ABOUT YOU
Name: Tia
Age: 25
Contact Info: yahoo-wchtcs, msn-thecrowrules1982@hotmail.com and aim-LestatsT.
How you found us: From Away from the Sun site.

CHARACTER INFO
Character name: Andrew Louis Harris
Nicknames: Andy, Drew
Character age: 25
Birthdate: 1983.
Gender: Male
Is this character supernaturally inclined? Nope.
Strengths: His kindness, helping others are the two strengths he has.
Weaknesses any human weakness you can think of. If someone hurts the ones he loves he'll cry.
Weapons carried on person: None.

Tell me about yourself
Hair colour/style: Blond (but now its dyed black)
Eye colour: Blue
Portrayal: Jonathan Rhys Meyers
Picture:

Physical description: Andrew wears anything he can lay his hands on but mostly prefers close to gothic style (think of Hot Topic.) You would also find him wearing a black beanie sometimes. He has a tattoo of a bat on his left shoulder and a muscular body, though it is kind of skinny due to him not eating that much. Andrew's hair is shoulder length. He usually has it long but sometimes he'd cut it just above his ears or at his eyebrows.

Likes: Painting, playing violin, writing poetry (sometimes), holding onto his backpack which has his childhood stuffed animal of Toucan Sam that his sister gave him, Fruit Loops and of course men.
Dislikes: Death, rude people, and gangsta rap (when it comes to music.)
Fears: Being alone.
Nervous habits: Looking down at the ground, loosing eye contact with people, and shuffling.

Personality description: Andrew is a kind individual but also extremely shy. If you come up to him he wouldn't look at you straight in the eye, so he'd be shy at first but once he gets used to you, he'll go straight on to talking and gets comfortable. If he likes someone (he is after all homosexual), he'd blush and flirt with them, that is if they flirt first. He also looks at life as a second chance, even after what he had gone through. He also can be funny at times.

Take me home to meet mom and dad:
Parents: Bernard and Susan (who are currently in prison)
Siblings: Karolina, Rolan, and Sam (brother, alive)
Children: None.

History: Andrew had a bad life. He was born Andrew Louis Harris to Bernard and Susan Harris, the fourth child of four children. His sister Karolina was born first in 1974, following by Rolan (1976), Sam (1980) and then in 1983, Andrew was born. Their parents were married and happily until when Andrew was three, their marriage took a strange twist-they abandoned their children in the alleyway in the city of New York when they were there for a trip. Without the children knowing, their parents moved to Germany where their marriage continued however, they were caught and taken to prison for child neglect. An tipster who had taken in the children, reported to the police, who in fact sent an agent to Germany and tracked down the parents. They are now in prison, for other charges including killing an seventy-three year old woman after she had taken something from their house while she was working as an maid, in germany.

The children stayed in an foster home. When Andrew was six, all of the children were adopted by an nice man named Carl Stones. Three years ago, Andrew encountered Trevor when he was walking down near Trevor's garage and was in a bad shape. Thinking he's an very attractive mortal man, Andrew stayed with Trevor, until he found out Trevor is an vampire whose appetite is blood. He grew close with Andrew and since they are very close, Andrew refers him as "master" after he agreeded to supply him with blood to help him not to go out of control. To this day he's still with him, even though his siblings began to be concerned. They had tried to talk him out of going to Trevor's garage as they had encountered the garage before one night, but he seemed to not to listen.

Recently, after Andrew got fed up with being treated like that, he ran away. Now he's on his own. And glad that finally he knows its not best to stay there. Sorry Trevor! You snooze, you loose...
Another fact is, Andrew's childhood toy is a stuffed animal of Toucan Sam, that he always have. Though now he usually keep it in his hotel room but that, along with his cereal and some money are the only things he took with him. He was a pomme de song for some vampire who he doesn't wanna ever see again. Now he is currently in Miami hoping for a new future and beginning.

Writing Sample:Andrew walked into the nearest nightclub that he could find that is close to his hotel room. Only ten bucks are left in his pocket. As he now stood in the line, he thought to himself of how he could get in. Do I have enough money? he thought to himself as he looked ahead to the other people that are standing in front of him. The line was long-about 100 or so. And he, a 5'7 foot handsome man with crystal blue eyes and dyed black hair, are at the back. Way way back. Andrew shrugged. It is worth it, to him, since he had wanted to come to this place since he first arrived in Miami.

The line moved. One by one each flashed their ID's. "ID," he whispered as he searched his pockets. "Oh shit I forgot. Need ID." Then he pulled it out from his back pocket and looked at it and smiled. "Yes, now I can go in." His turn was up. The bouncer stuck out his hand to grab the ID. With one look, he handed it back to him.
"Welcome," he said to him.
"Thanks," Andrew replied and made his way inside. Andrew started to think of his past-from when his parents had abandoned he and his siblings, to when he was a vampire's food/sex source. He was so angry at how he was treated that the young man packed up everything he had and left, thus including money about $54 dollars he had saved up from having helped one of the workers at the garage with something. Now he is here in Miami and what more can he get from that? At least its better than being at the garage. He had friends there but, he felt he was used. He found himself an empty table, and sat down. He slid his backpack underneath the table, following by resting his chin on his hands to watch as the dancers danced on the dance floor.
I'm free, he thought to himself as he smiled to himself as well.

And the rest:
Anything else? Nope

Did you read the rules? ADMIN EDIT

The app looks pretty good, though I would like to talk over your writing sample. The tense varies, and whilst I know that is from your mixed writing style we are fully in third person on the board so can you check it over and have it all in third please?

Let me know when you've done that and I will have a re-read. :)

Okay dude, check it out now. I fixed it. :)

APPROVED

Thanks for making the changes Tia.