Title: ZHOU, hikari
Hikari Zhou - July 20, 2007 03:15 AM (GMT)
__++hello. my name is…
name/nickname:: Mae
age:: 18
experience:: about five years of RPing. Some sites are (recent ones) X-Men Legacy, X-Men Consequences, City of the Hunted, and Away from the Sun.
other characters here:: First character
__++you can call me…
&&__basic information
full name:: Hikari Zhou
nickname(s):: Light, Kari
birthdate::January 7, 1991
age:: 24
ethnicity:: Chinese
orientation:: heterosexual
species:: human
belongs to:: N/A
title:: Rogue
&&__physical description
height:: 5' 2"
weight::110 lbs
eye color:: Brown
hair color:: Black
body type:: Slender
distinguishing marks:: A white lotus tattoo on her right shoulder
dress style:: Hikari is not very particular with clothes, as long as it's fashionable and something she likes. Most of the time, she would wear a nice blouse with jeans. Other days, she'll wear a nice t-shirt with jeans. So basically she had a mixed style. Only when Hikari feels like being formal, she'll wear a dress, and/or skirt.
portrayal:: Hikaru Utada
picture::
&&__personality test
likes::
general description:: She's definitely the term for ying yang. Hikari can be a great person; loving, caring, loyal, etc, But that's only with friends and family. With people she doesn't know, it depends on what they do to have her be naughty or nice. With enemies, oh ho beware. She takes the line "and eye for an eye" seriously. Hikari will make them pay, verbally and physically.
&&__battle royale
artillary:: For guns, she has two brownings and two pistols. The Brownings are on a gun belt around her waist, and the pistols on thigh straps.
swordsmanship:: Hikari had a light weight katana in her hands. Her experience with is novice. She's only had it for about four years. But she's improving.
martial arts:: Hikari took karate when she was five years old and stopped taking classes when she was eighteen. But when she's at home, she practices her old karate moves when she can.
combat:: When it comes to hand to hand combat, it's decent. She prefers weapons because that's where she gets most of her strength. Even with taking karate, Hikari has poor upper body strength. Her kicks though have power though.
&&__family history
father’s name::Rino Zhou- deceased
mother’s name:: Hina Zhou
sibling’s name::Sun Zhou
general history::
&&__proving your worth
role-playing sample::
name/nickname:: Mae
age:: 18
experience:: about five years of RPing. Some sites are (recent ones) X-Men Legacy, X-Men Consequences, City of the Hunted, and Away from the Sun.
other characters here:: First character
__++you can call me…
&&__basic information
full name:: Hikari Zhou
nickname(s):: Light, Kari
birthdate::January 7, 1991
age:: 24
ethnicity:: Chinese
orientation:: heterosexual
species:: human
belongs to:: N/A
title:: Rogue
&&__physical description
height:: 5' 2"
weight::110 lbs
eye color:: Brown
hair color:: Black
body type:: Slender
distinguishing marks:: A white lotus tattoo on her right shoulder
dress style:: Hikari is not very particular with clothes, as long as it's fashionable and something she likes. Most of the time, she would wear a nice blouse with jeans. Other days, she'll wear a nice t-shirt with jeans. So basically she had a mixed style. Only when Hikari feels like being formal, she'll wear a dress, and/or skirt.
portrayal:: Hikaru Utada
picture::
&&__personality test
likes::
- -men
-Anything Asian influenced
- art/fashion
- Music (types she likes)
- Wolves
- Tigers
-family
-friends
-drawing
-Books; especially mangas and novels
- - crowded places
-polluted cities
-spiders
-rats
-old, perverted farts
-Enemies
-Rapists, homicidals
-Rap and country
- stupid people
-Wasps
- -gets lost in thought all the time
- keeps to herself a lot
- is very judgmental
-Reading too many Japanese comics and novels, even the naughty ones
-likes to blast music, even instrumental
general description:: She's definitely the term for ying yang. Hikari can be a great person; loving, caring, loyal, etc, But that's only with friends and family. With people she doesn't know, it depends on what they do to have her be naughty or nice. With enemies, oh ho beware. She takes the line "and eye for an eye" seriously. Hikari will make them pay, verbally and physically.
&&__battle royale
artillary:: For guns, she has two brownings and two pistols. The Brownings are on a gun belt around her waist, and the pistols on thigh straps.
swordsmanship:: Hikari had a light weight katana in her hands. Her experience with is novice. She's only had it for about four years. But she's improving.
martial arts:: Hikari took karate when she was five years old and stopped taking classes when she was eighteen. But when she's at home, she practices her old karate moves when she can.
combat:: When it comes to hand to hand combat, it's decent. She prefers weapons because that's where she gets most of her strength. Even with taking karate, Hikari has poor upper body strength. Her kicks though have power though.
&&__family history
father’s name::Rino Zhou- deceased
mother’s name:: Hina Zhou
sibling’s name::Sun Zhou
general history::
- - born into a middle class family to two human parents
- Her sister was born three years later
-At age five, she started taking karate in self defense and didn't stop until age eighteen
- When she was ten, her father died in a car accident. According to rumors, it was caused by a vampire or werewolf. It was never confirmed.
- After the accident, they moved to New Jersey to live a peaceful life.
