I have only one major problem with this: It's a one shot! Nuri, seriously, could you pretty please with a cherry on top re-think that part? :pray: Need is the right title for this because I NEED to read more. Excellent work. You never fail to capture the true essence of Whitney in your writings. My heart seriously ached for her. I loved beyond measure the way you brought Simone into the mix. *sigh* I have to stop myself from going on a rant of how JER waited till the last few months to give them good scenes with one another yet I still don't think it was enough...Okay, I guess I didn't stop myself lol. Anyways, I also love how you intelligently wrote the dumbness of Dud. Seriously, the way you relayed his stupidity deserves a bow all on its own. *bows.* I was hoping TC would pop in and end dumb-dumb's life but nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed Simone putting his ass in his place. I also loved the little Foxney mention :wub:. Okay I think I'm finally done. Excellent excellent work :heart: