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Title: I.O.U.


Hetairai - November 24, 2005 05:43 AM (GMT)
chat away :)

ImMadAsHell - November 24, 2005 05:47 AM (GMT)
So far so good. I hope something to prove Fox is Miles child 7 since Whitney look like she's running things maybe she can do some mind games with Fox if Miles is Fox son.

Zoe Saldana - November 24, 2005 05:58 AM (GMT)
*basking on feeling special*

Ok seriosuly I LOVE this fic. THANK YOU FOR FINALLY posting it!!!!

Don't think my PITAness will die it so won't, oh well blame the fact you're an amazing writier.


OMG THIS iS the WHIT that needs to be on the TV. MAN I can't wait til Whit gives Chad a TALL @ss glass of STFU.

Kay is a dumb b!tch, man she trips me up though......CAN'T WAIT to see where you take this.

I won't be greedy tonight but tomorrow's a whole other story. :wub:

Aisha Tyler - November 24, 2005 07:37 AM (GMT)
OH HECK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can feel it. This is going to be great.

Whitney Russell, acting CEO of Crane Industries.

DAMN. DAMN. DAMN. That is the hotness. I can just imagine her in a suit, with her hair pulled back, looking sleek, lethal, and looking to take NO SHAT from ANYONE!!!!!!!

Umm yeah, Het. Update as soon as time permits. Crysta, bless you. This NEEDED to put down.

OH YES!!!!!! I cannot wait for more. I LOVE a woman in power.

BKfan2005 - November 25, 2005 01:28 AM (GMT)
Crys, has me hooked on this story only by chatting about it.....

I LOVE this Whitney...she's strong.

PLEASE have her give Chugh a TALL....T A L L glass of STFU! ughhhhh

Never did I think I'd dislik anyone more than Chugh in a fanfic but the first words out of Kay's mouth made me ill. I loved that Fox was thinking about how she has no faith in him.....

Het, this is amazing & I can not wait until you update.

CocoTapioka - November 25, 2005 05:36 PM (GMT)
Eww. someone murder Chad, please.

whitbrookfan4life - November 26, 2005 10:52 PM (GMT)
OOOOOOOOOOMG. awesome start! i knew my het had it in her! after an entire SUMMER of her randomly commanding me to write a fic with her creative ideas, she's gone ahead, stopped being lazy, and done it herself. i'm so proud.

i have a feeling this fic is going to have things happen in it just the way i wish they would have.

you can't leave us here! please please please let her say she wants miles back and she plans on renaming him. PUH LEASE! :pray:

Zoe Saldana - November 29, 2005 05:53 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kerry Washington @ Nov 26 2005, 06:52 PM)
after an entire SUMMER of her randomly commanding me to write a fic with her creative ideas, she's gone ahead, stopped being lazy, and done it herself. i'm so proud.

Yeah I'm grateful she rewarded us with her greatness once more but um....she's on to something with you writing a fic..... :heart:

whitbrookfan4life - November 29, 2005 11:19 PM (GMT)
haha, you'll most likely have to keep dreaming on that one. at least for right now.

i get ideas in my daydreams all the time...good luck on me actually recording them.

Zoe Saldana - December 1, 2005 04:34 AM (GMT)
whatever missy....you do AMAZING BANNERS now, surely you can cough up a fic for the fam....don't worry I'm patient and also persistant. :wub:

Aisha Tyler - December 6, 2005 11:00 PM (GMT)
OH SHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whitney did not waste ANY time. She is serious. So glad Dud sees that she has changed. And how dare he? She didn't throw her baby away. I am surprised he is still standing b/c bro would be DEAD if I was dealing with him. Well, she has joint custody of Miles now but Dud, stop trying. Your efforts are futile. She DON'T want you man.

LMAO....::shakes head at Kay::. Oh, well, at least she knows Fox is still in love with Whit. But she didn't suck him in, dear. When you think of your true love, nothing else matters, including your childish rants. Calm that down, girl.

Foxney.......Fox, you and your fantasies. On the conference table, huh? It is the beginning of a new era of CI, maybe it does need to be christened. Let me stop. But I wonder what Whit is going to do for Fox. Do I smell a VP position coming on meaning long hours and late nights of Foxney working together? Works for me.

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So glad you FINALLY put it up......ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BKfan2005 - December 7, 2005 12:23 AM (GMT)
GOSH! Kay is very ughhhhhhhhhhhh...STFU! PLEASE!

Can Chugh get any more stupid? I have to wonder.......where the paper's for joint custody or full? hmmmmmmm, interesting seeing as how he didn't read them......that would be so cool!

