

PROJECT MIMI. Oh you went there huh?

SIX MONTHS TO WAIT FOR MORE FUCKING QUESTIONS!?!?!? TIME OUT. BULLOCK. TIME OUT.

YOU SHOULD TALK NELSON. YUP you get it too!!!

BOTH OF YOU!! ASSES I SAY ASSES!!!

BUT on the flipy flip sunny side, that was brilliant.

SYLVIA IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, where to start?

Alan and Kay....need to die. That is all. I can't believe both these people are gonna use any means necessary to get Fox and Whitney in their lives. Life isn't fair you two. SUCK IT UP! UGH...kill them, please!

LOVED the Kat and Fox talk. I wanted moments like these on Passions but JER writes for that show so we KNOW that ain't gonna happen. But I am glad she got to see thru him. Everything may be okay on the outside, Fox, but nothing can mask the pain you feel on the inside...especially your eyes.

Foxney.....GOODNESS! Never in my life have I wanted to screamed so loud at two people. Loved the flashback to the greatness that is SeaCliff. However, I know Whitney has a plan and all but this is just ridiculous. She has put herself in this horrible position, she also got Alan about to start some trouble, and THEN she hurt Fox as well. LAWD! And then Fox, stringing that hussy Kay along and you know once he leaves her, she gone be one razor cut away from killing herself. Fox, get Trevor and Whitney, get your guardian angel and BOTH OF YOU fix this, PRONTO!

And um yeah, Fox is at the door. BET!

GRAND Chapter, dear!