- High school was where Hikari got her steely personality.
-Sometimes Hikari was bullied in school, even by the bigger freshman, but she turned the tables on them. Strangely enough, she was never in trouble.
- She was always hit on in school, but Hikari knew how to keep them away.
- Since her mother was in the police force, she trained Hikari in gun fire.
- After graduating high school Hikari went to FIT for art major.
- She decided to study abroad so she went to France.
- Hikari finished college when she was twenty-one
-Before she graduated, her mother let her buy a light weight katana to train with.
- Besides drawing the usual objects, she likes to draw original vampires and werewolves.
- For the present, she is just hiding her lethal side until something comes up
&&__proving your worth
role-playing sample::
| QUOTE |
| (Past event) "Class? Can anyone tell me what is the derivative of cosine x is?" A few hands were raised, some hesitant. Kiana's was one of them. Calculus was one of her least favorite classes because she couldn't understand the concepts. Algebra wasn't, calc was. Or was it because it was just a new subject that she needed time to adjust to? Either way, she was trying to at least pass with a C average. All her other classes, art, English, and music, she was passing with A's. All she could do now was try and study the best she could. "Kiana, do you know the answer?" She hesitated, thinking. "Is it negative sine?" Her teacher nodded, pleased with the answer. Kiana breathed a sigh of relief. If she got this right, she could pass. After class was over, she did her other classes like art and music. Another class she went to was to help her gain control with her mutant powers. When she was getting use to the class, she was able to change a steel pipe into her instrument, the flute, and other objects. This was just small achievements aside from what she could really do with larger objects. Last time in class, Kiana was able to change a large boulder into motorcycle and then into separate items like a katana, a spear, and other weapons, Why? To see how well she could change one mass into many other objects. Also because she was fascinated by weapons that were used in Chinese and Japanese history. Today she learned how to change object while she and it were in motion. Like when she threw a ball, she could concentrate on the object and change it in mid air, like into a spear, and then into water so that the weapon would be rendered harmless. Tomorrow she would do the same, but try with multiple items in motion. "You're learning how to grasp control of your powers very quickly, Kiana. This is great progress!" "Thank you, teacher!" That made her day completely. After picking up the mail and going into her dorm, Kiana threw herself onto the bed and began picking through the mail. "Yeah a package from Katherine. Yes! More Laurel Hamilton books!!! Now that will complete my Anita Blake: Vampire Hunter novel series!... What else?" She put her books on her bookshelf and saw a letter from home. Kiana opened it, seeing a small letter from her mother. After reading the first few sentences, she blinked a few times and tears fell onto the script, creating ink spots. Kiana grabbed her coat, a cropped midnight blue jacket with black glitter wings on the back, and ran out the door. The letter was left on the bed, with just these sentences. Kiana, Please come home. Your father was involved in a terrible car accident, and is a coma. He's going to make it, according to the doctors but the after-effects might change that. Katherine is helping out at the moment, but we need you here. Please hurry. Love, Mom. |
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erin - July 20, 2007 05:18 PM (GMT)
Okay, there is a little trouble I'm having here:
Next: the profile is not in the proper template - none of the information that is supposed to be in bold is, and it seems you just took out all of the tags completely. Did you use the profile from the coded section?
Next: she would not belong to a pack or coven, so you can leave that blank. The title though, is she a rogue warrior? Werewolf slayer? Or just a regular human? I should have specified that so that's not your fault.
Next: Please remove all of the brackets, which are [text].
Next: You have not filled out the dress style portion of the profile. Also, for the likes and dislikes, you do not have the minimum of ten that I ask for, along with your history. The history should have about 15 bullets, not 9. Just add a couple of more to be more detailed.
Next: Could you possibly run this through word? I saw a bit of spelling errors and it'd be nice if they could be fixed.
Finally: The topic title needs to be edited. You should be able to do that when editing your post, if not I can fix it. It should be: ZHOU, hikari
It seems like a lot, but I believe you can do it. Just do these and you should be set.
Thanks a lot for joining.
Next: the profile is not in the proper template - none of the information that is supposed to be in bold is, and it seems you just took out all of the tags completely. Did you use the profile from the coded section?
Next: she would not belong to a pack or coven, so you can leave that blank. The title though, is she a rogue warrior? Werewolf slayer? Or just a regular human? I should have specified that so that's not your fault.
Next: Please remove all of the brackets, which are [text].
Next: You have not filled out the dress style portion of the profile. Also, for the likes and dislikes, you do not have the minimum of ten that I ask for, along with your history. The history should have about 15 bullets, not 9. Just add a couple of more to be more detailed.
Next: Could you possibly run this through word? I saw a bit of spelling errors and it'd be nice if they could be fixed.
Finally: The topic title needs to be edited. You should be able to do that when editing your post, if not I can fix it. It should be: ZHOU, hikari
It seems like a lot, but I believe you can do it. Just do these and you should be set.
Thanks a lot for joining.
Hikari Zhou - July 20, 2007 06:33 PM (GMT)
I edited the things you needed me to do, and I can't change the title.. So you're going to have to help me out with that.. ^^6. and thanks!
Danica Jade Caprice - July 20, 2007 06:46 PM (GMT)
Thank you very much for fixing these things.
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