Fox and his fantasy's......on the conference table. Bad Boy Fox, Very Bad Boy! although that would be HOT!

HET! Your killing me w/ these cliffhanger's.....

Thank's for the update!

Zoe Saldana - December 7, 2005 12:54 AM (GMT)
yup its official both dud and kay need to die....double homocide and just get it over with!

AWESOME update!!! SOOOOOOOOOOON MORE YESTERDAY. THanks

whitbrookfan4life - December 7, 2005 04:45 PM (GMT)
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

no words. no words at all.

BKfan2005 - December 22, 2005 04:29 PM (GMT)
I'm so glad Whitney is willing to face up to what she did to Fox & itsn't backing away. Show' she's changed......Project MiMi should be a good start for them to get to know one another again.....she didn't forget & that means alot to Fox. I love that Kay & Maria basically mean nothing to him...Kay isn't Whitney & Maria will never be the combination of Fox & Whitney.

So, someone is working against Whitney & Theresa to get CI.....I wonder who it could be... Kay, Chugh or even Val

I can't wait to read your next updat Het!

ImMadAsHell - December 22, 2005 04:43 PM (GMT)
I like how she was with both Fox & Chad. & i'm hoping that Fox & Whitney have to get married to get Myles back. & I'm hoping they change his name.

whitbrookfan4life - December 22, 2005 06:18 PM (GMT)
OH, shit. this old farts better not do anything to whit! or t!

the scene with foxney was hott. i want to know what the note says.

Zoe Saldana - December 23, 2005 02:06 AM (GMT)
Yeah Nuri I want to know what the note says too.

UM those goons REALLY doesn't know Whitresa huh? He'll learn the HARD way

GREAT update Het, like YESTERDAY the new one should be up!

Alicia Keys - December 23, 2005 11:05 PM (GMT)
chud is a damn fool. I really do hate him. And on the real, that BET NOT be him on the other end of that phone with Charles. But I feel that it is. I hope he dies soon.

DAAAAAAYYYYYYYYUUUUUUMMMMMM to the Fox and Whitney convo. See, that's how you know a couple is hot. They didn't even DO anything and I'm fanning myself. All they did was have an honest conversation, and I'm bugging and begging for more.

And man I LOVE this Whitney. I wish she was this way on the show. And I hope she beats the BRICKS off of Kay's annoying ass. Cause Lord knows if she doesn't, I will.

So wait, did T appoint Whitney to this position, or did it just work out that way?

Aisha Tyler - December 24, 2005 08:54 AM (GMT)
Alright, no VP position for Fox but he will have to report to her so that is a start.

Now onto Foxney. I basically agree with everything Sylvia said. HE SAID NO! He did not let her back down. Where the hell is this Fox on my tv screen? he knows Whitney like the back of his hand and he was NOT letting up. And SHE GAVE IN! I mean, Whitney dear, why fight it? Now time to start earning back what you lost and I wonder if she is starting with what she wrote.

OK, added intrigue. Loving it. I especially love the fact that this evil outsider is named Charles. How symbolic....lol. But who is on the other end of the phone? Only time will tell.

Het, I should hurt you for keeping this under wraps for so long. Love this story. Please update soon.

Hetairai - December 24, 2005 12:12 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
So wait, did T appoint Whitney to this position, or did it just work out that way?

It just work out that way. From my Law & Order knowledge. Theresa cannot profit from a crime she's accused of committing so whoever is EM's guardian will have control of his estate and that's godmomma Whit.


QUOTE
So wait, did T appoint Whitney to this position, or did it just work out that way?

LOL that soooo was not done on purpose. I was thinking of an uppity name for an Alistair like character and for some reason I thought of prince Charles.


Loving the feedback!

Zoe Saldana - November 13, 2006 12:38 AM (GMT)
:)

My story is back. My story is back. My story is back.

besta you knew better no problem dear, anytime. glad I was of some help. :P

MAN TC had muncho problems!!! Ignate as ever. Guess that's just how its suppose to be...

FOXY pooo.... everything eh? Good, get that ball rollin' homie.

LESIGH!!! Whit and Mone Whit and Mone Whit and Mone!!!!! GAHness. So glad that everything is s l o w l y getting back on track!!!!!!!!!

Pity Whit didn't tell TC where to stuff it.

You know I'm salavating for ch. 5 right????

*new deadline* consult me to find out what it is. B)

niffy20 - November 17, 2006 08:06 PM (GMT)
great uupdate, great story update please.

whitbrookfan4life - February 1, 2007 12:17 AM (GMT)
whit and simone! it's too much! :: tears up ::

oh man. i really hope you're working on an update for this.




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