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Title: How Can I Improve?


[.x.] Freedom - August 6, 2007 07:40 PM (GMT)
Hey, its me :lol: . I just wanted to ask you all how you thought I could improve on my RPing. I don't think I'm bad at RPing, but I don't think I'm as good as some of you on here - so I just wanted to know what you all thought of my posts, and what I can do to improve them. I honestly don't mind what you say about my posts - you can say they are awful if you want. Anyway, please post here :)

Aalaya - August 7, 2007 02:21 AM (GMT)
I probably shouldn't be posting here since I don't consider myself much better than anyone else. But a fault I see in both our posts is perhaps we use too much rp lingo instead of taking the time to describe a simple thing, like a forest, in more detail.

[.x.] Freedom - August 7, 2007 07:24 PM (GMT)
Aalaya you are way better than me at RPing! I know what you mean about the lingo thing xD

Arabian - August 7, 2007 07:29 PM (GMT)
I must say I agree with Aalaya..nothing against you Freedom, you are magnificent (so's are you Aalaya ^^) but sometimes even though your posts are extremely long, if you took out all the RPG lingo you'd have about a paragraph.

RPG language is good, but preserving the English language is an excellent thing. ^^ Oh yeah, sometimes you sound impressive and other time's.....you sound like you're having a bad day and can't think of something to write about...

[.x.] Freedom - August 7, 2007 07:31 PM (GMT)
Lol... most of the time my muse is completely dead :P

Can I just say I always love your posties Arab. :D

Arabian - August 7, 2007 07:37 PM (GMT)
As are the rest of ours. ^^

o.O Why?......

[.x.] Freedom - August 7, 2007 07:47 PM (GMT)
I don't know really - it's just the way you write them. They just always seem to flow really well..... :blink:

Arabian - August 7, 2007 07:53 PM (GMT)
......Suuurrreee.......anyway's back to Le Freedom! XD

One more thing, try to keep the plot going when you post, sometimes you write like an uber fantasric postie and then you leave the person replying hanging...without a clue as to how to reply. >_> -cough- But like I said, just keep the ball rollin'. XD

Other than that you are full of talent and an exceptionally good writer! =3

[.x.] Freedom - August 7, 2007 08:10 PM (GMT)
Thanks ^^ - I'll try to think about all of that when I next reply at something




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