I have started a story on the fan fiction board, entitled "Echoes" This is a story I have worked and struggled with for a few years now. So as the story progresses, I would like to read your reactions.

Well here's the thread to put you're opinions, good, bad or indifferent I will take no offence (or prisoners) lol.

So just give me some feedback OK?

is that as far as you have got or will you be putting some more on tomorrow?

There is nothing wrong with what you have done so far and you have made me interested in the rest of the story with the begining so that shows it is good dosent it?

The next 2 or 3 parts will be added tonight. I'm editing and rewriting as I go, from roughs I've been scribbling down for a while now.

I can promise you shocks galore and more familiar faces than you can shake a daleks plunger at ;)

Jamie, I've just read your story. It's intriguing. I have a question though, are you writing this as fanfic/short story or as a work of fiction?

uhmmm, all of the above. No none of the above, oh I don't know how it'll end up. It could well end up the size of the Oxford English Dictionary. I still don't know. I'm editing as I go. The original version of what you've read was about 10 A4 pages (single sided). So honestly i don't know yet which category it'll fall into when it's finished. But it is definitely fiction, by a fan, (so it's fanfic) But it's also a unique standalone story (unique? I hope lol) So I cannot categorise it just yet.

ah okay. Fanfic is new to me, I'm never sure what the writer is trying to do. Write it as a script, or as pure fiction.

Oh it's pure fiction, to the core. I couldn't write a script. As you may have noticed I'm a bit (over) descriptive in my storytelling

Funny you should say that Jamie, I was thinking it possibly needed fleshing out in places. Only because, the momentum is lost between chapters (I'm guessing, I'm making absolutely no sense, so feel free to ignore that last comment)

AAAAAHHHHHH, between chapters eh. Keep reading. All will be revealed

Now I'm totally intrigued :lol:

read part 5 - still going strong! Is there nobody after the 3rd doctor appearing then?

Oh there are a few more faces ready in the wings, but the unit crew are going to be busy in the next part. Very busy. Very very busy (what does earth have an invade us sticker on it's forehead???)

part 2.5

Curiorser and curiorser said Alice

you're saying that now, but I'm barely getting started ;)

cannot wait to read more.

How are you my friend? Thank you again for the other night.

The next part will be materialising sometime tonight. Don't be expecting linear progression though ;)

And about the the other night, well, no probs, anytime :)

Look forward to it

Episode 6

Yes! Tegan's in it.

Although I could possibly agree with Persephone that some of the chapters are a little short, I still think they are well written and done in a way that makes you eager to get to the next part.

Looking forward to seeing some more later in the week.

Well, I'm still not sure what the size limit is on these boards. I've been bitten too many times by the beeb boards for exceeding size limits, so there a bit smaller.

But as I always say "size isn't everything" lol

Actually I never say that, but, hey

Part 3.5

another rewind?

The story is still moving at a decent pace and it is still making us want to read more.

Trying to decide how it is going to end?

Part 7

Brillent, simpley brillent - anyone who knows the show at all must laugh their heads off at this one!!

just read your latest chapter - so saving Adric then?

and the message the 5th doctor received was that from the 9th?

seems to be building up a pace is there many to go?

At least 12 more chapters, depending on how much I edit it down. It could be as many as 20 more.

Chapter 9 - very funny ending and a typical comment for Ace to come out with.

Must admit her doctor was always my least favourite so I havent watched the Sly McCoy ones as much as the rest so I dont know Ace very well.

It all seems to be coming on very well. Looking forward to the rest.

Parts 9.5 and 10 are available for your perusal now Ken, so enjoy

something is obviously going on that you havent really let on about yet, episode 9.5 seems to suggest that, perhaps the dr isnt dying after all?

The last episode you did was intriging as well and what a cliff hanger!!!

will look forward to some more tomorrow.

"Cliffhanger"?? Where?

Oh right, the Daleks. OK. The next couple of parts will be on here sometime today. Get ready for some surprises. ;)

Oh damn, they won't be surprises now :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

OMEGA !!!!!

Now didnt see that one coming. (honest)

more please?

If you didn't see that coming then, just wait to see what part 12 will bring. You wont believe the ending I have planned for that. :fear: :fear:

I've told you I hope you are not planning to kill off Tegan or Sarah Jane :mad: :mad: :mad: (only Joking)

I can neither confirm nor deny anything at this point, except to say, that at the end of part twelve, my cast list will be one character shorter. Tee heee.

But Ken, by the time you read this, part 12 will already have been posted, so you'll know who it is. You won't be in suspenders for long (unless you find them liberating?) :lol: :lmao: :lmao:

I feel like BASIL BRUSH in his old tv show when he used to always say

YOU CANNOT END IT THERE !!!!!!!

Cannot wait for the next part, come on get the good Doc to read it and then you can post it for the rest of us (haha)

and no I dont wear suspenders but I would like to know a woman who would.(haha)

I could end it there, couldn't I?

Maybe I will, maybe I wont. Who Knows?????? :innocent: :innocent:

I could give you all a clue as to what might happen next, but the odds on that happening are abour 13/1.

It's all a numbers game I suppose.

13 assistants....13 doctors ????

Congratulations Ken1701

You have won, the prize for stating the obvious

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:

:D :D :D :angry: :angry: :angry: :D :D :D :P

Im glad you took that post in such good humour Ken, I just re-read it there, and it is a little bitchier than even my own usual low standards. :(

Echoes part 13 will be on later tonight, now with added paragraphs.

There's an "Americanism" if ever I typed one lol

Hope you dont think I was angry or anything at you, was trying to be funny.

Looking forward to the next episode

I will get around to it sometime today. I'm just feeling a little delicate right now.